Raghvi OS - Lift to life - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Pallavi found him smelling her hair weird... it’s downright perverse...🤣

Oh it was so fun to read... Pallavi trusting him a gesture that meant a lot him... cute...

The ride was mast... How can we blame the boy for not keeping his hands to himself when she was sooooo close? You wrote it so well... with so many “Aawwwwl” moments

Ghamandi Rao isn’t an insult anymore... it’s a nickname...can’t wait for the day it’ll be an endearment....❤️

Yes, but aren't his all actions perverse? 😆

Thank you so much dear. 🤗

I love that nickname. Ghamandi Rao will soon turn to endearment and he will miss that name at one point of their life.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh wow...!!! ❤️...no words afta i read that he realized abt her trust on him ...phir bhi ..main bolungi 😳🤣...


It was jus perfect ...really an amazing one keech 🤗🤗...u write them with such ease ..n its effect remains lyk ...for a life ❤️...the chemistry they hav on screen ...the writings of u ppl here 👏 ...they are on par unlike the stry of mhrw 😳😆


Her safety(its pallavi's heart here) n her smile ... meant a lot to him ...it was also acknowledged by pallavi..🥳"she trusts him" ...afta reading it... really i had smile on my lips, a content one ❤️...love u for this keech 🤗..keep writing such amazing stuff dear⭐️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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very refreshing OS. Do write more....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

It was so in flow and beautiful!! Ahh got me hooked until the very end!! I so wish to see them riding that scooty of her's with him behind her of course!!

It was magical and loved it!

Please keep writing on them❤🙌🏻

Thank you so much. Means alot. 🤗

I want to see him riding his bike with her behind. ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: K_keechu

Thank you so much. Means alot. 🤗

I want to see him riding his bike with her behind. ☺️

Even i want to see them together , riding her bike😋🤩❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Even i want to see them together , riding her bike😋🤩❤

I even planned to add that in this OS but then thought it will be too dragging so didn't. 😋

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Posted: 4 years ago
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aww so cute so want to see

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

omg so many dreams for this lift... 🤣🤣 thank you making the dreams true.. such a cutie sweety lift it was🥰🥰🥰🥰

anna needs this lift for once😆

He really needs the lift but now I'm not sure, she may will push him off that. 🤣 🥺

She didn't even take her Scooty from DM nivas. 😲

But thank you for reading and commenting. 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was such a sweet and beautiful os...it had my heart..

I loved how you showed Raghav and Pallavi....and the silence between them (I never thought it would be possible-they are either bickering or staring into each other's eyes). Guess Raghav and Pallavi's hair could not take the silence😂😂 anymore

it was really nice of Raghav to let Pallavi go to Deshmukh's house and saying he can manage himself.

Oh, this was also really cute- I really felt like saying Aww a few times- especially I he moves her hair and his hand and their inner thoughts where they show they don't like other's actions but internally love them

Keep writing

Thank you dear.

It's really fun to write for this forum. We have such a great writers here and readers are also the best. They gave you the best appreciation.

I was hesitant about adding that silence bit since these two never be silent around each other but I would love them having a moment of calmness.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Arre waah! Great job at fulfilling almost poore fandom ka wish of Raghav sitting behind Pallavi while she's driving it.

This Raghav seemed exactly like the one we saw in the Saree-Pin episode, enamoured by her. The way he used her safety as an excuse to tuck the saree at her waist. He could have just told her but, No our Mr. Raghav knows how to make use of an opportunity😆

He is a renowned bussinss so he obviously knows how to make use of an opportunity though sometimes some slip through his fingers. 😆

Thanks alot for reading the OS and for the comment too. Means alot. 😳

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