Star Commentor Award (Part 66)
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Part 67
Maan aata hai shaam tak tan hoke
Girls group m dekhta hai Geet nahi hai
Puchta hai Geet kahan hai
They answer ki humein nahi pata, lunch ke pehle hi nikal gai
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Maan aata hai villa mein wapas toh Geet padi hui thi bed pe
M-Hey...where were you…
He pauses seeing her
M-Are you feeling okay?
G-Take me out
M-Huh?
G-Take me out for a walk...with you alone...now
He frowns
Isko kya hua? She is literally pouting...looks disturbed
He had never seen her pouting or throwing tantrums
M-Oh okay. Are you sure you don’t want to grab something to eat first with others?
G-No!
She snaps
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Maan takes her to a secluded beach in the island
They are sitting on the sand looking at the water
M-What is it...say it...I know it’s something
G-Tell me about Lisa
G-Everything
M-Why do you want to know about her?
G-She was your ex-gf?
M-Yes. I mean I had a huge crush on her whole of my teenage...proposed her in college. She rejected me. I was heartbroken. I was stupid
He sniggers
How many girls had he proposed to?!! Such a flirt!! Jahandekho iski koi toh ex dikhi hi jaayegi
She wonders due to her instant jealousy
G-So you never dated?
M-We did. After I started looking presentable and started gyming and all. It was so short lived. I was so over her. Then she has a good rapport with mom...so mom wanted me to date her again...and even get married and stuff
G-Why would anybody reject you?
He smiles
M-I take it as a compliment, babes...I am flattered
He kisses her lightly
She moves away
G-Answer me
M-Well...I was ugly according to her. She was the hotgirl...I had pimples everywhere...I was lanky nerdy. But I even got rejected after I started looking better
G-By whom?
She asks curiously
M-You. Why did you reject me? Was it my looks?
She shakes her head
M-So, are you not attracted to me?
She blushes
G-That's not the case
M-Then?
He asks tucking a strand of her hair behind her ear
G-I never rejected you, else why would we be here, stupid!
She says in a feminine mellowed down almost loving tone; not her usual harsh to the point tone
G-Lisa told me she is going to marry you
Maan is taken aback
M-Why would she say that?
G-She convinced your mom
M-But she hasn’t convinced me. Never will
Geet puts her head on his shoulder while holding his arm
G-Don’t marry her
She says in a sweet lovey-dovey tone
G-Else I will kill you
She continues in that tone same tone
Maan frowns in surprise initially, hearing Geet say such things in a cute tone but then nods while smiling
He founds this new side of Geet absolutely tempting
It’s like as if they are still getting to know each other and discovering a new side of each other everyday
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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