Raghvi OS - Lift to life - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Mihika


This lift....oh what have you done Keechu...As it is I am late to bed tonight and here...my sleep has gone now😆


It is so beautiful and still realistic...

Please write more👏

Thank you Mihika (you have a nice name, if it's your real one) 😆

I wanted to finish and update this before I went to bed, I didn't notice the time. Raghvi has stolen our sleep and trust me I know the feeling. 🤣

Thank again. I will.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: K_keechu

Thank you Mihika (you have a nice name, if it's your real one) 😆

I wanted to finish and update this before I went to bed, I didn't notice the time. Raghvi has stolen our sleep and trust me I know the feeling. 🤣

Thank again. I will.

Mihika is my name from Writer's world....lekhak ki duniyaaa.... My name is Shreyoshi... Thank You❤️. You too have a very cute name...though I don't know the meaning🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Loveeeed This...

This 2 always argues, no matter where they are.🤣

I really liked the part where Pallavi told Raghav, That she knew that it was him.. they always fight/argues with eachother, but the trust that they have on eachother is amazing...

And that's my favorite one. Thank you. 🤗

Despite fighting with each other I always feel that Pallavi trusts him. She trusts that she is safe with him otherwise she wouldn't be that comfortable around. And she believes that he wouldn't cross that limit. I really hope that the makes don't break her trust as well as my trust.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: chullbulli

OH KEECHU.. i am very emotional after reading this... he smiled ..she trusted him... how deep and strong is the NEED to belong is in raghavs heart. he desperately wants pallu to open up and accept him. he will never be able to express his love or even concern...but he would want it all from pallu.

love your take..absolutley fantastic


also to change your post tilte there is a separate settings option just next to topic ...on top.. to edit the cntent of post there is a separate one.. hope it works. i stuggled initially and then cracked it.


he also asked her to drop him before deshmukh's house.. so that she can avoid questions etc.. so caring raghav is

I saw your reaction on the story. Why crying one?😕 I thought my last one was emotional.

He needs her in his life, to keep him on the right way.

Thanks for helping me with the topic title edit. I have struggled with the last one too. I thought only I have the problem. 😆

And yes, he didn't want to give her baba another heart attack. 🤣

Thank you. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

This was such a sweet and beautiful os...it had my heart..

I loved how you showed Raghav and Pallavi....and the silence between them (I never thought it would be possible-they are either bickering or staring into each other's eyes). Guess Raghav and Pallavi's hair could not take the silence😂😂 anymore

it was really nice of Raghav to let Pallavi go to Deshmukh's house and saying he can manage himself.

Oh, this was also really cute- I really felt like saying Aww a few times- especially I he moves her hair and his hand and their inner thoughts where they show they don't like other's actions but internally love them

Keep writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Mihika

Mihika is my name from Writer's world....lekhak ki duniyaaa.... My name is Shreyoshi... Thank You❤️. You too have a very cute name...though I don't know the meaning🤗

Your both names are cute but I like Shreyoshi more. Do you mind me calling that?

Even I don't know the meaning. 😆 It's just sort of the short of my name. My real name is Greeshma which means summer. 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Arre waah! Great job at fulfilling almost poore fandom ka wish of Raghav sitting behind Pallavi while she's driving it.

This Raghav seemed exactly like the one we saw in the Saree-Pin episode, enamoured by her. The way he used her safety as an excuse to tuck the saree at her waist. He could have just told her but, No our Mr. Raghav knows how to make use of an opportunity😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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ye ansso khushi ke hai pagli...😆

Originally posted by: K_keechu

I saw your reaction on the story. Why crying one?😕 I thought my last one was emotional.

He needs her in his life, to keep him on the right way.

Thanks for helping me with the topic title edit. I have struggled with the last one too. I thought only I have the problem. 😆

And yes, he didn't want to give her baba another heart attack. 🤣

Thank you. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: chullbulli

ye ansso khushi ke hai pagli...😆

🤣

I thought I made you cry with my awesome and amazing OS 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Thanks! 😳


Originally posted by: nautankitadka

O bete ki!! Loved it 🤝

He took the lift but ensured her safety & dropped her home, sweet! 👌

She knew it was him and trusts him hence helped 😌

Ye toh story shuru ho gayi boss!! Well written👍🏼

Thank you so much. I'm happy you liked it.

That was my favorite part, she trusting him. She atleast know that he wouldn't hurt her physically. I do feel that in the show as well. 😳

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