Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 8

Originally posted by: Riya_Mehta

Amazing update. Beautiful one❤️

Thank you ❤️

This is such an amazing story! I love the relationship between Raavi and Shiva and how it is progressing ❤️

Also love Krish and all his one liners 😆 Can’t wait to read more!!

Cant wait for the next part!! Update soon💓

Just read all 3 chapters and can't wait for next chapter ❤️

*edited*

If you read chapter 2 beginning part hearing galliyan (unplugged) song it gives you an unexplainable feeling (it did for me), maybe its the slow music or the lyrics or maybe both, I don't know but overall it was a really good read... Do continue soon

Love, Neha ❤️

I read all three chapters in one go! I am in love with this story. I love how you've taken your time in developing the characters by giving a sense of their mind space. She became his tree and he her diary - what a beautiful development.

I saw that your title is based on a song. Would love if you could link it.

I can't wait to see where this goes.

Love,

Abhi 🌼

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

This is such an amazing story! I love the relationship between Raavi and Shiva and how it is progressing ❤️

Also love Krish and all his one liners 😆 Can’t wait to read more!!

Thank you ❤️

Update is coming soon

Originally posted by: dejavuu

Cant wait for the next part!! Update soon💓

Thanks❤️

Will do

Originally posted by: howler

Just read all 3 chapters and can't wait for next chapter ❤️

*edited*

If you read chapter 2 beginning part hearing galliyan (unplugged) song it gives you an unexplainable feeling (it did for me), maybe its the slow music or the lyrics or maybe both, I don't know but overall it was a really good read... Do continue soon

Love, Neha ❤️

Thanks, Neha ❤️

That's something you suggested, I am definitely gonna try.

Keep loving

Originally posted by: Abhipyaarhua

I read all three chapters in one go! I am in love with this story. I love how you've taken your time in developing the characters by giving a sense of their mind space. She became his tree and he her diary - what a beautiful development.

I saw that your title is based on a song. Would love if you could link it.

I can't wait to see where this goes.

Love,

Abhi 🌼

Thanks Abhi

Glad you are loving it.

I will try to link the song here, not sure actuallly.

But I do plan to describe the song with our ShiVi

Let's see.

keep loving❤️

Originally posted by: 7APK

Awesome 😍😘😍😘

Thank you❤️