FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 26

Great update as usual ❤️.

Very enjoyable

But I must admit

My greediness demands RR and PD together now

Lovely

I really like how articulate & well- formed the dialogues of all your characters are. It takes efforts when you talk'bt money management but you do it so well that it's easier for all ur readers to understand👏.

The last line for Remmy by Raghav had me in splits🤣

Can't wait for Kirti & Pallavi's interaction in the next slot❤️

You know what.....I loved that last line....🤣

As always beautiful update

Loved it❤️

Originally posted by: Harinivas

Very enjoyable

But I must admit

My greediness demands RR and PD together now

Lovely

You wish is my command, Sister. :-) Coming up tomorrow.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I really like how articulate & well- formed the dialogues of all your characters are. It takes efforts when you talk'bt money management but you do it so well that it's easier for all ur readers to understand👏.

The last line for Remmy by Raghav had me in splits🤣

Can't wait for Kirti & Pallavi's interaction in the next slot❤️

Thank you, Sister. It was a fun episode to write.

Having completed this episode, I feel a sense of relief. I felt that Raghav and the nature of his relationship with his family was the missing background information that I needed to supply in order for the story to proceed.

Originally posted by: Mihika

You know what.....I loved that last line....🤣

As always beautiful update

Loved it❤️

hehe

When I started writing -PALLAVI- I was determined that Raghav would remain rough around the edges and say the most politically incorrect things. In their future together, I can imagine Pallavi being the kind of wife worried that her husband will not censor his thoughts in public. I'm sure many of their marital rows will begin with "why did you say that!?" hehe

Awesome update.. waiting to read more soon😍😍

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

hehe

When I started writing -PALLAVI- I was determined that Raghav would remain rough around the edges and say the most politically incorrect things. In their future together, I can imagine Pallavi being the kind of wife worried that her husband will not censor his thoughts in public. I'm sure many of their marital rows will begin with "why did you say that!?" hehe

Last line was the best...with all the planning this was the only line which was nice and heartfelt.

Also when Raghav said that he preferred Farhad when he was terrified of him..