FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 26

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Posted: 3 years ago

Love this part ❤️

Cant wait for raghvi though 

Update soon 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Love this part ❤️

Cant wait for raghvi though 

Update soon 🤗

What a speedy reader you are, Sister!

You consumed it fresh out of the oven. hehe

I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Because this episode was such fun to write. I love writing Raghav-Farhad bromance scenes. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great update as  usual ❤️. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very enjoyable 

But I must admit 

My greediness demands RR and PD together now 

Lovely 

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Posted: 3 years ago

I really like how articulate & well- formed the dialogues of all your characters are. It takes efforts when you talk'bt money management but you do it so well that it's easier for all ur readers to understand👏.

The last line for Remmy by Raghav had me in splits🤣

Can't wait for Kirti & Pallavi's interaction in the next slot❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

You know what.....I loved that last line....🤣

As always beautiful update

Loved it❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Harinivas

Very enjoyable 

But I must admit 

My greediness demands RR and PD together now 

Lovely 

You wish is my command, Sister. :-) Coming up tomorrow.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I really like how articulate & well- formed the dialogues of all your characters are. It takes efforts when you talk'bt money management but you do it so well that it's easier for all ur readers to understand👏.

The last line for Remmy by Raghav had me in splits🤣

Can't wait for Kirti & Pallavi's interaction in the next slot❤️

Thank you, Sister. It was a fun episode to write. 

Having completed this episode, I feel a sense of relief. I felt that Raghav and the nature of his relationship with his family was the missing background information that I needed to supply in order for the story to proceed. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika

You know what.....I loved that last line....🤣

As always beautiful update

Loved it❤️

hehe

When I started writing -PALLAVI- I was determined that Raghav would remain rough around the edges and say the most politically incorrect things. In their future together, I can imagine Pallavi being the kind of wife worried that her husband will not censor his thoughts in public. I'm sure many of their marital rows will begin with "why did you say that!?" hehe

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update.. waiting to read more soon😍😍