Vishwaash ff part 1,2 &3 - Page 2

oh yessss!! Part 2..yip yip

bless your heart, Pallavi

Wow!! Subah subah yeh padh kar dil khush ho gaya❤️❤️

Superb, Pallavi👍🏼

Please do continue soon...we need such stories to get theu the next couple of weeks

Pallavi 🤗 Part 3 is also superb!! Loved the way Vir was enjoying Purvi's tadap about the divorce papers😆

I wish they show PurVir chasing each other in the haveli...and then finally catching up n applying colour

Thanks so much for this...you certainly improved the❤️ weekend

So this the what if version agar Sab apna dimag use kare to 😆😆

Pallavi yr this is too good ❤️❤️ haye holi wala scene

Lol mujhe wait nai karna padha Maine teeno part sath me padhe🤭🤭🤭

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Thank u all. For your precious comments.

Sach bolu to ye likhne me maine bahut socha. Love scenes likhne me pareshani nhi hoti. But when u write abt emotional seperation scenes dimaag me scenes hi nhi aate. How many times i delete scenes, even i dont know.

But acche comments padkar accha laga. 🤗

Originally posted by: Nezuko

So this the what if version agar Sab apna dimag use kare to 😆😆

Pallavi yr this is too good ❤️❤️ haye holi wala scene

Lol mujhe wait nai karna padha Maine teeno part sath me padhe🤭🤭🤭

👏👏👏

Holi wala scene mujhe bhi bahut pasand aaya

Pallavi you are our saviour

Read all the three parts in one go.. It's so Beautifully written..Loved it yaar..

And Holi wala scene☺️ Maza aa gaya..

Please do write more..

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Pallavi you are our saviour

Read all the three parts in one go.. It's so Beautifully written..Loved it yaar..

And Holi wala scene☺️ Maza aa gaya..

Please do write more..

THANKU😊BG SONG LIKHNA BHUL GAI THI. EDITED

ANG LAGA DE RE MOHE RANG LAGA DE RE

HOLI WALA SCENE MAINE BAHUT DIL SE LIKHA. TAB TAK PADHNA JAB TAK TOUGH PHASE KHATAM NA HO JAYE. 😆

hey was about to comment but got a call in between

Hii Pallo 😛 just read the all 3 parts in one go.. it was amazing 👍🏼👏

i loved how vir came to save her, how he told his bawwriii about his fake divorce plan and how he enjoys her curiosity 😆

Holi scene was too good like how they applied from their cheeks to cheeks ang laga de re was started playing on my mind automatically though u forgot to add bgm 😛 loved reading it..❤️

Originally posted by: PriAmAddiction

hey was about to comment but got a call in between

Hii Pallo 😛 just read the all 3 parts in one go.. it was amazing 👍🏼👏

i loved how vir came to save her, how he told his bawwriii about his fake divorce plan and how he enjoys her curiosity 😆

Holi scene was too good like how they applied from their cheeks to cheeks ang laga de re was started playing on my mind automatically though u forgot to add bgm 😛 loved reading it..❤️

I m glad that you liked it❤️