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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Beautifullies

It was such a sweet OS. I thought Brij will be difficult to handle and maybe there will be separation but the way you changed Brij thinking was sweet. The most important thing should the love between the couple, if it is not there then no relation can work out and it was nice that Brij understood that no one can love Geet more than Maan and Geet sirf Maan ki hai.

My favorite line was sleeping classes changed into drooling classes, that was too funny even while writing about it I am smiling.

Waise Maan and Geet ki love story toh woh teacher ki wajah se start hui.

Would have love to read more about their moments while they were in love or in the process of falling in love.

But this was sweet light hearted and fun OS to read.


Thank you for writing it and entertaining us.

Hey! beautiful

First of all thanks for the such a sweet and heartwarming comment 🤗

I am really glad that you like this Maaneet os.

I totally agree with you that love is imperative for any relationship and when it comes to love it becomes as essential as oxygen.

Here brij had just been a protective brother and when he learned Maan is the one for geet he gave his assent too. (Saved him from our curses)

Yeah some credit could be given to Mishra sir too but had it been Brij Geet would have asked the question (in spite of hug) went back and both of them just focused on their studies.

And for sleeping and drooling class I enjoyed writing it too.

I would love to convert this to a Ff but I already have 4 running ff one of which is locked due to inactivity 😭so dekhte hain if this would get the chance or not.

Once again thanks for just a sweet comment.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Nice and wonderful story.

He changed her lakeerein

Brij is nice and knows that no one loves Geet more than Maan

Keep writing such stories

People certainly will believe in love than their lakeerien

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Creampuff

What a sweet story !!!

I loved how maan filled her partition

& Brij blessed them .

I love ❤️ happy ending !!

Thank you for the story

thanks dear for reading and liking it🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Nice and wonderful story.

He changed her lakeerein

Brij is nice and knows that no one loves Geet more than Maan

Keep writing such stories

People certainly will believe in love

Edited by latecomer - 4 years ago

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