Raghvi OS: Pieces of His Heart

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This is the continuation of "You've Come Down With Love [RaghVi OS] ft. Keerti"- by nautankitadka. Just read it..and this is my first time, so do forgive all the mistakes. Here you go:😊


“Anna, Anna!!” Kirti said, snapping her fingers in front of Raghav’s face, breaking him from another one of his trances for the day.

“Now, what thoughts are you lost in??” Kirti asked, pursuing her lips and trying to get an answer out of him.

Raghav remained silent and started roaming his eyes around the cafeteria again. Seeing his brother this reluctant, she again said “What if Pallavi likes you too Anna?”

Raghav smiled at her sister’s reply and said “It is sometimes better to live your unexpected love than to chase it. Maybe this is not meant to be.”

Just as Kirti was about to retort an answer, her phone started ringing.


There is an aura around him which oozes confidence and power and attracts everyone’s attention whenever he enters a room. As weird as it may sound, she can feel his mere presence, his actions...and the way he was continuously looking at her ever since he entered the cafe gathering the attention of all the female population.

She often had heard “What and if are two words as non-threatening as words can be. But, put them together side-by-side, they have the power to haunt you for the rest of your life” and she believed it to be true...but she was never brave enough to take the risk and cross the what-if line.

As the days passed, it was getting more difficult for her to hide her growing unrequited feeling for Raghav. She was more scared for the fact how Raghav reads her better than she herself and would know what she feels for him.

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“Pallu!!” Mansi said, pulling Pallavi out of her thoughts. Pallavi looked at Mansi questioningly.

“Pallu, dekh, Kirti and her brother are here too. Let’s invite them over to our table.Please” Mansi pouted.

“Yeah di, the more the merrier” Nikhil said excitedly. Pallavi could never deny her siblings anything and nodded her head. Mansi pulled out her phone and called Kirti and kept the phone on speaker.

“Hello Mansi!” Kirti said and Mansi waved to her across the table.

“Put the phone on speaker” Mansi said as she was waving. Once the phone was kept on speaker, Mansi asked “Why don’t you and your brother join us over here at our table. Afterall, more the merrier”.

Raghav said “I’ll stay here. Kirti---” his sentence was interrupted by Mansi “You are invited too Raghav”


Raghav said “I can’t come. Mereko ek jaruri kaam hai”. As Mansi was trying to convince him. “Rehne de Mansi...Ghamandi Rao hai yeh. Uske aane se mohal aur kharab ho jayega..aur woh kisi ki bhi baat nahi sunta” Pallavi interrupted looking across the table to see Raghav’s expression..

Raghav retorted looking back at her into her eyes “Mere aane se logon ko khushi milti hai. Mera presence hi logon ke liye ek honor hota hai Saree ka dukaan”

“Ghamandi Ra--” her sentence was stopped by the laughter of their siblings. Nikhil commented “Look they started their bickering here on phone too” This led to another round of laughter in two tables.


Raghav said “Kirti you go and enjoy with your friends. I’ll stay here”


Kirti stood up and settled at Pallavi’s table. Raghav ordered another plate of medu vadas for himself and started scrolling through this phone. A round of laughter disturbed the buzzing atmosphere of the cafe and Raghav looked up to see it coming from the table of four where his sister is sitting. Seeing the joyous expression on Kirti’s and Pallavi’s face brought a smile to his face. Suddenly Kirti winked at him across the table. Raghav shakes his head at her childishness.


Seeing them all happy, he thought it has been 6 months since his Amma and Kirti are living with him in the Rao Mansion. For the last few years, he has been trying to bring them to his home, and he has finally succeeded. Although Amma has not completely forgiven him, but they are closer to each other now and are on the way to restoring their relationship.

The past still scars their family, but somehow together they have been finally able to cope up with the death of his father, Ajith Rao and his little brother, Arjun Rao. He still shudders thinking about the day of their death, how all the people marched into their family home and killed his baba and Arjun all in the name of righteous deeds. Tears crinkled at the corner of his eyes thinking what a happy family they had been, the family of five, loved and respected by all. His amma, Jaya Rao, had been a keen enthusiast of classical dance, especially Bharatnatyam. He remembered how she used to teach them Bharatnatyam in the house’s courtyard. “Ahh..the courtyard” he reminisced, all the mischief the siblings had done there. How Arjun used to make Amma run after him to make him eat food. He remembered eating Amma's handmade phirni by Amma’s hand, how his mother made him sleep on her lap on the hot summer nights in the courtyard. He smiled sadly thinking how the trio used to play hide and seek in the courtyard and the way Kirti used to escape from them by holding onto Amma’s pallu. He had always been his mother’s favourite out of the trio. He couldn’t help but recall those special nights, where the whole family used to sit together, his and Kirti’s head on Amma’s shoulder and Arjun sitting on her lap.Those nights their father used to play nadaswaram,and he recollected what his father said “Son, I will teach you how to play this the day I find you worthy enough to hold it” but the day sadly never came. They had been this happy family, with him being the eldest, Kirti being the middle one and Arjun being the smallest. Kirti always had been the mischievous one, playing pranks on everyone. She used to hide his books and stationary, Amma’s ghungroo and Arjun’s toys. Until that one fateful day, all the happiness of Rao family was kept at stake and destroyed. A smirk formed on his face thinking about how his Amma and Kirti returned to Rao mansion.


