Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update 

Please update soon 

thank you ☺️ 


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Part 11 - Trip to Mumbai :

Hello lovely readers, hope you are doing great. Just a reminder, be safe, and take care.

Happy Reading!

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(While sitting in the airplane, Sai closes her eyes and continuously prays to God. Virat looks  at her with a worried face.)

Virat: Sai, kya hua? Itna darr kyun rahi ho?

Sai: Darun nahin toh aur kya karu? Peheli baar plane mein baith rahi hoon. Darr toh lagega hi na? 

(Virat was surprised to hear that it is her first time travelling in a plane.)

Virat: Pehele khabhie tum ne travel nahin kiya?

Sai: Nahin kiya, tabhi toh yeh peheli baar hain. Aap bhi na, ajeeb sawal poochte ho. 

Virat: Sorry sorry, mera matlab, kyun nahin kiya? 

Sai: Kyun nahin kiya ka kya matlab? Hum khabhie bahar hi nahin gaye Gadchiroli se toh plane mein travel kyun karenge?

(The plane was about to take off, and Sai again closed her eyes once again. Her hand unknowingly held on to Virat’s hand tightly. Virat was shocked, but did not say anything. He simply looked at her innocent face with a smile on his own. Virat, to reassure Sai, puts his other hand on hers which makes Sai open her eyes and realize what she did. The two share an eyelock, but Sai breaks the gaze, and removes her hand.)

Virat: Tum comfortable toh ho na?

(Sai nods her head in a yes, and the two, with an awkward silence, spend the rest of the flight till they reach Mumbai.)  

(Change Of Scene)

(Pakhi and Samrat have reached the hotel, and are on the reception counter to collect the room keys. After collecting the room keys, they head towards their room.)

Samrat: Pakhi tum sure toh ho na? Matlab ek room mein rehne ke liye?

Pakhi: Samrat, hum roz ghar mein ek hi room mein rehete hain. Toh yeh kaisa sawal hua?

Samrat: Yeh baat bhi hain. 

(They reach the room, and Samrat puts the bags down to open the door. Pakhi and Samrat are shocked to see the room decorated in a honeymoon style. It had flowers on the bed, candles around the room with some heart shaped balloons hanging from the ceiling. This leaves the two speechless.)

Samrat: Yeh kya karwaya hain Badi Mami ne? 

Pakhi: Toh tumhe kya laga honeymoon room kaise hote hain? Ab ghar mein thodi na kisi ko pata hain humare rishtey ke baare mein. Aur waise bhi humari shaadi ki peheli raat bhi toh aisa sab decoration tha.

Samrat: Mujhe toh nahin pata tha ki tum itni frank ho. Matlab mujhe toh laga ki tum badi uncomfortable feel karogi. Lekin tumhe dekho. 

Pakhi: Aur bhi jaan ne lagoge Major.Samrat Salunkhe. 

Samrat: Yes ma’am. 

(Samrat salutes Pakhi, and both burst into laughter. The two put down the luggage, and went to freshen up. But, Pakhi was thinking about Virat.)

Pakhi: Virat, main apne rishtey ko ek mauka deh rahi hoon. Aur tumse sab kuch clear karna chahati hoon. Uss vaade ke baare mein bhi. 

(Pakhi wished to talk to Virat soon and clear the air about the promise Virat made to her of not loving anyone else. This way he can also move on with his life, as she wants to give her marriage a chance.)

(Change of Scene)

(Virat and Sai reach the hotel. Virat asks Sai to sit, and he will go and collect the keys, then they can walk up to their respective rooms. While Sai was sitting and reading the newspaper, someone comes up from behind her and taps her shoulder. Sai turns around and yells. Hearing Sai scream, Virat rushes towards her. He then gets shocked seeing her laughing with some random guy, and gets suspicious.)

Sai: Virat Sir, aap aa gaye keys le ke?

Virat: Yeh kaun hain? Aur tum theek toh ho?  Chilla kyun rahi thi?

Sai: Yeh Shaurya hain. Shaurya Sabarwal, my best friend. Aur Shaurya, yeh hain ACP Virat Chavan. Mere Abba ke student. 

