Shivi TS: Parwah Hai [Updated Part 2 on PG 9 08/05] - Page 5

Beautiful update😊

Interesting take on kidnapping track

Shivi's feelings are changing❤️

Raavi is more vocal about it while Shiva is hiding it😊

Loved the way Shivi escaped

Krish is very cute, loved the conversation with Shiva

Waiting for next

Really wish we had this possessiveness from Raavi on the show too after the kidnapping ❤️

Loved it Mehak!

Originally posted by: Foxii

First chapter was nice :) Krish is so cute

Shivi have accepted eachother

Hey...

Thank you so much❤!!!! Yeah indeed he is.. our cupid for shivi.. yeah they do even in the show they do but alas misunderstandings ruins some moments..

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Lovely! I am loving these alternate takes on the kidnapping track that I am reading here. They all are beautiful and I keep wishing this should have happened.

I loved how Shiva managed to get them out and Raavi managed to get them home safely! Working as a team. Faraq toh pasta hai, dono ko. Just love how Raavi's more vocal about it. And Krish, love how he's there for them! He's our secret cupid.

Can't wait for the next part when the two will be around each other in their consciousness after this track.

P.s. loved the bike ride flashback. Hahaha how the times have changed when he wouldn't let her even touch him the last time she sat on his bike and now, he wanted her to hug him. ❤️

Hey..

Thank you so much❤!!!! Yeah I wish we had alternative ending to the kidnapping track in the show too..

Shivi indeed are a team #Team_Tom_and_Jerry .. I ship them with this hashtag now !!!.. and yeah Krish is our cupid for shivi.. wish to see this in the show too..

Yeah!! I am working on the next part.. it would indeed be special I promise.. will update soon.. may be in a day or two..

Their bond is special!! I loved writing their battles.. especially the bike scene with the part where he teased her for holding hands..

Originally posted by: Namita-M

Nice update. Please do continue soon.

Hey..

Thank you so much ❤!! Will update soon maybe in a day or two...

Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

nooooo why did u stop

plz update soon and make it long plzzzzz

Hey..

Thank you so much ❤!! Don't worry i will update one more chapter... and will update soon may be in a day or two.. i am working on it and i intent to finish it as soon as possible.. it will be a special chapter.. sure i would keep in mind to make it long..

Originally posted by: Adorable_lover

Beautiful update

Thank you so much ❤!!

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

Ahhh I absolutely loved this chapter <3

I keep hoping that something similar to this will happen in the show but alas that will probably not happen for a long time. I will live vicariously through your story.

I love how Raavi is being so protective about Shiva and fighting with everyone for him. I can't wait to see more about Shiva's reaction after hearing about how Raavi cared for him.

Update soon jaan 🤗

Hey..

Thank you so much ❤!! Yeah I too hoped to see it.. well if not this then i definitely didn't think about the misunderstanding part.. it shouldn't have been included. Thank you it means a lot..

I loved making Raavi like that.. Shiva loved it when he heard about it!! He was smiling, he was that level happy..

will update soon peaches.. maybe in a day or two .. it would be a special chapter ...

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

lovely update! DevTa are irritating as usual 😆

loved how shivi accepted each other.. raavi's care for shiva and her sherni avatar for him were great to see ❤️

do continue soon!

Thank you so much ❤!! They are annoying to me especially the characterization of the show, but I tired to change that a bit here..

Aww thank you, glad you liked it.. even i loved writing those parts..

Will update soon maybe in a day or two.. it will be special..

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update😊

Interesting take on kidnapping track

Shivi's feelings are changing❤️

Raavi is more vocal about it while Shiva is hiding it😊

Loved the way Shivi escaped

Krish is very cute, loved the conversation with Shiva

Waiting for next

Thank you so much ❤!!.. glad you liked it.. yeah their feelings are changing or maybe we can say that they are realising it..

hahaha yeah raavi is expressive and shiva.. well he is vocal in taking stand.. both complete each other..

I wished to see that in the show too.. but alas..

Yeah Krish is my cupid for shivi..

Will update soon maybe in a day or two and it will be a special chapter..