Raghvi OS: Pieces of His Heart - Page 2

Amazingly written.. its just so nice and sweet

Especially the last scene... hope we would see more of your writing

Originally posted by: SONIA441

This is so Amazing❤️!!! And you say, it's a First Try, I don't believe you😉.

This was such a fun, tension -free, simple cafe scene with both the siblings-party involved.

And the end with a kiss on the cheek was . Thanks for trying & continue with your trials so we keep getting such subtle scenes😎

Thanks for reading and giving your feedback. It is actually my first time writing a story and including dialogues. I am used to writing articles which I wrote lastly in school.

And i am glad you liked it❤️

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

This is beautiful 😍❤️

You write so well🤗

Loved reading it keep writing

Thank you so much❤️

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Loved it

Thank you for reading this😊

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

humne aap ki sweet kiss imagine bhi kr liya...haye☺️ yaha sb master mind writers hai bs theme do likhne ki chamak jate hai.." you are looking beautiful" bs ye maine sun liya☺️...ye kiss wale end chha gyi ladki tum❤️

Thank you so much Hemangi❤️

I really feel happy ki yeh os logon ko acha lag raha hai...and writing ki baat..forum ke writers ki stories padh kar kaise likhna hai samjh aata hai.

I am glad you liked it😊

Originally posted by: Hannaan

Amazingly written.. its just so nice and sweet

Especially the last scene... hope we would see more of your writing

Thank you so much..i am happy everyone liked the last scene because that was my favourite.

Thank you for reading it😊

Hey this is good.

Loved reading it. 😳

That monologue of Raghav was superb

Originally posted by: K_keechu

Hey this is good.

Loved reading it. 😳

That monologue of Raghav was superb

Thank you😊

I really wanted to show the happy memories of Raghav with his family especially his Amma because most flashbacks focused on the event which led to breaking of their family but not much to events and happiness before that

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Thank you😊

I really wanted to show the happy memories of Raghav with his family especially his Amma because most flashbacks focused on the event which led to breaking of their family but not much to events and happiness before that

Yeah, we can hope that we will get to see those moments. I'm not sure though!

It was beautiful!!

A continuation was what i wanted as well! And it was worth it!!

Keep writing 😋❤