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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Harinivas



OOOOOO

I think you may be right

Maybe this was left for author to tackle later

I am so addicted to this story

Also I went back and read the dialogues again

Sai tells him

‘Tumhari galti yeh nahi hai ke tum mujhe yahaa laaye, tumhari galti yeh hai ki tum pyaar ko dosti aur dosti ko pyaar samajh baithe ho, aur mai iss galti mei shamil nahi hona chahti”
This last words means that Sai looked at it

From long term angle

She knew that marrying him

Would be a mistake. the word “shamil” is like saying I don’t want to “participate” or like basically don’t want to be third person in this mistake

So Sai actually was sure, it was Samrat who was not

I have to read each part again

So much subtleness this authors writes with

If you don’t read carefully you missed it

thanks Rekhacrn for replying

And making me also be patient 😉


You are most welcome Harinivas.

Glad I could help to clear your doubts a bit.. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Machiavelique

Read the last part and I like the way you write. The way the relationships have developed not just Sai and Virat but also with their friends shivam and shilpa. Feels real like how we tease our couple friends. Sai is also opening up slowly and has let Virat in.


I like the flow, it certainly has a book feeling to it. Reminds me of how 50 shades was written as twilight fanfic then went on to become an individually published book.


Will read all the parts once you complete the story because I lack patience and don't like cliffhangers. Please do continue writing.


Hey M

I am like you, I have no patience but I also love the flow and the way she writes. I feel too it has a book feeling to it and feels so realistic cos of the relationships she has developed with such care

Actually I felt the writing has more depth than the books you mention

For me they are more like a contemporary romance novel with

crafted characters and situations

I would love to see this on screen

Even the hot scenes are not there for sake of there, it’s moving the story

❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri


Please read further.... Else it will be like a spoiler 😁😁


If u have a doubt in a specific chapter, I can try and help..... Else enjoy the ride.... It is all worth the time An patience!!!

I am going to ask you many questions for sure.
I also love how there is one small group of commenters who so beautifully analyse the story
Like a community of readers

I actually had another Q - please take your time

In part 9 - pg 37 it says Sai is in the camp for now 10 weeks or so,

Does that mean in those more than 2 months Virat never tried to get in touch?
so is it like a small leap?
Or did something happen in between?



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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Harinivas

I am going to ask you many questions for sure.
I also love how there is one small group of commenters who so beautifully analyse the story
Like a community of readers

I actually had another Q - please take your time

In part 9 - pg 37 it says Sai is in the camp for now 10 weeks or so,

Does that mean in those more than 2 months Virat never tried to get in touch?
so is it like a small leap?
Or did something happen in between?




Awwee..... Some of us readers An our amazing writers are kinda cukkoo cases in the best way 😁😁


For your doubt, camp time is a small leap.... Virat is dealing with the heartbreak at that time and asks his parents to find a girl for him and he is ok with their choice....


As sai is just occupied with the camp .... Too busy for anything else zone...


Both don't even save each others no. In all this time


PS: u can read comments of ppl.... That will also close few doubts for you.


Hope this helps 😁😁

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia

This is relatively a small part, but I wanted to go through all the comments and even that I wasn’t able to reply to all. Please continue to show your love for this story, any questions, analysis, requests in the comments will be answered to the best of my ability. I am so so happy that Rekha is back, but I am sorely missing romance_addict, Ammu, Akshu , Ani, cheerlessIM - I hope you do drop it. 💗🙏🏽

Part 27


That night, after checking out all the to do items, Shilpa lies down on the bed next to her and they discuss the wedding plans.

“Kal raat Tu chahti thi na, Tu Abba ke saath soyegi, toh mai soch rahi thi, ki mai ghar chali jaaun or Saturday dupahar ko haldi aur mehendi ke liye aajau. Tu Saturday ko der se uth, vo log sakhar Puda ke liye dupahar ko aayenge aur mehendi valli paanch baje aayegi”

“Hmm” Sai stares at the ceiling, lost in her own thoughts.

“Tu sunn rahi hai na? Kaha khoyi hai?”

