The Sinister - a Virat Chavan TS(Chapter 3 updated on page 9) - Page 3

Originally posted by: raji02

loved it. you have captured essence of chavan nivas perfectly. please continue soon.❤️❤️❤️

Thank you very much, will do❤

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

It is so beautiful. So heart touching and I really felt bad for Virat!!!! Please do continue soon

Great job dear!!!👍🏻👍🏻

Thank you very much❤

Will try to update soon🙂

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Ok ,so this is just a try. Sorry if turns out bad.

Sai and Virat have already separated.

Here it goes.

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Crowd? Lots of people. What was he doing over here. What was this place. A shop. What is this. What was happening. He slowly entered into the shop infront of him. And the scene infront shocked Virat. It was...it was him. With his family. But he was very young over here. He may be 5 or 6 . But how can he be at two places at a time. What was happening over here?

He observed something was going on over there, he decided to move and observe the scene. Most of the family was with Samrat ,pampering him,getting him whatever he was asking for. But him,his younger version,he was standing over there, alone, behind everyone,waiting for his turn to choose clothes. No one was paying him heed. Samrat got everything which he wanted. And everyone was about to leave and the younger Virat chirped in.

(The following conversation will involve a younger Virat)

"Kaku mujhe?"he injected with a huge smile on his face.

To which kaku rolled her eyes and pulled out a ramdom shirt and thrust it in his hands.

"Ye lo,yeh tumhaare liye" said kaku. He looked at his shirt and replied "par kaku mujhe yeh pasand nahi aaya".

"Virat ,chup chap ise lo aur chalo yaha se,bahut der ho gaya" kaku replied a bit pissed.

"Par kaku,mujhe ye nahi pasand aaya, mujhe woh red waali chahiye,Samrat ko toh aapne sab kuch dilaaya"

THAP,the moment he said these words ,kaku slapped him on his mouth ,twice, infront of everyone.

"Bado se zabaan ladaata hai, aur teri himmat kaise hui apne bade bhai ke baare mein aise baat karne ki, apne laadle ko sambhaalo Ashwini,tameez bhool gaya hai yeh".

Kaku was about to slap him again, but aai came forward and shielded him. "Vaini ,baccha hai,woh bhi chota sa , jaane dijiye na" she said while hugging him.

"Mast a mast, dono maa bete milkar bas yahi karte raho",and she went from there blabbering something.

Ninad who was standing behind came forward and began to scold in a low voice ,"Mein tang aa gaya hun tum dono se , aur tumhara toh mein kya karu Virat, kab sudhroge, kuch karoge bhi zindagi mein ya aise hi har jagah meri naak katwaate rahoge".

"Par baba, mujhe toh bas woh red waala chahiye tha" he said with tears in his eyes while still hugging his aai. His baba was about to raise his hand and he closed his eyes in fear. But his aai interjected,

"Ninad ,tum jaao yaha se,mein Virat ko samjha lungi".

His baba went from there after giving an ugly look to him and aai. The moment his baba went away ,he began to sob.

"Aai, baba mujhse pyaar nahi karte hai kya?, woh kabhi mujhe kuch nahi dilaate".

Aai kneeled down and wiped his tears,"Aisa nahi bolte godu, tujhe woh laal waali pasand haina,mein agli baar dilaungi ha ,woh bhi do do,pakka, abhi yeh shirt haina,yeh bhi bahut aacha hai,ha ,bura mat maan na godu,mera pyaara baccha haina tu"

Virat looked at the short in his hand and then towards Samrat , he envied him,why was he getting everything,because he was older. He was thinking this,when his aai chirped in.

"Theek haina godu".

"Aapne pichli baar bhi yahi kaha tha aai" ,he handed that shirt to aai and went away.

And suddenly everything dissappeared and only darkness was surrounding . He was confused now,where did his younger version go. And suddenly his younger version came on front of him,but his younger self began screaming at the top of his voice

"SAB TUMHAARI WAJAH SE HUA HAI,TUM HAMESHA CHUP THE,HUMESHA.."

And he was shocked ,he could not process ,what was happening?what is all this,his brain was going into a overdrive, ......

