RaghVi OS : Long Time No See! - Page 3

Originally posted by: gata

OH WOW !!!! just when i decide I am team RR you show me this fabulous Pallavi .

RR tearing up while making love ,his heart ovrflowing with all the emotions that he can now allow himself to feel and express.Feeling that he is loved and reciprocating it ,shades oF the old RR ,where he takes advantage of her naivete of not tellling her tht she cant get pregnant right away(wink)

would love to see RR dressed the way you made him,like all ur RR this one too is irresistable , but this OS surely belongs to PALLAVI ,laying claim to what is hers!

hmmm ........ maybe he wants a baby girl after those 2 hellions (just being greedy )

THANK YOU SO MUCH for this you write so beautifully , so much is conveyed through all those beautiful lines awaiting your next whenever , lots of hugs

do let meknow ur name dear

My focus is always on RR... but don’t know how it turned out to be Pallavi dominated😆

I just love him in casuals... the fact is no secret now😎... I’m glad you liked it too..

RR will never loose his essence... that little roguishness will always be there no matter how well Pallavi polish him...

My name is VIHU only... Don’t ask me meaning, I’m clueless myself 🤣

Toral, I’m so glad you liked it... Keep supporting with you lovely comments 🤗

Originally posted by: cozy_vibes

Oo god vihu your damn man.. i just don't how to describe this piece of writing. you got a such a variety in your writing. There was anger, passion, thrust, pain and love everything

Thank you sweetie ❤️

You’re kind and your words even kinder😳

Originally posted by: masin

Ohmygoodness! My heart!

I LOVE how you intertwine all your pieces, especially this one with the twins (that was my most favourite story of yours). Raghav and Pallavi's dialogues were fabulous, as usual. Their banter and their understanding along with bits about his family and Farhad's antics, it all came together so well! I adore how you portray Raghav in your writing. He is a thorough gentleman who isn't ashamed of being flawed and rough around the edges.

Gosh, I would love to read more about their life with twins, how he comes back home, how he reacts to Keerthi's baby... anything and everything from your train of thought and I'm fully on board! ❤️

Thank you so much dear ❤️

You know I’m so obsessed with Raghav that I imagine him... his thoughts... his feelings and weave rest of the story around him... All thanks to Sai’s portrayal of Raghav and his gorgeous looks that all I have to do is close my eyes and I see so many different shades of Raghav... it really helps

I’ll definitely write more... Hope I manage to keep up with your high expectations 🤗

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah! Look who do we have back with a FABULOUS OS yet again. I was hoping that I'll get to read something by you this weekend . 3 years! The vagabond roamed without my Pallavi for 3 fu*king years.

Anyways, good for me cos I got to read this piece then. I take it that Raghav's look here is taken from his Insta posts where he actually looks like the 26-yr guy that he is 😎 .

I loved the confrontation on Pallavi's end so much. I adore this Pallavi that you have built. How she kinda chides him that she's disappointed with his means now 😆 . Ofcourse love how you mentioned Farhad searching for his Anna as well ❤️

Thought of anything on my previous idea yet 😊 ?

I don’t remember the insta post... but I really wanted the break to do him some good... If he’d hardened more then the whole separation thing would have been for naught...

Thank you for the lovely praises... 🤗

Let’s do it... I’m all set to write about what you suggested... I’ll pm you👍🏼

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

I read this and realised I had a lot to catch up regarding your writing 😆

Loved reading this piece, even though the back story eluded me. I wondered why Raghav was living separately from Pallavi for over three years and they had a sort of open marriage? The opening scene reminded me of Thor in End Game and the drunk mess he became in his depression. Could totally visualise it!

Pallavi is so brazen here 🤣 Just walking in and demanding that she wants a baby from her absentee husband and sticking to her guns even after his snarky remarks. This was hilarious. Found myself rooting for her 👏

And the hot stuff where he places Pallavi’s hand over himself. Oh my my. Aag laga di tumne 🔥 That was super sexy! I could picture him trying to resist but unable to bear the sight of his wife’s hot little body

Perfect Sunday read ❤️

OMG... Look who’s here after a long time...

And you complimenting me on this one had made it really special for me...

Thank you so much... You know, I am so thankful for you suggesting me not to post it immediately after I’m done writing it... I give myself a little break and then read it with the readers point of view... And it turns out all dolled up after that final editing... It has helped a lot, I can feel it even myself.. Thank you❤️

I haven’t seen much Marvel but Thor in his depressed phase was painful to watch... 💔

Sometimes a girl gotta take things in her hands especially when it was her stubbornness that messed things up in the first place... And as I mentioned in my last OS... Bible says love is not proud and it doesn’t keep record of wrongdoings... So Pallavi left the pride behind and Raghav decided to embrace forgiveness over grudges...❤️

I really wish you’d read the previous OS : Adieu, My love... if you have time for it... do let me know if you liked it🤗

Wow! I mean this is so freaking amazing!❤️

How u manage to write so good Vihu?