“Kuch nahi.”

“Omg, Tu usse miss kar rahi hai?”

“Aise nahi hai, main usse buss”

“Oho, kya aisa nahi hai, aisa hi hai. Tu chippa Kyun rahi hai? Achi baat hai na?”

“I don’t know, itna ki mai kissi aur chiz pe dhyaan na de saku, Main unn ladkiyon mei se nahi hun, jo apne aap ko kho jaane deti hai. It’s so stupid.”

“Tu apne aap ko kaha kho rahi hai? Tu iss phase ko enjoy kar rahi hai, aur kissi bhi chiz ko agar fully enjoy karna ho na, toh thode vaqt ke liye apne aap ko khona padta hai. Sirf uss vaqt ke liye. Aur tujhmei Itni akkal toh hai ki kab tujhe khona band karke kaam pe lag jaana chahiye”. Shilpa explains.

“Hmm..”

“Aur yeh tera Hmm band kar, aur aisa bhi toh nahi hai, ki voh tere saath nahi kho raha, music jab dono taraf bajj rahi hai, then you gotta dance baby.” Shilpa clicks her fingers animatedly.

Sai laughs. Shilpa gets up from the bed, fetches her phone and opens Sai’s hand and bangs it on her hand.

“Yeh le, usko call kar, baatei kar. Dance kar. Mai jaa rahi hun bathroom, voh bhi Mavshi ke room ki bathroom, thoda unhe bhi jagaate hai aur unke saath time pass karke 15 minute mei aayi”


Shilpa leaves the room, and shuts the door behind her. Sai stares at the phone and then opens recent calls and finds his number, not by name, because she now knows his number by heart. She has seen it so many times, she presses talk.


“Hello?” His deep voice answers like he has been waiting for her call

“Hi..”

“Just Sai?”

“Hmmm” that heat threatens to run through her body, such a betrayer.

“Shilpa kaha hai?” he says casually.

“Mavshi ke saath hai, bulaalu?” She asks equally casual.

“Hmm, abhi nahi thodi der baad, Aur Maavshi kaha hai?” He asks like it’s the most normal thing to ask

“Apne kamre mei.” She replies nonchalantly

“Aur tum kaha ho?” He adds

“Apne kamre mei.” She is equally un excited.

“Bistar pe ya desk pe?” He continues to ask

“Aap kya sawal hi puchne valle ho?” She asks slightly irritated.

“Kyu? Tumhe puchna hai?” He asks again with a smirk.

“Haan, Mujhe puchna hai” she says decidedly

“Toh phir pucho na?” He asks seriously.

She goes very quiet. For almost a minute, and then she sighs and asks

“Aap mujhse shaadi kyu karna chahte ho?”

“Mujhe yeh Pata nahi ki Mai kyu karna chahta hun, lekin Mujhe yeh pata hai ki mai Tumhare siva kissi aur se nahi karna chahta, Aur yeh vajah mere liye kaafi hai”

She bites inside her under lip, contemplating his answer. She wonders how can he be so sure, with all that unsurety.

“Tum Mujhse shaadi kyu nahi karna chahti?”

“Aap sawal galat kar rahe ho”

“Kya matlab?”

“Aapko puchna hai, ki main aapse shaadi kyu karna chahti hun?”

“Mujhe jawab mil Gaya”

“Kya matlab?”

“Yehi ke tum mujhse shaadi karna chahti ho, Mujhe kyu se koi vaasta nahi”


They absorb each other’s silence for a long time. He presses the phone to his face, while she takes the phone and presses the video mode, he hits accept.


“Hi Virat” she says softly.

“Hi Just Sai” he says with a smirk.

“Aap ghar pe nahi ho?” She is confused at the background.

“Nahi, main hamare ghar pe nahi hun” and then he pans the video around.

“Aap apne Aai Baba ke ghar pe ho?” She says excitedly like she guessed a clue right.

“Jee haan doctor sahiba” He smiles.

“Toh aap apne maike mei ho” she teases.

He blushes and then laughs. “Shivam bhi yehi chidha raha tha”

“Voh kab aanevale hai?”