And suddenly Virat opened his eyes, he was in the car, travelling? It was a.... dream. He might have slept on his way back to Nagpur, as he had gone to Pune due to a case. Virat closed his eyes and leaned back on his seat again. This was becoming ridiculous now. It was only dreams of Sai leaving and accusing him in his dreams till today. 4 months had passed since Sai left him. But today it involved him,and it was not a dream ,it was more of a recollection of the past,cuz this was a past incident ,which had took place when he was 5 years . But why was he dreaming it now? Why this incident? . Was the guilt of not being able to stop Sai,bring Sai back enough. Was the pain that his own family betrayed him,and used him to separate Pulkit and tai ,how they sent Sai out of the house in his absense,not enough. Wasn't Samrat coming back and avoiding him, and Pakhi accusing him of her fate and pain ,her divorce with Samrat,not enough,when she herself had demanded it from Samrat in the first place,that his own painful past was coming back haunting him . What did he ever do?. And why did he not trust Sai ,and immediately went to bring her back when his family told him that they ousted his wife.Why didnt he dig in.? Why did Sai leave him? Why isn't his jeeva speaking to him? Virat Chavan was thinking of his life . He was alone. Irony,wasn't he always. And he smiled a mocking smile to himself. And as the drive continued,dont know again when he fell asleep.

(Dream)

Home. When did he reach home. Its already night. But when. He heard some noises from above. It was from his parents room . What happened now? He rushed upstairs. When he reached there,,he was dumb founded. These were not his parents , as in these were very young. They were bickering of something.

"Aai" Virat called. But she didnt even turn. She instead went out of the room.

Then he heard a voice, "Aaai,babaaaa,aap gaye,dekho mujhe kya mila hai" ,someone came in,his 8-year old version?

He(8 -year old) came running and bounced up and down on the bed.(the coming scenes will have the young Virat)

"Virat,tumhare manners kaha hai,kitni baar kaha hai, aise harkaten mat kiya karo,utro neeche" ,Ninad Chavan chided him.

"Par baba ,yeh dekhiye ,mujhe first prize mila hai" and he began to show off the trophy.

"Accha,kis mein?" asked Ninad getting a bit curious.

"Music competition mein baba,aapko pata Subodh bhaiya ne...."

"Kya kaha,music competition mein?" roared Ninad.

Little Virat suddenly got scared and became silent,

"Ha...haan baba,first prize" he said in a timid voice.

"Tumne music competition mein participate kiya tha,par kyu?" questioned Ninad sternly.

He stood silent.

"Kuch pucha hai,Virat?"

He shook a bit and answered, "Mujhe music bohot pasand hai baba"

Ninad became very angry at this . "Tumhare aai ne bigaad ke rakh diya hai tumhe, ye music waghera se kuch nahi hota hai Virat,apne jaise banana chahti hai tumhe. Chavan khaandan ke bete ho tum,mere beta aise ,chi. Music ,sachme. Arre Samrat ko dekho,hamesha sports aur studies mein first aata hain....."

Till then his Aai came in, and Ninad went and held her hand tightly and dragged her into the room pulling her.

"Ninad ,chodo,Virat hai,uske saamne ....."aai began to speak slowly.

"Kyu? Tumhare bete ko bhi pata chalne do ki nikambe logo ke saath kaisa sulu hota hai".

Aai struggled and freed herself,and gave an ugly look to Ninad. She turned towards Virat and smiled slightly,

"Kya hua hai bada?"

Virat slowly showed her the trophy.

"Arre waah,mere godu ko prize mila hai...."

"Music competition mein. Pata nahi iss ladke ka kya hoga,aur yeh prize..." Ninad Chavan snatched the trophy and put it in the dustbin. He then went and pulled a really frightened Virat down the bed and dragged him ,

"Sunlo Virat,aise prize ko iss ghar mein jagah aur zaroorat dono nahi hai,dhang ka prize laaye bina yaha dikhaane ke liye aane ke baare sochna bhi mat. Aise prizes mile bhi ho ,toh unhe raaste mein hi phek ke aana,samjhe"

Virat was very shocked.

"Samjhe" Ninad roared.

He nodded and went towards his room.

At some point of time in the night, his aai came in slowly to his room ,he was still awake.

"Godu,ye le..." his Aai forwarded his trophy.He took it slowly.

"Mujhe bohot accha laga hai godu ki tujhe music mein first place mila hai,tukhe pata hai tere nanaji ko bhi music pasand tha."his aai smiled at him.

Virat went to hold her hand and she hissed. Virat felt very bad.

"Sorry aai ,ye sab meri vajah se hua hai" ,and tears welled up in his eyes.

"Arre nahi bada,ye toh koyi aur chot hai, chinta mat kar,yu thik hojaayega" and wiped his tears.

