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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is really amazing🤩🤩 You’ve explained the essence of the words in the song so beautifully. Fantastic work Akanksha💗💗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oufff! Phew ! THIS IS IT! ❤️❤️ Oh Akanksha, you crazy funny beautiful girl, you stole my heart girl!! 🤗🤗😘😘 It happens so rarely that there are songs with such inherent lyrical beauty and music so subliminal ! These songs are like a prayer, meditative, soothing and reassuring. Your words did exactly that! Shine on you crazy diamond! 🤗😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Akanksha..🤗

Girl this is as beautiful as you are...❤️

You have written it so beautifully n explained it so brilliantly.😍😍👏

I read it for the 5th time since morning n I have lost all the words I wanted to write down here..

I am in love with this..😍😍

*Running to read it again n let it sip into my heart n soul*❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow.

This post is beautiful ❤️.

These words.. they directly reach my heart..

Srsly..this post kind of makes me emotional with all the depth and understanding of love. This is love in its purest form.

Thanks for this beautiful post Akanksha! ❤️

And pls keep posting these wonderful takes of yours!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was beautiful. ❤️

I've fallen in love with your writing. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: FortunaMajor

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This is so beautiful I just don't have words! This is giving me such Rumi vibes! Are you familiar with his work?

At the risk of repeating myself I need to tell you that you write really well! Both prose and poetry!

This is just ❤️

My feelings no more seeks acknowledgement of this world, I can still shine your light as my walls succumb to silence.

These above lines is what the upcoming track is going to be all about💔

Mamaaaa Bearrrrrsmiley31smiley31

Thank you so much ! Also, yes I have read few works of Rumi but Rumi vibes?! I cant-....smiley27

You have no idea I have this constant smile on my face right now reading this. Also, I started writing (basically crap) when I was really young and then somehow I shifted to reading and a lot and lot of reading! Then I started writing poetries and you know just things....

Anyways, so yeah Thank you and I cant thank you enough for being such a Mama bear(I am always calling you that now) and encouraging me to post this!smiley31

Also, you yourself are so good with words and yeah just throwing lots of shine and light your way !

Ps- Ik your tags are not working ! IF drunk in Bhaang again smiley29

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Juwii29

Kyun pooche naa koi haal mera, hai khudse yahi sawaal mera

(Can't anybody see the pain that shines in my eyes? Will anybody ever care? Will anybody ever notice?! I ask myself as I stay awake in these lonely nights, the moon being the only witness as my heart dives in the plight of self doubt)

They have always lifted the weight, no matter how they themselves shattered under the pressure of human kind and the good in them and nobody has ever tried to notice the vulnerability in the strength they shone with.

Her scars are raw, and she refuses to acknowledge the unfair that was done to her. Instead of holding onto the past, she is seeking a future which will have her stronger and not depriving. But on lonely nights , as she eyes the black sky hoping for the sun to rise sooner, she finds herself travelling the path of bitter memories.

She questions her grief while smiling at her plight.

And on one of these nights as she will come undone, she will find him waiting for her. His fingers will lace her doubts and his eyes will assure her uncertainties. Although she will not seek for a pillar of strength but he will hold her, tenderly and in the softest way possible assuring her with a calm smile, his silence shining amidst her chaos.


This part. Right here. Is literally my favorite part. This line speaks so much power. These words have so much more meaning in their lives it’s crazy. Their journey is beyond beautiful. This literally made my heart melt. Akanksha, you surprise me every day. I love your tharki side. And I love your soft side. 🥺🥰♥️


And you. You right here. Are literally my favourite too. 🤗❤️

Also, this particular line of the song and the way the female singer sings me makes me go all soft too .

It has vulnerability and it has strength at the same time.💔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: prs_725

Omg! This is so beautiful! My heart! You have captured the essence of S and A. The soul of the show. These two are absolutely precious and their journey is a beautiful one to watch.


I encourage you share this on Twitter so the team of SAAK see read your beautiful analysis as well. It is deserving of so many reads and I think everyone will be able to relate and melt to the extent that I am! ♥️


Poojaaaaaaa 🤗🤗

I continue saying this but you love me so much !!🥺

Also, let me say this today since we are going all soft here. ILY too. No joke. They way you encourage me. The way all of you guys encourage me, it's really heartwarming! Like 'my dil goes mmm mmmm mmm' kind of heartwarming.

And about sharing this on twitter, since I am not on Twitter I have no idea how Twitter works.

Ps- So you or anyone who is reading this and can be a help, I'd appreciate!

PSS- ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: infinitie

Every single phrase here is so symbolic!! This is absolutely beautiful Akanksha 🥰🥰 It's one of those pieces that I'll be coming back to again because it just speaks differently the more you read it. It's so hard for me to pick favorite lines because I loved them all but I'll tell you the ones that spoke to me a lot.

My heart screams for your attention but my soul find peace in your silence.

I love this because depsite it all, they do find peace in each other's presence. They communicate more through their silence than they do with their words and you captured that essence of comfort with such grace!

Run...Run all you can. It will be our love which you will seek at the end.

Knowing all the twists and turns their story is about to take, this line is so reassuring and it holds such a convinction. In the end, no matter what happens, these two are meant only for each other. And honestly I don't know if this is Shaurya running from her or Anokhi running from him, but in this line you can feel their unfaltering belief in their love and this made me feel so warm!

Although she will not seek for a pillar of strength but he will hold her, tenderly and in the softest way possible assuring her with a calm smile, his silence shining amidst her chaos.

We often times think of all of Shaurya's pain because we've had more chances to see it, but Anokhi similarly needs that tender love and affection and after yesterday's episode, seeing the way he comforted her, I absolutely felt this line got what she needs and what he will provide her. Not a pillar but just reassurance.


Honestly these are just a few of the lines that really hit home for me since every single line is so poetic! I am so glad that you decided to post this because I will definitely be revisiting it as this story unfolds! Their song was already beautiful but your penned words made it even more meaningful ❤️❤️❤️

Shrutiiiii 🤗

This is not fair. You don't make me cry on festivals okay?! Like that's against the rule.

Plus, I am also waiting for the day when Anokhi will come undone in front of Sharuya (No don't go there. We soft so we talking about emotions).

Like I just want Shaurya to acknowledge her pain which she doesn't even acknowledges herself. The strength in Anokhi is absolutely admirable. She doesn't nurture the pain of bitter memories and just seeks a better future.

And what do I say more?! Thank you ?! Okay so Thank you❤️

Like you write so well yourself and I am really glad you liked it ! 🤗

Cheers 🥂

Akanksha

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Simply beautiful ❤️

Just like you and your work! ❤️

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