Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 4

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Tere nautanki toh zindagi bhar jhel na padega mujhe

Ayy haaai 😍😍 Love it! And also their bickering during the engagement 😂

Thank you

Actually can't imagine Shiva answering straightly especially with Raavi🤪

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

Wow, beautiful part 2. You really have a way with words when your describing their emotions.

They're learning to be with each other. But I like that some things never change..

Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: vivpri

Loved the second part too! 🥰 Thank you so much 🙏

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Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice part.. There r trying tobe with each other for family. Guess bothlove dhara a lot

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And Dhara is literary the heart of the family.

Originally posted by: Foxii

Great part, raavi had the opportunity to explain herself and her behavior infront of the family.

I liked how he agreed in a taunting way :)

Krish and his onliners... haha Galat gehmi kyu pal rahe ho

Please continue :)

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Happy to know your views

Originally posted by: Jazzsingh20

Such a lovely update pliz continue writing it feels like im watching their engagement waiting for next update ❤❤❤

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So glad you could connect with it 😳

Originally posted by: Harinivas

Such a lovely part

Loved the exchange between SHIVI

Cant wait for their understanding to grow into love

I am curious to see where you go with this

Lovely

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Lovely to know your thoughts'

Hope you enjoy the further story

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aaah, loved this part even more than the previous. ❤️ The way you wrote this part, especially ShiVI scenes, the emotions felt tangible.

And I love ShiVi even more! Inspite of the heartbreak, respect for Raavi for having clearity to ensure that the history doesn't repeat itself. Even if it meant sacrificing her happiness. Her response was very mature and in between finding out the truth and this conversation, she grew up. And Shiva understood her well! Both the said and the unsaid.

Loved the Ghat scene. And you even managed to give us our dose of Krish's one liners. 😂 Can't wait to read what's next!

Thank you😳

So glad you loved my interpretation of their perspective.

well, Krish is the oxygen of PS🤪

Originally posted by: mirai07

Hi!! Loved both the parts!! Absolutely amazing.❤️

The line - aap dono hume pal rahe the thik hai, par galat femi kyu pal rahe ho? by Krish made me laugh out loud...especially when Ravi-Shiva started to continue arguing!!

I hope you will continue it soon.😉

Take care!

Thank you,

Glad you loved it 😳

Will try to update soon

Hello! Can you please please please update the next part for this soon-ish?