It has been one hell of a year, and he couldn’t help but chuckle, it all started with the entry of his saree ka dukaan. His life has never been the same since he met her. She was a rainstorm, who created chaos and brought coolness in his life. He couldn’t be more thankful to her for indirectly helping him bring Amma and Kirti back in his life. He would have said thank you to her but that would have boosted Pallavi’s ego and would not have satisfied his own. His lecture ka dukaan’s lecture, he smiled, whose lectures he used to get bored of, had actually helped him in an unthinkable day. He thought about the day before Amma moved into his house, he stood in awe in the living room of his Amma’s house along with Farhad and Harish as his lecture ka dukaan gave his Amma a lecture on forgiveness and moving on and defended him on being a changed man.He couldn’t believe that she was the same saree ka dukan who hurled abuses at him once. With a little convincing from Farhad and Harish’s side and a lot of requests from him, Amma and Kirti finally agree to comer to his house making it a home.


Pallavi, the water to his burning fire, the one who balances completely with him,had impacted him so adversely, that he couldn’t bear the thought of a life without her. His mind went back to the day when she stepped into the RR Mansion for the first time, the day she for the first time fell into his arms, was the day the heart in his heartless body started to beat along with hers. The moment he saw her innocent and wide eyes was the day he started to feel something for her no matter how long he kept denying himself. He let out a small laugh thinking of his first entry into Desmukh house and how he fell on her with a flower shower. Their long eyelocks, and her helping him and their proximity created havoc inside him.


There was no hate between them, there was only one thing brewing and that is called love, pure love.


Across the table, Pallavi noticed the myriad of expressions on Raghav’s face and couldn’t help but worry about him. She excused herself from the table to go to the washroom. Raghav pushed his face upwards seeing a shadow hovering over him and there he saw his desire which cannot come true no matter how much he wants it to come true. He wants to make her his, but that will remain a dream unfulfilled.


“Raghav” “Pallavi” both said simultaneously and Pallavi took a seat in front of him. This was the first time they took each other's real name civilly. They looked into each other’s eyes, various emotions, feelings and words swimming in it. Raghav couldn’t help but believe what he was seeing in her eyes...those raw emotions and its meaning clearly aware to him.

“You look beautiful!” Raghav said, breaking the awkwardness between them.

There on the other table Kirti smiled seeing Pallavi seated with Raghav.

Pallavi shyly tucked her hair behind her ear and said thank you. There was a moment of silence between them...which was surprising because when they were together, the situation was always the opposite of silence. Raghav’s phone pinged, breaking the second wave of silence.

He got up from his seat, and walked and bent towards Pallavi and kissed her cheek. “See you tomorrow at saree shop, saree ka dukaan” he said and straightened himself up and walked away with a huge grin on his face while Pallavi sat there flustered, with wide eyes and hands on cheek where it was just kissed.


This is it. I hope you guys liked it. Loads of thanks to nautankitadka for encouraging and pushing me to write it.

I kind of based my past on Mihika's FF-"Innocent Hearts".

I couldn't decide on a name- so I randomly put this name here.

And I appreciate you guys reading this and do give your feedback.

Reem


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh Reems you have written each and every scenario so beautifully. I am still imagining that sweet kiss at the end...their eyelocks....the way they read each other...it's so beautiful...and the past you created is all your creation dear...I loved every bit of this OS🤗

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Tu toh chaa gayi re! smiley32smiley32smiley32

I loved the subtlety with which you have written about the characters, without losing their essence, but also making them relatable, nervous and cute! ❤️

The butterflies in Pallavi's stomach at the end, hehehe!! 😆

Woohoo!! You are a star in making, girl! This writing is superb!! 😳

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Breathtakingly beautiful... oh the peck on her cheek.....

Keep writing more ...

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Oh Reems you have written each and every scenario so beautifully. I am still imagining that sweet kiss at the end...their eyelocks....the way they read each other...it's so beautiful...and the past you created is all your creation dear...I loved every bit of this OS🤗

Thank you so much. This was me writing something imaginative for the first time after 10th board exams.

I am really glad that you loved it.🤗

and the kiss on the cheek at the end was something I always wanted to see between them..

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Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Tu toh chaa gayi re! smiley32smiley32smiley32

I loved the subtlety with which you have written about the characters, without losing their essence, but also making them relatable, nervous and cute! ❤️

The butterflies in Pallavi's stomach at the end, hehehe!! 😆

Woohoo!! You are a star in making, girl! This writing is superb!! 😳

Thank you. It would not have been possible without you so you also deserve the credit for the story.❤️

I am happy that you loved the characters and about the end, Raghav should have the last say because he was the one initially unsure about Pallavi's feelings. Now he knows how she feels, 😆

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Originally posted by: Vibrant_Ana

Breathtakingly beautiful... oh the peck on her cheek.....

Keep writing more ...

Thank you for reading it. and yes, peck on her cheek was one of my favourite parts too

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This is so Amazing❤️!!! And you say, it's a First Try, I don't believe you😉.

This was such a fun, tension -free, simple cafe scene with both the siblings-party involved.

And the end with a kiss on the cheek was . Thanks for trying & continue with your trials so we keep getting such subtle scenes😎

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This is beautiful 😍❤️

You write so well🤗

Loved reading it keep writing

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humne aap ki sweet kiss imagine bhi kr liya...haye☺️ yaha sb master mind writers hai bs theme do likhne ki chamak jate hai.." you are looking beautiful" bs ye maine sun liya☺️...ye kiss wale end chha gyi ladki tum❤️

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