FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 62

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

The first time I read your FF was on IPKKND3 when I saw your FF here I started reading it right away, loved the story so far, liked the way how to emotions of the character expressed in a realistic way, looking forward to the next update.

How nice to see you here, Sister.

Not too many of us enjoyed -CHANDNI- but I enjoyed writing it and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

And yes---I like to see characters behave in a realistic manner. And make reasonable choices. Hope you continue to read and enjoy -PALLAVI-.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update. People come to teach lesson in life and raghav was one to make her realise that she has a choice to spend a content and fulfilling life.

Can’t wait to read next chapter.

Precisely, Sister. Very good point. People come to teach us things---and for Pallavi I feel it was important that the person to teach her about her needs and her life is someone very distant from the normal Deshmukh circle.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Glad she acknowledged her attraction and was not too bashful

I find it distasteful when people try to portray physical attraction as a non entity or dirty whereas it is one beautiful imp thing that can enhance a relationship

Three cheers for that ☺️

I also like Krishna ..she seems a gem to help pallu move in the right direction ..always seems to give her positive affirmations

Yes! It was important to me that she recognizes her own desire to have a full life---before she shares it with Raghav. The realisation must come from her first not have it be imposed upon her from a man.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ReemShah

If someone asks for a re-tale/remake (since re-tale is actually not a word) of the show MHRW, then this FF would be it.

This FF is basically the modern version of the show. The actions and thoughts are realistic and practical and is something a person is ought to do when faced with that situation.

From the fleeting kiss between Raghav and Pallavi to their eye contact to moments of silence between them to Farhad's behaviour with Pallavi to Pallavi's decision of remarrying shows how independent each character is.

The mutual love and respect between Kirti and Pallavi for each other and how Kirti shows confides in Pallavi about her current dilemma between Raghav and Amma. Pallavi empthaises with her but does not voice it actually shows how understanding she is because no one would pity from someone after telling them their problems.

It was sweet how Raghav sent coconut water for Pallavi through Kirti.

I really liked that Raghav and Pallavi decided to act on their mutual attraction this early instead of irritating and fighting with the other person to hide their true feelings. I don't know if it was actually the vunerablility of the situation on their attraction along with their closeness or just pure attraction they decided to kiss on.

The sweet bond between Krishna and Pallavi is so cute and how Pallavi tells she kissed Raghav Rao as soon as their little discussion on the shop was over was actually like screaming to a best friend- "OMG...I just kissed my crush". Krishna is one heck of a friend as she helps Pallavi in straightening out her thoughts and in some sense helped her realized her desire to have someone in her life as a partner although she denies that person to be Raghav.

Pallavi's decision on remarrying or actually marrying for the second time but this time legally was quite brave and independent of her..although she gave the whole credit to Raghav.

You have even highlighted the concept of age difference in a relationship. Raghav is a decade older than Pallavi here...and the maximumage difference society likes in a relationship is 5-7 years. This is a social barrier present.

I would really like to know Raghav's take on the whole thing.

Wow! What a generous comment, Sister.

I really appreciate what you say about the characters responding in a realistic and rational manner. I can understand that a tv-serial might have to go more broad and more dramatic to get the millions of viewers that is essential in their business. But for the few dozens of us reading this story, we can appreciate a story that is relatable. Pallavi is a young woman who has been forced to adopt a lifestyle by Baba which could be tragic. When I was writing on the weekend, I was struck that if Baba has his own way---Pallavi stays at Deshmukh Niwas, single and celibate, from age 24 on. Imagine what she will feel at 44, at 54, at 64. She will be bitter and angry. She will be official aunty to Mansi and Nikhil's children---having never experienced the love of a man and the right to raise her own family.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I need to know of she's free tone mine - epic line

Waiting to see if he will woo her or bull doze her into it

So something will unravel at that birthday party he will go to about pallu past due to the ring kya ?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Why Raghav isn't satisfied with "she is a widow" truth, what exactly he's looking for to know that she's free to be his?

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Posted: 4 years ago

"I want her, She's not a Deshmukh,Free to be mine" these one liners by Raghav shows his possesive side.

She had become an indispensable person for him. I am quite sure wheels are turning in Raghav's head regarding Pallavi being a widow- because it is not often when a person says- they poisoned their partner- that too that freely.

I kind of really wanted a little more description of the time he went to Pallavi's house and how he felt there because I think that is one of the first times they have been close to each other leaving the club incident....that reminds me did Pallavi return the jacket yet?🤔

I loved Raghav's point of view and what about Mrs.Raje--i am thinking she might be connected to Pallavi( I am telling this now because I read the whole FF again)

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Posted: 4 years ago

'I want her.'

'...he recognized her as one who had become to him a necessity.'

'She's not a Deshmukh.'

'Free to be mine.'


