This is us - Page 2

Originally posted by: shalinimaaneet

Really love it

Good work yaar

Congrats 👏👏

Thank for reading and commenting. Glad you like the work.

Originally posted by: waterlotus.19

Indeed.

Such a nice way to capture emotions.

Good try.

Please do write more.

If not wanting to continue with this, then at least write another couple of OS.

Thank you for reading. Happy to know that it really express the emotion that I was trying to portrait.

That's what I am trying to do because right now I am not sure if I am ready for a long term writing commitment but will definitely try to write more.

Thank you again

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on another OS!

Fascinating OS!

liked how they know and understand each other

great that Maan got an opportunity in Mumbai

glad she is going with him

loved their confession

do continue writing!!

Thank you :)

As told in the OS it's always them against the world, then how can she leave him alone

I am working on something hopefully it will be completed soon....so that I can post it

Originally posted by: taahir004

Mind Blowing OS

Maan and Geet grew up in an orphanage

but both became friends and both understood each other well

after they left the orphanage they could not get proper jobs

making them take up risky jobs like getting the brides to escape

from their own weddings

Maan finally got a chance and has to go for an interview to Mumbai

though Geet was hurt that Maan kept it hidden that he worked for the company

for 8 months but again she is the only person that understands him

and both together can conquer the world

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment behind.

They both suffered enough and now their life is waiting to shower them with happiness.

Originally posted by: asmani

really awesome please write part 2

Thank you for reading and commenting. I haven't panned on writing more on this but if idea pops up would definitely love to write more and continue it.

Originally posted by: ferdouz

Lovely OS Congratulations.

Unique way of helping. It's the first time I have come across.

Love their bonding. Bachpan se saath. They have been together in thick and thin.

They are so in love with each other and will have their happily ever after 😍

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You are the first one to comment to about their unique way of helping. hopefully it was liked. Got this idea from a K-drama

Because they were together from starting that's why they are so in love

Originally posted by: Creampuff

What a beautiful short story

Love is invincible!!!

Like how they support each other through thick & thin

Thank you for the story

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When in love support come naturally, doesn't matter what hardship is in their way, they know it won't last long because they have each other

Originally posted by: NeenaDd

It's so sweet and cute story...😍

Thank you for reading and commenting. That was my thought while writing to make it different but still as sweet story

Originally posted by: aparna3011

amazing

indeed a brilliant story

love n faith in each other is simply great

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When both had no one, they became each other support and that lead to love.

And as you read both were ready to do what other wanted just for their love