FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 65

Wow. Loved this update

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Wow. Loved this update

Am pleased that you continue to enjoy the tale, Sister.

Originally posted by: Sofna

Ohmydz I came across this story last night and finished it by now.

Absolutely loving it and eager to read how RaghVi happen..❤️

That's a lot of reading, Sister! Almost 40,000 words by my count.

But I'm pleased you are enjoying it. Now go and rest those pretty eyes :-)

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow pallavi ready to get married and raghav will know soon uff the drama will start then

Uff the drama!! Yes. Raghav finally decides to risk his heart---and charming-handsome-flirty-Rakesh-from-London turns up. What bad luck!

Originally posted by: hararnav

Arrey raghav , move fast.... there's one kerchief already to reserve his seat..

First move by rakesh(kiss doesn't count raghav sir:-)).

I want Pallavi to enjoy the attention she gets from perspective males...she deserves it after living life of a widow unnecessarily for so long...

I love your comments, Sister.

And---I am in agreement with you. I want to see Pallavi wooed. I'm sure Mandhar was excessively charming---but he was a fake lover. I want Pallavi to feel desired. I'm not sure Raghav can meet that mark. But Rakesh seems to be a natural. hehe

Originally posted by: hailly

Just fished reading the new chapter I love it. Looking forward to the next update.

I liked reading the Chandni written by you, i hope you will finish that story sometime in future I liked to see how the story ended though.

I am happy to read your current story, I will read Palavi till the end.

Thank you for your faith in my work, Sister. kiss-kiss

Means a lot to me when I hear that non-MHRW viewers are reading PALLAVI because they enjoyed my previous tales.

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

🙌 🙌

I read both of the updates together

Ready to be mine -wow!!

Loved reading his pov about how he felt and why he took those actions. This is going to be beautiful

Ahh Rakesh is interested for sure.... let’s see what happen at the shop, what if Rao turned up there after he find out from his men that a man is at the shop probably flirting with Pallavi

hehe

Pallavi goes from old-maid-widow to a love-triangle in the space of one day. Woo-hooo!

I'd like to see Raghav jealous. As Anjali said, he has enjoyed the reputation of being unattainable---and now he will have to make an effort. But will he? Or will he back off? Is he one of those men who disdains what he cannot have? Or does he roll up his sleeves and go after what he wants with all his power and might?

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Episodes 26-29

A fleeting kiss 😎 .

One mere kiss on the lips was enough to tell Pallavi that she wants to live a life with a partner . It was Enough for Raghav to decide after years of not giving his heart to someone cos of his mother that he wanted her with absolute certainty . These lines -

“Free? For?”

“Free to be mine.”

They took my heart ❤️ ...

Ohh! If this isn't one of best tales I have read. I can unabashedly say I would also like to be a part of this kind of kiss which can elicit such feelings☺️ and gives such enlightenments😆 .

So the story is moving fast now with Kirti & Amma moving in Falaknuma.

Farhad'll try his best to get the matters clear from Vivek soon for his Anna. Also, I just realized Raghav kind of confessed infront of Farhad how important she is now. That just makes for one of the best FaRag moments for me now🤗. There're bound to be interactions of many with many now. If Kirti keeps visiting the shop or asks Pallavi to visit her at home, Amma'll also meet her. And we have Rakesh now, please tell me Raghav might visit her shop or see them together & in his polite way remove him from his way 🤣 .

My crazy mind's running rife with the recent chapters now 😳 .

I agree with you, Sister.

For a fleeting butterfly kiss it sure delivered a big punch. hehe

I, too, am curious how Raghav will respond to Rakesh-from-London. Will he send him back on the very next flight Hyderabad-Heathrow nonstop? Hmmm . . .

Originally posted by: Foreversonam21

In awe of the mischievous author who works so hard and gives us an episode everyday. Thank you.

The characters may be stubborn or hard headed but they know what they want and are honest enough to admit it to themselves. That's the reason why I stopped watching the show. Your AU is so much fun!

"Free to be mine." Is going to be my favorite line.... For now.

Thank you, Sister. I appreciate your generous words.

I’m sorry I haven’t been replying to your chapters. I can assure you I have read every chapter. I wait for your update, I’m so glad you are updating regularly. I am loving this story so far. I especially loved that a little peck on the lips made such an impact on both of them. Even in your writing you can sense the chemistry between them, sometimes this can be hard to come across in a story. I honestly cannot wait to find out how this story unfolds. Please keep updating regularly, I’m enjoying your ff very much.

Shaz x