CAPTIVE 2 UPDATED LAST PART ON PG 55 / 11-7-2021 - Page 17

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Nice update

Maan feeling bored doing bodyguards job

Maan emotional for his dadu

Someone again attacked geet

Maan save geet

Geet hear his brother talk to someone

Geet asked her brother wt happens

But geet brother taunts her

Waiting for next update

Nice update

Maan feeling bored doing bodyguards job

Maan emotional for his dadu

Someone again attacked geet

Maan save geet

Geet hear his brother talk to someone

Geet asked her brother wt happens

But geet brother taunts her

Waiting for next update .

Nice part. Some one attack again after her brother outburst I hope he is not doing. Maan is know how to save her. Let see what next.

Super update

So Maan now working as bodyguard officially

The first day passes as usual without any hassle Maan is bored as he has to b at her side all the time. But he has accepted that cause of his dadu. He is so soft when he meets his dadu but for others he is like a lion on the prowl.

But again there's an incident where Geet driver gets hit and car bang the tree there r goons with guns and try to hurt Geet but Maan is alert & takes them all down. He tells Geet that why only the driver was shot that too on hands only it's a thought to ponder.

Geets brother sounds fishy

Lovely update, so Maan hinting at something about the attack, I don’t know if I bring too cryptic but felt like Geet itself is behind the attack. I had doubts on her brother but for some reason it is fading. I feel I looking for too much mystery😛

Spectacular update -part 5

Maan is going through the motions of his duty but he finds his job boring compared to his usual rambunctious lifestyle 😆

But it was definitely the calm b4 the storm

I like how our “supermaan” did his calculations & was able to knock down 4 guys single handedly like bowling balls😆

Maan is so astute that he questions geet how these professionals only wounded the driver in the arm ??? Good point!

Geet overhears her cousin ?? Or brother’s suspicious convo ........ . I am glad that she questioned him but his response was very startling ........ he seems extremely jealous of geet . Is he behind these attacks ??? He seems like he is upto something

Meanwhile I adore 🥰 maan’s moments with his grandfather........ his rough exterior breaks down into a child just wanting the warmth of his parent...... LOVED 💗THAT PART !!!

I love how you show us the different shades to his character.

Extremely well written di !! Love your writing style !!!

Thank you for pm, pw & the spectacular update !!!

Nice Update

Geet staring Maan and Maan caught it , loved it

The lion got some work after a week and saved Geet from goons in a blink, loved it but Maan gave hint to Geet that attacker is someone who knows Geet and may be ghar ka koi banda ho sakta hai

Geet,s brother,s behaviour is suspicious and I think Geet will be alert this time

Eagerly waiting for next

PART - 6

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