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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Awwwww❤️

This is awesome loved their confession!!!


Thank you for reading and commenting 🤗

I loved the confession too 😆❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: christobelle

Nice OS!!

Loved the way they were in love with each other but still couldn't be together and how both r vulnerable for each other


Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

That's just the basic way they are though, unless they are on their own, they do not really let out their REAL feelings ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: K_keechu

That's brilliant. Really enjoyed their confessions and smile and that last laugh.

Am I the only one who got worried that what if she forgets all this the next morning? 😆

Keep writing, you write so well. 😳


Thank you for reading and commenting 🤗

So happy that you liked it so much!! 😳

She did completely forget the next day, coz it was her first time with alcohol in her system, but that is another's day's story to tell. Will write it out sometime! 😆❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: cozy_vibes

this the best confession ever.. such a straight forward..


Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

Aren't the best confessions those where the protagonists dont beat the bush and just blurt out what they actually feel though? Those are most definitely my favorite ones tbh! 😆❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Avneel07

This is just wonderful. Loved it. 🥰


Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: __VIHU

"change everythink kind of serious" well ok😆

Hehe..she knows it is a make or break it kinda confession; either she gains a worthy significant other or an adversary who knows her secret 😈

It was such a toe curling read... And I say that when I read something rated 18+ but dear gurl you managed to make me feel exactly that without you know....😆

Compliment accepted, though I must admit I dont understand how it gave the effect of an 18+ tale.

And was it just me who felt it wasn't just Pallavi speaking her heart out but every gurl out there who finds herself wanting the boy of her dreams... Like a poem to that boy we'll never write a letter for...

It is sweet you saw it as being relatable to every girl 😆

Heart touching yaar, it was...

Thank you, it is a real story of someone dear to me, so means a lot :)

I'm a sucker for drunk hero heroine scenes but here the main attraction wasn't that.... It was the unpretentious beauty of speaking your feelings out loud., plainly in front of the person who's really special to you...I've always seen how being drunk in a fanfic is usually associated with something crazy, wild or regret. But the beauty sometimes is that you are the truest version of your own self and follow only your heart. Pallavi echoed the same sentiment, she let her heart wander and find its true place, and it was even more awesome that it was reciprocated. Someone like Raghav would have been reluctant to say that to a sober Pallavi, he also spoke his heart out because she was drunk and he was lost in her void ❤️

It was love and lovely...


Thank you so much for reading and the detailed comment! 🤗

Edited by nautankitadka - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: xerxes12

This is beautifully penned❤️


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So glad you like it 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: __VIHU

No you're not the only one... I was worried about that too...


Spoiler Alert: Nope. Pallavi had no recollection whatsoever about the night or confession because that was the first time she had ever touched alcohol. That is another story to tell, and quite a funny one too 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Honestly, I have never read a confession like Pallavi's. It's so simple, subtle but explains so many things. How she loves him, but will be really happy even if his happiness lies somewhere else.

The piece just stole my heart💔


Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🤗

It is simple and subtle because it is authentic and comes straight from the heart ❤️

The true meaning of love is to be selfless, and that is the quality I admire in Pallavi, so even here she acted exactly how she has known all her life, whether to accept it or not is the other party's ~ Raghav's choice and he chose wisely 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: bones123

Tannu loveeee it! This truly harks to the alternate universe of the comfort and banter filled relationship they had during the Lion track! Fantastic.

Do write more of this universe!


Thank you for reading and commenting Priyaaa, so happy to see you here 🤗

To be honest, RaghVi always had a banter-filled relationship, but the degree varies from happiness to angst and right now, they are just two confused people fighting their intrigue and misunderstandings on the show 😆❤️

As for the story, super glad you like it! 😳

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