Totally in love with this one! 😳

RaghVi, their talks❤️

And the Raghav here❤️

It was bliss to read❤️

Waiting for your new story already

And adding this fab piece to index⭐️

Of course, I will read it, darling 🤗 Is it a Prequel to this one? I think that will tie up the background nicely.

I am so glad you found the advice useful. I struggle with over editing while writing the first draft of a story, so been trying to practice doing things with the flow without bothering about how it sounds. The piece can always be edited and embellished later 😆

You are doing really well. I liked the bold writing around the sexy scene ❤️ Only wish that it was longer. Don’t shy away from getting into specifics. The more you practice mature scenes, the more easily they will flow.

How are things going at home? Hope you all are staying safe. It’s pretty crazy out there yaar 😔

Originally posted by: __VIHU

OMG... Look who’s here after a long time...

And you complimenting me on this one had made it really special for me...

Thank you so much... You know, I am so thankful for you suggesting me not to post it immediately after I’m done writing it... I give myself a little break and then read it with the readers point of view... And it turns out all dolled up after that final editing... It has helped a lot, I can feel it even myself.. Thank you❤️

I haven’t seen much Marvel but Thor in his depressed phase was painful to watch... 💔

Sometimes a girl gotta take things in her hands especially when it was her stubbornness that messed things up in the first place... And as I mentioned in my last OS... Bible says love is not proud and it doesn’t keep record of wrongdoings... So Pallavi left the pride behind and Raghav decided to embrace forgiveness over grudges...❤️

I really wish you’d read the previous OS : Adieu, My love... if you have time for it... do let me know if you liked it🤗

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Wow! I mean this is so freaking amazing!❤️

How u manage to write so good Vihu?

Totally in love with this one! 😳

RaghVi, their talks❤️

And the Raghav here❤️

It was bliss to read❤️

Waiting for your new story already

And adding this fab piece to index⭐️

Aww... thank you so much Lee Min Ho...❤️

It’s all RR... Just one look at him and all my fantasies come to life in my mind... It is not that great but I feel humbled by all the love and appreciation you people shower on my work...🤗

You’re such an angel... I was about to notify you about it... Thanks again...

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Well that’s not fair... I was waiting for you to review the mature part of this story( it wasn’t much... but I wrote it the first time and wasn’t quite confident about it) as your way of writing mature content is the best I’ve read so far... subtle yet toe curling ☺️

Please let me know how can I improve... I’m waiting for genuine criticism from you..

Oh Vihu, it was absolutely HOT! I was going to write this first but then decided against it because I thought I don’t need to tell you that plus the twin cuteness took over me

Well there’s nothing I would want you to change about the way you write! The intimate scenes, they were so well written, with choicest of words and leave so much for our imagination, in a good way! It doesn’t feel incomplete but keeps you hanging in there, falling in love with them. The best part is you don’t fail to highlight the complex human emotions alongside. I am in awe how beautifully you understand it! Your every os makes me realise this again and again. Special mention to the part where Raghav is trying to tell himself to go slow, trying to protect her.❤️

well just to hint at how good you are at this, I slept after reading this os and I woke up hours later thinking about it! Yours are the stories which I remember by heart, at all times because they leave such a deep impact.❤️

PS- I also love Raghav more in casuals, so that was a treat.

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Of course, I will read it, darling 🤗 Is it a Prequel to this one? I think that will tie up the background nicely.

I am so glad you found the advice useful. I struggle with over editing while writing the first draft of a story, so been trying to practice doing things with the flow without bothering about how it sounds. The piece can always be edited and embellished later 😆

You are doing really well. I liked the bold writing around the sexy scene ❤️ Only wish that it was longer. Don’t shy away from getting into specifics. The more you practice mature scenes, the more easily they will flow.

How are things going at home? Hope you all are staying safe. It’s pretty crazy out there yaar 😔

It wasn’t supposed to be a prequel actually... But when that came out people felt it kind of ended with a cliffhanger... So I ended up writing this to make up for the angsty read and give it kind of closure...

That thing you told me worked like a magic trick... and has reduced the time consumed due to abrupt halts when I’m unsure about something... Now all sails smooth..👍🏼

Going into specifics🤣... I was afraid I’ll end up making a cake of myself. I’ve read a lot of mature stuff but writing it is a whole new level of stress... I didn’t delved deeper cuz I wanted to prevent tagging it as a mature read... It prevents unregistered readers from viewing the post... Have felt frustrated myself when I was new to IF and wasn’t a registered user.. But I tried to get my point across as implicitly as I could..😆

I’ll add the mature tag next time and try to be more explicit... Afterall practice makes a man and woman perfect 😛

Epidemic is taking a toll on people, here in UP. I won’t go into gruesome details but suffering is all around. Two days complete lockdown( weekend) and night curfew.. but election campaign are totally unaffected .😡

Fortunately, we are safe and I hope the same for you🤗