"Abhi chal ,mein chalti hu,sambhaalke rakh ise,theek hai,aur ab so ja" ,aai kissed his forehead and went from his room.

As soon as his Aai went away, he observed that trophy ,his aai was in pain because of this,his baba punished his aai as he had did a mistake. So ,he will rectify it. He took that trophy ,went towards the dustbin and threw it himself.

His younger came to him (the older one,our Virat), "last time yeh trophy dekhoge,dekhlo"he told him,and went to bed.

Virat was shocked ,how could he speak to himself.

Before he could contemplate, everything turned dark and he opened his eyes.

The dream broke,he again had fell asleep and again these horrendous dreams....no,recollection of the past,again,Virat thought painfully. But,why suddenly today?

He always loved music,but he was not permitted to love it. After a few days he had bought a new trophy,this time for sports ,in football, and suddenly everyone loved him. His baba too. He remembered that day,

"Dekha vaini,mera beta first aaya hai ,sports mein,I am proud of you Virat, Chalo isse tumhare room mein rakhte hain"

" Nahi baba,aap isse apne room mein rakhiye",he smiled .

"Kyun Virat?"kaku had questioned him.

"Yeh maine baba ke liye jeeta hain kaku"

"Mast a mast,waah ninad, tumhara beta kitna samjhdaar hai,kuch seekh Mohit apne bade bhai se"

"Theek hai,isse mere room mein rakhenge".

(Normal Virat in car)

Well,wasnt that the truth,all his trophies and medals were in his fathers room, cuz he had won them for his father,not for himself. So that his father stays satisfied and his mother.....safe.

He had understood the dynamics after that day. You want to stay happy,make them satisfied. He forgot music and studied hard. He also began to win prizes, and in return got .....peace. Did he? Virat closed his eyes while thinking this.

Soon ,Samrat and he also got sorted and became jeeva and shiva.

His father was proud of him,for sure,and ....loved him,maybe. Did he love him,or his aai? People would question him than how he called his father his best friend. He remembered when all of this began.......

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Okay ,so had thought something ,involving some things,it was a random idea.

So,pls bear with this crap.

Just for Viru.

Pls,share your honest opinions,I actually wanted it to be a OS, but something's are left. So maybe a TS.

As I said,good or bad ,let me know. I am open to everything.😊

❤❤❤

Tagging a few, sorry if I couldn't for some. Pls,dont mind,do look through if you can and share your opinions. 😊

Pure love babe, I always have this feeling that the way Virat is due to his childhood, the need of acceptance is in built due to his family. In Fact i had mentioned ones the way virat is coz o his family, whenever he sees fight or hear what has been told to sai he just touches his head like its painful memory that coming in. one of the reasons he is mesmerized by Sai is coz of her outrageous attitude, something he wanted in himself,

Originally posted by: maahi11

Pure love babe, I always have this feeling that the way Virat is due to his childhood, the need of acceptance is in built due to his family. In Fact i had mentioned ones the way virat is coz o his family, whenever he sees fight or hear what has been told to sai he just touches his head like its painful memory that coming in. one of the reasons he is mesmerized by Sai is coz of her outrageous attitude, something he wanted in himself,

Yeah, that frustration nivaran aasan right. Hmm.

Thankyou ❤

Beautiful one shot. It does give you few answers why Virat is the way he is.

I always felt even though Virat loves is Jeeva he compares himself subconsciously and tries to out do him. And probably it’s one of the reasons he has become “yes boss” to the cgang. And a people pleaser with a non confrontational behaviour. I came to this conclusion from that dahi handi flashback.

please do tag me for your future posts when you dissect the characters 😊 thanks once again ❤️💐

Originally posted by: KBBofRCIBC

Beautiful one shot. It does give you few answers why Virat is the way he is.

I always felt even though Virat loves is Jeeva he compares himself subconsciously and tries to out do him. And probably it’s one of the reasons he has become “yes boss” to the cgang. And a people pleaser with a non confrontational behaviour. I came to this conclusion from that dahi handi flashback.

please do tag me for your future posts when you dissect the characters 😊 thanks once again ❤️💐

Thankyou very much🤗❤

@bold

Will do❤

Hiii.. dear. So basically I'm a silent reader . For the 1st time I have joined forum.

U guys r simply outstanding 👏 👏👏what an emotional ts. U made me cry 😢 😭

Haye humara viru.. his childhood suffering, his love for his aayi ,his bond with jeeva everything is amazing.

