Update New SS: PURA BHI HOGA TUMHI SE..Chapter 4 on Pg 12 - Page 6

It’s like you have exposed the want in Pakhi behind the susheeltha front she puts upin front of the family.

The characters are little dark but it’s a different take and you have done a great job

I am loving it...

Pakhis character is so dark... and she has been exposed...

Wow beautiful

I can’t wait to read more

wow!!!even after so much happened patralekha can only think in terms of her lose over sai? she really needs to be admitted in asylum. please continue. wager to know bhavani’s pov.❤️❤️❤️

It's awesome loved it plz continue.

Originally posted by: emah04

I am loving it...

Pakhis character is so dark... and she has been exposed...

Wow beautiful

I can’t wait to read more

I personally believe that Patralekha character has shades of black more than grey and that's what I have tried to potray here.

Originally posted by: raji02

wow!!!even after so much happened patralekha can only think in terms of her lose over sai? she really needs to be admitted in asylum. please continue. wager to know bhavani’s pov.❤️❤️❤️

As Janki once mentioned, in her analysis..Patralekha does not love anyone aprt from herself, her whole existence depends on Sai.

People can only rectify themselves when they know their faults.but Patralekha is too busy finding faults with others ; that she never does the self introspection

OHHHH MYYY EFFING GOD!
IT'S LIKE YOU MADE A MARK TO GET ME UTTERLY SHOCKED PLEASANTLY WITH YOUR WRITING!
What a chap mannnhhhh! 😲
So finally, I got to know abt papi didi...jeez that low woman. 😡
Oh gosh, I really don't wanna talk abt her. Ugh, she got me disgusted when she tried touching Virat. Can this woman stoop any more low?
Anyways, It was a good chap. Virat not giving a flying f***abt her and she becoming non-existent for other family members too, Serves her right. (deep breaths) I still can't believe she went so desperate to want to f*** Virat so badly🤬. Goddamnit, I'm losing my cool. I don't wanna talk abt her anymore.😕
eagerly waiting for the next update. 👍🏼
much love ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: lezcrasile

OHHHH MYYY EFFING GOD!
IT'S LIKE YOU MADE A MARK TO GET ME UTTERLY SHOCKED PLEASANTLY WITH YOUR WRITING!
What a chap mannnhhhh! 😲
So finally, I got to know abt papi didi...jeez that low woman. 😡
Oh gosh, I really don't wanna talk abt her. Ugh, she got me disgusted when she tried touching Virat. Can this woman stoop any more low?
Anyways, It was a good chap. Virat not giving a flying f***abt her and she becoming non-existent for other family members too, Serves her right. (deep breaths) I still can't believe she went so desperate to want to f*** Virat so badly🤬. Goddamnit, I'm losing my cool. I don't wanna talk abt her anymore.😕
eagerly waiting for the next update. 👍🏼
much love ❤️🤗

Thank you ..thank u and thank u☺

Itni Taareef ke liye...but I am happy that you loved the storyline, to be honest , i was a little nit anxious with story line.

But glad you liked it.

Read it in one go

Whatva piece of art

Loved it

Cheaplekha's tactics aren't going to work. Hope samrat comes back and throw her out of the house

Hope virat and sai becomes one someday

Would love to read every one's redemption of their wrong deeds

I love it ...

Emotional cheating is more dangerous and morally wrong

Virat was wrong to drag saai Into a marriage where she could never have him emo.

Plus he did did worse things of disrespecting and not trusting her

Communication, trust , respect are as imp as love

I don't know why peep make such a big deal out of physical intimacy

They are seperated and in their eyes not married anymore . Like hunger , physical intimacy is a need sometimes an outlet for survival in depression.

When people are seperated and divorce is going on we cannot expect people to live without intimacy.

Sometimes u need some care and intimacy to live life

Air BHI gham hai zamane Mai mohabbat me siva