So Lisa is plotting something,
Is geet going to share what Lisa told about them to him,
When will they starts to acknowledge and share to each other what they really want
Looking forward to further...
So Lisa is plotting something,
Is geet going to share what Lisa told about them to him,
When will they starts to acknowledge and share to each other what they really want
Looking forward to further...
Part 66
Oh no 🤦♀️, did we have to add this Lisa to the pot b/c maan & geet are pretty good at messing up their relationship by themselves ...,. they really did not need any help 🤔
Lisa stirs the pot too well by adding to geet’s insecurities....,.. maan will only marry one of his own rich elite kind ...,, one that his mom approves of .......... contributing to her thoughts that she is not his caliber
.......... maybe just maybe if she listened to her heart ♥️....... instead of her overactive mind & stupid books .... it would tell her how jealous she is right now & that she loves maan
Maan on the other hand loves geet but has been rejected by her so many times has already considered defeat ..... he feels like he doesn’t want to force her but maybe that is what she wants ....,, someone to fight for her ...., prove to her that she is worth fighting for
Now geet has disappeared..... hoping she has not left 😔....... this is the time I want fiesty jealous geet to whip out her chainsaw & threaten Lisa to back off b/c maan is hers 😆
Thank you di ...,. Missed your updates ❤️
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Part 65 & 66
Loh ji hogaya satya nash.... Aayi ek aur chudail yeh dono ko bhicarne ek dusre se... Maan loves her but he isn't implying that strongly to make Geet confident about it.... Abhi kuch dher pehle Geet ki woh tube light jala tha thodi flickers ke saath par ab woh bhi bujh gayi is Lisa ke wajah se... She's really hurt and uski dil tut gayi hai lekin she's good at covering it up to an extent that even the closest person would find it difficult to get a clue.... Ab Geet uski dil ko pathar jaisi kathor bana degi.... She'll build a wall so much more stronger than the previous one that it will be next to impossible to get through it to her heart... Ab Maan ko bohot kuch karna padega kyunki Geet ke dil ab phigalna itna asaan nahi hoga... He came back in the evening and Geet was in the confinement of her room till now... And that according to me is a very long time also it's enough time to freeze up your heart and lock up your emotions to a big unbreakable resolution.... Now Geet will be definitely considering of leaving Maan immediately after the wedding is over.... She will be completely detaching herself from Maan even if it would hurt her to an extent but not much effect because of the invisible iron wall she created to protect her heart..... Wow Di now I would like to see how Maan is going to win Geet back... 🤗
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Part 66
Superb update..... amazingly written
I am perplexed with Geet!
so Lisa and Geet have surprisingly accepted everything
Geet behaves normally! she knows she will break up with Maan soon.
will Maan marry Lisa cos his mom wants this?
well she assumes that people from high society marry their level
hate Maan's mom and Lisa.
at least Geet is thinking about everything
hope she realises that she and Maan are meant to be
of cos Maan's cousin question him about Lisa and Geet
Maan's response was expected considering Geet's behavior
she wants casual relationship
so Maan's cousin senses that there is more than Maan is letting on
great that he prodded Maan
liked that Maan confesses to his cousin that he loves Geet
there should be commitment from Geet as well
can understand why Maan feels he is forcing things on Geet
but should he not tell her that he loves her?
Gosh where is Geet?
update soon
Congratulations to all Winners and Early Bird Awards
on Part 65
Well Done
Part 66
Tinges of Jealousy , Insecurity and Craving Love
Lisa is loved by Maan's mother and not Maan
and I think this time Maan will not give into his mother to get
married to Lisa
Maan surely holds strong feelings for Geet but he himself needs to be
sure and then confident that he loves Geet , then only he will be able
to make a stand and confess truthfully , he could then easily convince Geet too
as she too has feelings for Maan
she composed herself before Lisa , but she indeed felt insecure about the fact that
Maan could easily marry Lisa
both Maan and Geet speaking out aloud that its just a casual relation and after the trip
they will break up
both need a push , they are stooping themselves and yearning secretly for the other
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geet shows she is normal after what lisa told her but it not true n geet is confuse with it
maan knows that lisa is after him
maan do not know how to confess his love for geet knowing her personality
I do not know what to comment on this post honestly. Like they both have such toxic insecurities and rejections of reach other like I dont seeing this work. Geet is holding in emotions but I feel will burst any moment and when Maan tries to explain she doesnt understand until she is calm. But I hope this third wheel goes drowning in the ocean :)
Shock laga 😦
Would be wife boli not should be 😅
Geets reaction 🤔
Geet ka answer se another 🤯 shock laga 😋
Bade logon ki badi batein.
Geet will go back to her shell again. She has started assuming unworthy of Maan 😔
One step forward and then 2 steps back Maaneet ki Prem kahani.
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Winners: Alamelu, waterlotus.19,Creampuff
Runner Ups: Khwaishfan, Taahir004, Umadevi97
Special Mention: , kkiran,sanum23, NeenaDd, ferdouz
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,waterlotus.19, golden_aura
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Part 67
Maan aata hai shaam tak tan hoke
Girls group m dekhta hai Geet nahi hai
Puchta hai Geet kahan hai
They answer ki humein nahi pata, lunch ke pehle hi nikal gai
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Maan aata hai villa mein wapas toh Geet padi hui thi bed pe
M-Hey...where were you…
He pauses seeing her
M-Are you feeling okay?
G-Take me out
M-Huh?
G-Take me out for a walk...with you alone...now
He frowns
Isko kya hua? She is literally pouting...looks disturbed
He had never seen her pouting or throwing tantrums
M-Oh okay. Are you sure you don’t want to grab something to eat first with others?
G-No!
She snaps
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Maan takes her to a secluded beach in the island
They are sitting on the sand looking at the water
M-What is it...say it...I know it’s something
G-Tell me about Lisa
G-Everything
M-Why do you want to know about her?
G-She was your ex-gf?
M-Yes. I mean I had a huge crush on her whole of my teenage...proposed her in college. She rejected me. I was heartbroken. I was stupid
He sniggers
How many girls had he proposed to?!! Such a flirt!! Jahandekho iski koi toh ex dikhi hi jaayegi
She wonders due to her instant jealousy
G-So you never dated?
M-We did. After I started looking presentable and started gyming and all. It was so short lived. I was so over her. Then she has a good rapport with mom...so mom wanted me to date her again...and even get married and stuff
G-Why would anybody reject you?
He smiles
M-I take it as a compliment, babes...I am flattered
He kisses her lightly
She moves away
G-Answer me
M-Well...I was ugly according to her. She was the hotgirl...I had pimples everywhere...I was lanky nerdy. But I even got rejected after I started looking better
G-By whom?
She asks curiously
M-You. Why did you reject me? Was it my looks?
She shakes her head
M-So, are you not attracted to me?
She blushes
G-That's not the case
M-Then?
He asks tucking a strand of her hair behind her ear
G-I never rejected you, else why would we be here, stupid!
She says in a feminine mellowed down almost loving tone; not her usual harsh to the point tone
G-Lisa told me she is going to marry you
Maan is taken aback
M-Why would she say that?
G-She convinced your mom
M-But she hasn’t convinced me. Never will
Geet puts her head on his shoulder while holding his arm
G-Don’t marry her
She says in a sweet lovey-dovey tone
G-Else I will kill you
She continues in that tone same tone
Maan frowns in surprise initially, hearing Geet say such things in a cute tone but then nods while smiling
He founds this new side of Geet absolutely tempting
It’s like as if they are still getting to know each other and discovering a new side of each other everyday
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