OS - Purvi's portrait |part 2 on page 8|

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This is a one shot on Mondays episode (12th April) where Vir gifts a void canvas to Purvi on terrace.

Do head the background music while reading, to enhance the feel 😉

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~ A Subtle Confession ~


Vir has arranged a small treasure hunt for Purvi. He keeps one of the gift in their bedroom with a note asking her to come on the terrace where her second gift awaits.


{Background music : Do dil Mil rahe hai

https://youtu.be/RKB1LUojBVA }



Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke-chupke

Sabko ho rahi hai...

Haan, sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke-chupke


Purvi is extremely delighted and shy at the same time to witness such a romantic change in her Mukhi ji. She blushes and follows the instructions on the note left by Vir. She is confused as to why is he giving her gifts and that too in such a manner. She puts the questions aside and decides to focus and cherish the lovely moment she has got to spend with her love. She soon reaches terrace.


{Sansoon mein badi bekarari, aankhon mein kai rat jage

Kabhi kahi lag jaye dil to, kahi phir dil na lage

Apna dil main zara tham loon

Jaadu ka main ise naam doon}



She opens the door of the terrace but sees no one. She's mystified "hume yha bula kar Mukhi ji kaha chale gye ?" Her annoyance is valid, after all she was waiting to see him in his new avatar - filled with lots of love and a new approach towards her. However, she heads inside and notices another gift kept on a table. The gift had a similar wrap as the first one. She understood it's kept by Vir, and blushes. As soon as she picks it up, she hears the sound of door being locked. She immediately turns around. She is stunned to find Vir doing this. Her eyes are wide open just when Vir turns around with a slight romantic but naughty smile on his face. He walks towards her with his hands at the back.


Vir was equally restless to meet Purvi in desolation after so long. He was thinking how soon she sees his note and reaches where he is waiting for him.... And not only him, but a whole lot of surprises and much more ❤️


{Jaadu kar raha hai...

Jaadu kar raha hai asar chupke-chupke

Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke-chupke}


Vir - key hua bawri ??? Aise tukur tukur key dekh rhi hai manne ? (He says in his usual teasing tone)

Purvi withdraws her eyes from him and looks at the 2 gifts she's holding. "Ye sab apne humare liye kiya ??" She asks in amusement.

Vir - naa... (Annoyed) tu bhi bawri hi rawegi. Yo note pe tanne dikha na maine key likha hai? [Vir pointed towards the first note which bore her name on top]


{Aise bhole ban kar hain baithe jaise koi baat nahi

Sab kuch nazar aa raha hai, din hai ye raat nahin}


Purvi smiles. He has given her so many sweet candies that she is not able to argue or taunt him even when she wanted to. She is filled with immense pleasure. The one whom she loves is expressing his likeness in a tenuous way, what else was needed by her little heart and eyes to be filled upto brim with gratitude. To stop the tear trickling in her eyes from falling, she speaks.

"Kya hai isme ??"

Vir - tohfe me kya hai yo dekh ke pata chale hai, puch ke naa... Bawriii.. khol ib (he smirks)


{Kya hai kuch bhi nahin hai agar

Hoton pe hai khamoshi magar}


Purvi unwraps the first gift and is bemused to find a snow globe. A heart and in front of it a sweet couple. Vir turned on its switch and the couple started to swirl around in the globe. Purvi's heart wanted to interpret this gift as a symbol of love, but her mind wanted to be pragmatic and wanted to wait until things were crystal clear. Nevertheless, she knew it wasn't something Vir would have casually given to anyone, it was indeed something special. And for the time, she was more than satisfied to know this. Until now he had gifted her things which she needed in her routine (like the laptop). This was the first time that he presented something like her husband, which conveyed emotions, affection. She had his heart, at least in the form of this snow globe if not in real. She couldn't ask for more.


{Baatein kar rahi hain...

Baatein kar rahi hain nazar chupke-chupke

Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke-chupke}


Vir knew how overwhelmed she is. After spending so much time with her, he was aware of her reactions. "Bawrriii... Ib mhare dusre tohfe ko kitna intezar karawegi?? Khol use bhi...." He said in a loving tone. He was desperate to show her the second gift, which had a lot in store for both of them.

