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Posted: 4 years ago
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This os is what keeping me entertained sunday afternoon... Do write more... Looking forward...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

What a beautifully penned OS! ❤️ Loved it🤗

I have read one of your previous work on Virat and Sai and I must say, glad to have you here!!


PS: Hope RaghVi intrigue you enough to treat us with your future stories! 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you so much.

I will write more. Didn't expect this fast response. 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sometimes it's good to show your vulnerability. Simple scription of the breakdown n vulnerable side of Pallavi to Raghav in just few words n Raghav's instinct protection is marvelous.

Amazing one shot 💞💞

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: K_keechu

Hi

I'm keechu from Kerala,

This is my first OS on Raghvi, if you guys like this I may write more on them. And I write only in English. Please spare the mistakes.

I have read all one shot on them and left few comments on them as well. All of them were beautiful. Since then I wanted to write something too. Thanks for pushing me!

Now coming to this OS, it happens after Pallavi's father threw her out according to the precap. I don't know what made him do that but leave all those reasons behind. And it happens after Raghav cleared his and her name about the abortion scandal.

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Raghvi OS : New shade


Raghav was sleeping when Farhad knocked on his door continuously, screaming at him to open the door.

He came out to give his right hand man a piece of his mind for disturbing his sleep but he forgot that as soon as he saw a stressed out Farhad and the whole servants spewing nonsense on each others' ears.

His questioning eyes moved towards his employee.

"Pallavi ji"

"What?"

Farhad turned towards the living room, nodding his head. Raghav didn't know what made him speed walk towards her but he did, his sleep long forgotten.

He could hardly recognize the person who occupied his whole living room with her mere presence. The way she sat reminded him of that day he tortured her, keeping the AC temperature low and blasting his music system. She sat there crouched, hugging her knees to her chest, drenched and shivering. Involentarly his left hand searched for the AC remote and he switched off the air conditioner.

Raghav had always cared for his family and his staff, and he had always been very protective of them but Pallavi was neither his family nor his employee yet he swore under his breath to hunt the people who broke her that way.

Above all this what surprised him the most was the way her eyes lingered on his picture on the wall. She didn't even spare him a glance when he cleared his throat.

"Saree ka dukan," He called out, however got nothing in reply. Not a sound or a movement.

Taking slow steps he approached her cautiously expecting an explosion the moment she returned from her dream world.

He lightly touched her shoulder, "Pallavi,"

Farhad and the whole staff were looking at their boss as if a pair of horns had grown on his head. They had never seen their sir speak with such delicacy. Farhad had a small smile on his face despite the serious situation.

Her name from his mouth, addressing her did something and she turned. The emptiness is those beautiful eyes, which he always had no trouble reading made him breathless.

"I want to sleep,"

Raghav gave a subtle glance to Farhad and he helped her out of the chair when the servants left the room. She stood up with his support, his right arm around her waist and his left held her left hand.

He didn't know why he did what he did next but it might be her shivering body or might be it was her eyes which never left him since she turned or might be it was the expectations in them.

He lifted her in his arms and brought her to his bedroom. Another thing he did with no idea on the reasons and he didn't even want to give any thoughts on the reasons behind his actions.

He briskly walked holding her to his chest avoiding her eyes, too scared of them.

Raghav Rao was never afraid of anything or anyone, he was someone who generated panic in others but since this woman made an entry to his life he started to feel fear, a foreign emotion. He would never accept it but he dreaded her judgement.

After reaching the room he lowered her on the bed. All his efforts to avoid her eyes flew out of the window when she held his arm. With a slight tug she made him sit beside her and she laughed inwardly seeing his rigid body.

"Thank you,"

The situation they both fell into became strange as the yearning to touch her grew inside him double fold. Hesitantly yet steadily he placed his fingers on her right cheek. Their eye contact was never broken and she didn't realize that she was crying until he wiped her tears.

Pallavi for the first time saw a different shade in Raghav which she couldn't pinpoint, but she was sure that she would never ever witness that again.

His steps flattened at the door as he heard her voice yet again.

"You said that you won't touch me even if I'm the only girl left on this planet."

A small smirk formed on his lips and he replied, before walking out, "Right now you are not the only girl left on this planet,"

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Beautiful OS...very well written 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: chullbulli

wow ...brilliant piece..very emotional... just my cup of tea.. i love the foreplay of emotions too much. that's why love the jealousy tug of wars ...to do or not to do...beautiful.....please write more... and that is AN ORDER... baba style..🤣... just joking dear... please write more


Thanks for reading. 🤗

I'm a sucker of emotional one shots. 😳

I will, after getting such warm respone I will definitely write more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

This is soooooo mesmerizing😍😍

I would love to read more from you.

Do write more👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18
beautiful...plzz continue this 💕💕
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

beautiful indeed❤️❤️.. that smirk and line “ you are not a last girl on the planet”.. took my heart away🥰🥰


Thank you. Means alot.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Hey

I'm also from kerala nice work

Keep going do write more 💜

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