“Shayad kal raat ko hi, uski booking kal raat se hai”

She nods, he stares at her.

“Sai, abb tum Mujhe puchogi nahi, ki main kab aa raha hun?” He asks deeply.

She tongues the inside of her cheek and says slyly

“Aap aa rahe ho? Kab? Kyu?”

“Toh mai nahi aau?” He asks defiantly.

“Stubble ke bina toh bilkul nahi” she says mischievously

“Achaa, soch lo, kahi aisa na ho, ki kissi aur ko clean shaven Virat pasand aa jaye!!” He says rubbing his hand over his cheek.

“Phir ussi se karni padegi Mujhe shaadi” he winks.

“Kar lijiye, phir jab shadow aa jaaye, mere saath affair kar lena” she grins.

He bursts out laughing, “Vaise idea bura nahi hai!”

“Hai na?!” She replies excitedly.


There is a knock in her door, and Shilpa enters.

“Sorry yaar, try kiya, lekin Mavshi ke room mei sone ke liye jagah hi nahi hai”

Sai continues smiling

“Tu badi achi mood mei hai”

Virat speaks through the phone

“Shilpa tumhe Mai clean shaven kaisa lagta hun?”

Sai’s jaw drops, she glares at Virat who smirks and continues flirting with Shilpa

“Le tera phone, Get to know each other, shaadi ke liye kaam aayega”

Shilpa and Virat burst out laughing while Sai sticks her tongue out to Virat and climbs her bed on her knees and lies down.


She can hear Shilpa’s voice saying with a huge grin

“Bhadak gayi baiko!”

Sai yells from her bed

“Main unki baiko nahi hun”

Virat grins

“Chal Shilpa tera aur mera Rasta saaf ho gaya”

Shilpa yells

“Superb!! Kal phone karna, shaadi ka plan karte hai”

Sai gets up from her bed, marches to Shilpa, pulls the phone from her hand and presses end talk. Shilpa laughs and Sai marches back to her bed. Virat hugs his phone to sleep.


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i am in love with shilpa.. i think i was the only woman on earth to get married without any close friend around to share my biggest event of life.. 🤷


waiting for shilpa and shivam's meet🤗.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia

Thank you post on previous page - pls see. Please keep showing your love! Post comments regularly for regular updates. Thanks

PART 28



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I want OS on shivam and shilpa.smiley37where did both get gayab.

smiley36

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dekh, sab sochte hai ki shaadi karne ke liye, you should know the partner well, lekin actually mujhe lagta hai, ki khud ko jannna usse zyaada zruri hai. Agar tujhe pata hai, ki tu apni independence khona nahi chahti, toh Buss make sure ki voh na ho. Haan shaadi compromise hai, lekin ek dusre ke liye, khud ke liye nahi. Aur pyaar, dosti vaghera, ek din mei toh nahi ho jaata, janam janam saath valla rishta banne mei, adhaa janam toh at least lagega na, tumhe yeh decide karna hai ki voh adhaa janam shaadi ke baad invest karogi ya pehle”


THIS!!!
THIS IS THE BEST ADVISE A FRIEND CAN GIVE!!

Each line in this monologue is a genius line

Seriously!
I myself learned so much from this dialogue

What writing! Hats off!



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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey Kal!!!🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️ Sorry for being MIA for the last few days. Had a hectic week because of some work deadlines and a even more hectic weekend due to over time work. Didn't get the chance to properly go through anything 😭😭😭. Only now I'm having a bit of free time before I start my work day again. But.....I'm so glad that there are 3 UPDATES to fix my mood!!!!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩.


Sooooo, update 26......all I can say is it was just AWSOME coz finally....FINALLY they properly understood that they are going to be the end game for each other. Coz finally, they have "earned" each other's heart, love and soul by "learning" and as I feel, finally Sai has reached the place where Virat (and all of us) was waiting for her to reach 😍😍😍😍😍😍. I really really loved the way you were bringing out how both of their days were playing out side by side and tbh when I first noticed the words "he has to learn it" at the end of Virat's para, the first thing I did was checking the end of Sai's para to check for a "she has to learn it" and voila.... it was THERE......🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. And the way you played out the scenes to finally make them realise that they have "earned" this happiness and the right to be each other's......I melted......😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.