U know I always think why virat is like this in the show. Kash show mein bhi asia kuch dikhae , jise virat ke character ko aur achhe se samajh paye.

Thank thank thank you so much for writing this. 😊😊😊😘😘 l just loved it.

Continue soon. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part.

Please sai ko wapas le aao. Mein viru ko aur dukhi nahi dekh sakti.

Originally posted by: Shyama9090

Hiii.. dear. So basically I'm a silent reader . For the 1st time I have joined forum.

Welcome to the forum,hope you have a fun ride over here❤

U guys r simply outstanding 👏 👏👏what an emotional ts. U made me cry 😢 😭

Sorry,didn't intend to, but it is a really good compliment,inspires me ,thankyou🤗

Haye humara viru.. his childhood suffering, his love for his aayi ,his bond with jeeva everything is amazing.

Thankyou very much❤

U know I always think why virat is like this in the show. Kash show mein bhi asia kuch dikhae , jise virat ke character ko aur achhe se samajh paye.

Thank thank thank you so much for writing this. 😊😊😊😘😘 l just loved it.

Your welcome🤗

Continue soon. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part.

Will update in a day or two.

Please sai ko wapas le aao. Mein viru ko aur dukhi nahi dekh sakti.

Sure,will do,atleast for a moment😊

Thankyou very much💕💕

What an awesome insight to how Virat became Virat Chavan.

No wonder Sai attracts him, she is what he wanted to be.

Hey,

Sorry ek baar toh pada tha, but I wanted to give it a read aaram se, so that I can comment. Itna serious topic hai, needed to take away mind from other things while commenting. Beech mein avengers movie dekhne chali gayi thi😉 , rukaawat ke liye khed hai.

Beautiful OS dear. Beautifully written.

Time is the best medicine? Well, we move on , start to take life as it comes and slowly memories that we do not want to think about or remember just fades away/get suppressed/buried deep within? They get stored in our subconscious mind.

The Virat in your story is in his tough times and is completely stressed. Been 4 months since Sai left? And Samrat was back and they are divorced? The blame is on Virat? Poor guy, it explains why he is dreaming all this.

Well, Viru ke baare mein kya bataaon. It is a known fact that he acts as how he is expected to or supposed to in CN. The Virat in your story has given us glimpses from his past.

This Virat is a filtered Virat, who acts conscious, who does things to get others approval. It is sad to know that he has got some scars (binning his interest and his Aai subjected to punishment for anything the beta of CN is not supposed to do).

Aai is a sweetheart as always, she got the trophy for him in the night ❤❤, if only she knew where it went at the end.

The filtered/conscious/pleaser Virat sleeps in his car thinking about Sai and all issues in his life, he drifted off to his subconscious mind and there he was. The real Virat was the 5 year kid who wanted a Red shirt and who insisted too but was denied, the real Virat liked music but ridiculed. His likes, childishness and his dreams were crushed at the hands of the elders of CN.

Sadly it was not just his likes that was killed, it was his inner self, a kid who envied, a kid who threw tantrums like any normal kid, a kid who wanted to do what he liked. A kid who wouldn't have judged himself, who wouldn't have been too harsh on himself. The 5 year old Virat was himself in him but the 8 year old programmed himself in such a way that he will be accepted, appreciated and approved by the family.

You have symbolically shown how those dreams were his Dad's and not his by leaving those trophies in his Dad's room and as foolish as they always are, failed to and didn't even care to understand this child's pain.

Loved all the flashbacks and the young Virat. Loved how you showed the emergence of an older Virat to have a look at the trophy in the bin one last time before drifting off to sleep again. He atlast woke up and accepted the reality of his life.

Why today? "Humesha ki tarah chup the"

Act Virat, not stay quiet. Everyone cannot and need not be pleased.

Had a conversation yesterday in the forum with a friend as how Virat is the way he is, well, he was expected to be, expectations of a family also dictates a child's behavior. It is true in case of Virat who is extremely patient and Sai who is highly impatient.

In your OS, Virat is in the form that Kaku and his Baba would like, not the true Virat/ a real Virat.😔

Will wait to see the real Virat who is deep within this Virat. I am sure Sai helped the true Virat to surface and he doesn't have her by his side now.

Nice concept, love the idea. Bring it on. ❤❤

Comments bahut lengthy ho gaya hai, I know😳.