Purvi - Mukhi ji ye bhot sundar hai. Hume nhi pata tha ki ap itna romantic gift bhi laa sakte..... (She bit her tongue on realising what she just said. Ufff Purvi ye kya keh diya tune. Humesha gadbad karti hai tu....!! 😵)


{Kahi aag lagne se pehle uthta hai aisa dhuaan

Jaisa hai idhar ka nazara, waisa hi udhar ka samaa}


There is a triumphant smile on his face as if he is successful in conveying what he wanted to. Although he feels a bit shy and nervous, for this experience of love is new to him. Falling in love again with a girl half his age is not easy for him. Somehow he manages to speak.

Vir - tanne achha laga ....bas mhari mehnat safal ho gyi 😊😍 [their is immense love in his eyes. As if her approval is all he wanted.]


Purvi is on 7th heaven. Vir is her first love and every moment with him bought number of new sensations to her. His behaviour towards her was driving her wild. It was getting difficult for her to keep her wild cravings under control. She wanted to unleash her desires and confess how deeply she is in love with him...... But "noooo" this is not the right time. A step taken in haste might create a mess in their lives (she recalls VD incident).


{Dil mein kaisе kasak si jagi

Dono janib barabar lagi}


Purvi goes forward to open the second gift. To her astonishment, she discovers a void canvas.

"Mukhi ji ye to khaali hai?? "

Vir - khali islie hai kyoki maine abhi tak isme kuch banaya naa...

Purvi looks af him with confusion, trying to infer his words.

Vir - maine aj tak teri koi tasveer na banai naa.. to socha ki .......!!! Vir leaves the sentence incomplete, wanting Purvi to understand his unsaid words.

Purvi's pleasure dint know any limits. What on earth caused such a drastic change in KROOR SINGH?? He was so tough and hard-to-get man, and suddenly he became so soft and tender. It seemed a dream to her but it wasn't.. but her sweetest reality.


{Dekho to idhar se...

Dekho to idhar sе udhar chupke chupke

Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke-chupke}


P - par Mukhi ji... Apne to sakshi ji ke jaane ke baad se kabhi koi tasveer nahi banai to fir humari ....???

V - kyoki jo thare samne khada hai wo sakshi ka naa, tera Mukhi hai.

Now it was a time when Vir was ready to speak his heart out. The moment for which he was waiting with bathed breath has finally arrived.

V - sakshi ke jaane ke baad mai bhot toot gaya tha. Manne lagne laga tha ki mhara jeevan berang ho gya hai islie maine rango se durri bana li. Par ib pehle jaisa kuch naa hai. Ya mai yo kahu ki thare aane ke baad se sab kuch badalne laga. Mai ib pehle wala Mukhi.... Tu key kawe hai manne KROOR SINGH. Mai utna bhi Kroor na hun ib... [He smiled saying this]


Purvi could see his truthfulness in his eyes. His eyes were moist while narrating how she lead to his transformation, how she taught him to live life like a human agai. She was overwhelmingly joyous. She holds Vir's hand and assuringly said - "Mukhi ji hum apni akhri saans tak apke saath hai." There was a seriousness in her voice.


{Sabko ho rahi hai...

Haan, sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke-chupke

O, do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke-chupke}


Vir holds back her hand - "ib jab maine rango ko dobara sweekar kar lia hai to manne socha ki beeti baatein bhula dun aur teri tasveer bana kar mai bhi apne jeevan ki nayi shururat karu tere sath....."

Purvi smiles with tears in her eyes and took a step forward - "to fir... Chale...???"



Two hearts have subtly conveyed their feelings to each other. They walked out holding each other's hand - symbolising that no matter what destiny has stored for them, they will never let the other one go. This was the most beautiful walk for these love birds -- when they were together, not only physically but spiritually. No obligation held them together, but the binding power between the two was love, pure divine love.



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I don't know how it is. I'm not keeping well from last few days but this scene incited me to write something of my imagination.

Do let me know if I should continue 🙄🙄 bcz I'm not sure if it was worthed 😐

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Originally posted by: Suppss

I wrote my first one shot 😁

Supriya i ll read it later on😳


But i still can't tag u dear

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Pehle ye batao news padhi ??

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Supriya i ll read it later on😳


But i still can't tag u dear

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