The most beautiful part of the update for me was how both Sai and Virat saw each other, without the other realising they were being watched, while busy with their wedding preparations 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. Sai openly wearing Virat's shirt over her Kurthi was..........I was grinning so widely while reading those scenes 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. And Virat himself selecting saree and gifts for the people Sai loves most............It was soooooo touching and romantic😍😍😍😍😍😍. And the way both of them were thinking about starting their day in their bed room amidst the pouring sunlight......😍😍😍😍😍 Can anything be more romantic than that???????? Both of them waiting and anticipating their new beginnings......❤❤❤❤❤ Just like when you want to spend the rest of your life with somebody, you want to start the rest of your life as soon as possible.

Annnnddddd.....My dil goes mmmmmm............😍😍😍


And I also really loved how Shilpa took over the cupid duties from Shivam as of now 🤣🤣🤣🤣. Virat's bonding with Shilpa was so beautiful and so natural and I really loved their banter. And Virat's ability to come up with these names for the new people he meet would never cease to amaze me 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 And Shilpa was right to the dot, he is a TOTAL CHARMER who would do anything for the sake of her friend.


All in all update 26 was a beauty Kal. I loved it so much. Great job done 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. And about your question on the continuity of the story, please do continue it if you can. This is one of the best SaiRat FFs I have read so far and I would really like to see how they would adjust to their marital life. And you are an amazing writer and I would really love to be a part of the magic you creat on Sai and Virat in this story 😍❤. And I'm also late with my wishes, but congrats for passing the 100th page Kal...🥳🥳🥳🥳


Happy Writing ❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awwwwwwwww.......... Update 27 may be short but soooo sweet and beautiful 😍😍😍😍. From the heartfelt convo between Shilpa and Sai to the Sai's leg pulling session by Virat and Shilpa, everything was so beautiful. I think the main reason for this could be the easy going dynamics between each relationship. And Shilpa is handling her cupid duties so well....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


When it comes to friendship between Sai and Shilpa, Shilpa is the friend we all wish to have in our lives. She is sound in her advices, sorted and sure in what she wants (and most importantly plays cupid for her bestie as well 🤭🤭🤭🤭) and she is always there to give Sai a slight push to the right direction, when Sai is hesitant. In this update, all Sai's thoughts and confusion are justifiable. She so wants to fall head over heels for Virat but at the same time afraid and not want to lose her self. And Shilpa's advice that it is ok to lose herself in her love once is sound and true coz after all, you will be living your life only once and Sai has the full right to let go and experience for a while how it would be to drown in love.


The budding friendship between Virat and Shilpa looks so natural and easy going just like they are two long lost friends who are getting connected over a common ground, Sai 🤩. And I'm sure Shivam is also going to be that kind of a friend to Sai in the future.


And of course how to forget our Sairat convo????The way, Virat so casually questioned Sai and made sure that no one is around.......🤣🤣🤣🤣. So sneaky and smart. And the way, they confessed each other that they do not want to get married to any one else but each other....awwwwwwwwwwww😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. I'm truly in love with this update.🤩🤩🤩🤩


Another fabulous chapter dear Kal. Great job done 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻.


Happy Writing ❤❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Usne tumhare baare mei ulta seedha bol diya, mujhe gussa aaya aur maine ek lagaa diya, Jaise apne koyi bigde hue bache ke saath karta hai, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki mujhe anger problem hai. Mujhe itna toh Haq hona chahiye ki Mai apne chothe bhai ko Achaa aur bure ke seekh de saku, agar tumhe abhi bhi problem hai, ki maine Samrat ke saath bura kiya, toh mai Kuch nahi kar sakta.

part 15


I think with this dialogue

Virat has made it clear to Sai

That this is between the brothers

And if she has a problem with that so be it

She feels he is standing up for her

But in a way, he is standing up for himself

Nice!


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