(Sai introduces Shaurya to Virat, and vice versa. Virat somehow did not like his introduction as just Kamal Sir’s student. He wanted to hear something else, but doesn’t know what. He also didn’t know why he didn’t like hearing the term “best friend” for Shaurya.)

Shaurya: Hello Acp Chavan. 

(Shaurya extends his hand for a handshake.)

Virat: Nice to meet you.

(Shaurya and Virat shake hands.)

Sai: Aur yeh achanak peeche se aya toh main darr gayi thi. 

Shaurya: Tu kab se darne lagi? 

Sai: Arrey, koi aise chup chaap peeche se ayega toh koi bhi insaan darr jayega. Aur waise tum yahan kar kya rahe ho?

Shaurya: College trip par aaya hoon, aur tu?

Sai: Virat sir mujhe yahan ghumane le ke aaye hain. Abba ke jaane ke baad meri toh jaise poori duniya hi khatam ho gayi thi. Lekin Abba ka sapna poora karna hain, aur college shuru hone se pehele Virat Sir mera mood acha karna chahate the. Waise bhi Abba ne meri responsibility inhe di hain.

Shaurya: Kamal Uncle ke baare mein suna tha maine lekin tujhse baat hi nahin ho paa rahi thi. Main Gadchiroli bhi nahin aa paa raha tha. Phir jab tujhe yahan dekha toh socha milne aa jaata hoon. 

Sai: Meri yaad thodi na aayegi tumhe. Jab se Nagpur shift hue ho, mujhe toh bhool hi gaye ho. 

Shaurya: Arrey, tujhe kaise bhool sakta hoon? 

(Virat was feeling left out from their discussion, and was feeling different seeing Sai’s bonding with Shaurya.)

Shaurya: Ab toh tu bhi Nagpur ayegi na? Apne medical college ke liye? Hum bahut enjoy karenge theek hain? Aur ab toh main bhi tere saath hoon. Tujhe kuch bhi chahaiye ho ga toh mujhe bata dena. Itne dino baad miley hain. Main phir se tujhe kho nahin sakta meri toofan mail. Samjhi? 

Sai: Theek hain Mr.Bandar. 

(Sai hugs Shaurya. Seeing the proximity between the two irked Virat, and he looked in the opposite direction. Shaurya left to meet his group members.)

Sai: Thank you Virat Sir. Aapki wajah se main apne best friend se mil paayi, woh bhi itne dino baad. 

(Virat smiled weakly.)

Virat: Chalo ab room mein chalte hain. 

(Sai nods, and both head towards their respective rooms. Virat was about to step inside his room, but stops as Sai calls out to him.)

Sai: Virat Sir...

Virat: Haan bolo.

Sai: Kuch nahin. 

(Sai smiles and walks into her room. Someone from the other room comes out hearing the name Virat, but before the person could see Virat, Virat walks into his room.)

Person: Virat yahan hain?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the update. Hahaha loved Shauryas addition 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

It might be Pakhi or Samraat..Anyways update was too good!! Continue soon💜..As waiting eagerly to see jealous Virat🤭🤭

Posted: 3 years ago

Sweet! Ab jealous virat milega! Haha

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update...i think Pakhi noticed Virat in Mumbai hotel...but I hope Pakhi frees Virat from his Vaada...and move on with Samrat...and don’t create unnecessary drama... you have spiced up it little bit with the entry of shaurya...very much needed and loved it...thank you so much for update...please update the next part soon...👍🏻

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Loved the update. Hahaha loved Shauryas addition 😂


Haha thank you! 

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Originally posted by: sairat07

It might be Pakhi or Samraat..Anyways update was too good!! Continue soon💜..As waiting eagerly to see jealous Virat🤭🤭


Thank you! Will try to update soon! 

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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Sweet! Ab jealous virat milega! Haha

thanks 😊 yes Ab jealous Virat 😂


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Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Nice update...i think Pakhi noticed Virat in Mumbai hotel...but I hope Pakhi frees Virat from his Vaada...and move on with Samrat...and don’t create unnecessary drama... you have spiced up it little bit with the entry of shaurya...very much needed and loved it...thank you so much for update...please update the next part soon...👍🏻


Pakhi is trying to move on let’s see how the Vaada is sorted out between them. Shaurya is here to make Virat Chavan jealous 😂


Thank you so much 😊