I keep reading these lines again and again and I can't believe how much more accepting Raghav is being of his feelings. When I waited for Raghav's POV I never expected this, my mind is blown. Kudos to you for this update, I can't wait to see how Pallavi is gonna take Raghav Rao wanting to make her his. 😄😄😄

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update,

Raghav Rao does not wait. It will be interesting to see how this plays out as Pallavi is planning on running away from raghav and marry someone else and he is ready to law her his

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Posted: 4 years ago

EPISODE 29

Our Heroine was parking the scooter at Deshmukh Niwas when her phone rang. She expected it was Aayi calling to ask when she would be home. To which Pallavi would now have the pleasure of saying that she was standing right outside the front door waiting for her to open it.

However—as she lifted the phone from her purse, the screen showed her it was Raghav Rao. Her heart thumped unevenly in her chest. Commanding her voice to appear equanimous, she connected the call, and said, “Mr Rao?”

It was not Raghav Rao.

Kirti’s voice came through. “Sorry, Didi—it’s me. Kirti. I’m borrowing my brother’s phone.”

“Hi. Is everything ok?” she asked, silently admonishing herself for finding Kirti’s voice a disappointment.

Kirti continued, “We wanted to tell you that Amma’s surgery was a success.”

Pallavi sighed with gratification. “I’m so pleased. Thank you for letting me know.”

“Thank you—really!—thank you for the way you rushed to the hospital when you learnt that we needed blood. I’ll never forget that,” Kirti said.

“I was glad to help.”

“I’m staying at my brother’s until Amma is well. But I’ll come to the shop to see you and Krishna in the next few days. Bye for now.” With that Kirti rang off.

Her mind reflecting on the events of the morning made Pallavi somewhat deaf to the noise coming from within the house. As she stepped through the doors, she saw that the main hall was full of Deshmukhs and Chettys. They were in a state of merriment, speaking in excited tones. They were arguing in a good-natured manner whether Marathi traditions should rule the wedding—or should it be Telugu-style.

She called out decisively from the door, “The bride is Marathi and so must the wedding be.”

All faces turned to meet her and the Deshmukhs cried out jubilantly.

A man she didn’t recognize said boldly, “Rahul will be acquiescing to Mansi’s demands for seven lifetimes—so at least allow him this one final wish.”

To this Rahul protested, “Wait! What? Acquiescing for seven lifetimes—!?”

Mansi caught Pallavi’s arm and pulled her into the room. “Come and meet Rahul’s cousin, Rakesh, from London.”

Pallavi greeted the man who had spoken earlier. “Hello Rakesh-from-London,” she chimed.

He held her eyes and said, “Hi, Pallavi. You are even more beautiful in person.”

Unaccustomed to such a direct compliment from a man, Pallavi blushed and was speechless.

Rakesh continued, “I’m sorry. I’ve embarrassed you. I saw you in the engagement video Rahul forwarded.”

“You London boys are very fast,” Mansi teased.

Rakesh responded to Mansi and fortunately the attention lifted from her.

Asha Chetty was standing not far from them. Pallavi offered her a smile but Asha turned away without acknowledging her. It was a clear rebuff—and all Pallavi could attribute it to was their accidental meeting yesterday at Koffee Kahani. Had Asha considered the situation improper?

The Chettys did not stay long. But before they left, Rakesh asked Pallavi if he could come by DSE tomorrow. He wanted to purchase some sarees for gifts, he said—and begged her guidance.

Later as she was preparing for bed, Aayi entered her room.

“That Rakesh boy is handsome, isn’t he?” Aayi ventured.

Pallavi was seated at the dresssing table running a hairbrush through her hair. She remarked, “He’s certainly forward.”

Aayi took the hairbrush out of Pallavi’s hands and took on the task. “He paid a great deal of attention to you. What was he speaking to you about at the end when they were at the door?”

Pallavi shrugged, “He wants to buys some sarees. Said he would come to the shop tomorrow.”

“That sounds like an excuse to see you,” Aayi beamed.

“Or to buy a dozen sarees for his dozen English girlfriends at a greatly discounted price,” Pallavi laughed, meeting Aayi’s eyes in the mirror.

Aayi ignored her remark, and said, “Say the word and I’ll speak to Ashaji.”

“Two weddings for the price of one?” Pallavi continued in this jokey vein.

“I’m being perfectly serious, Pallavi.”

“I know, Aayi.”

“You must marry someday.”

“I know, Aayi.”

“And the longer you wait the more difficult it will be.”

“I know, Aayi”

Aayi was so accustomed to having Pallavi reject her instigations on the subject of her remarrying that it took a moment for her to realize that Pallavi had agreed to her last three statements. She caught her by the shoulders and asked, her tone incredulous, “You agree?”

Pallavi allowed her head to fall back onto Aayi’s bosom, and said, “Yes. I’m ready to meet suitors.”

Aayi’s throat made a sound of happiness, and Pallavi saw that her eyes moistened with tears.

“But not until after Mansi’s wedding—and not until after the family is informed about Mandhar. All of that must be settled first. When I meet a potential suitor, I want to meet him as a woman who had an unfortunate experience—not as Mandhar’s widow.”

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