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SAIRAT OS - Door kaise jaoon, janey ko kisney kaha?

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Posted: 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update again. Loved the Devi tai-Sai moments,as well as Devi tai-Sai and Virat moments as well.

I also liked how you involved simple ,normal instances of life and Sairat.

Best part: Thank god Viru only bought gift for Tai and Sai ,and also did not involve someone else.(We all know who)

Keep writing. 🙂

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Posted: 3 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Awesome update again. Loved the Devi tai-Sai moments,as well as Devi tai-Sai and Virat moments as well.

I also liked how you involved simple ,normal instances of life and Sairat.

Best part: Thank god Viru only bought gift for Tai and Sai ,and also did not involve someone else.(We all know who)

Keep writing. 🙂


Thanks 😊


@bold lol 

I wanted to add Sai asking if he got something for others but it would become too much I thought 😂😂. Aai ke baare mein bhi socha but sometimes getting gift for just spouse is fine 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

This content was originally posted by: laksh

Virat reaches home from work. Scans the house, those eyes, no where to be seen here. He moves towards his room looking forward to spend some nice time and also to have dinner together. Kyun na karoon, aaj thoda jaldi aa gaya hoon saath milkar khana hi kha lete hain he thinks. That is the only time she might sit with me, warna she will bury herself in her motey motey books. 


Nope, no luck, yahaan bhi nahi. Lo, mein toh aa gaya par woh nahi dikh rahi.


He changes, and freshens up and takes out his files and is checking a few things that he wanted to. Been sometime but that someone hasn't come to the room yet. He goes to her desk, looking at how fat her books are and wonders how she studies so much. He has  been a studious kid himself but he doubts if he will be able to study as much as her. No wonder she has topped in the entrance exam too. 


He starts to get impatient now, abhi tak nahi aayi he thinks. I should have known, ya toh terrace pe pad rahi hogi ya phir, oh I see Tai ke room mein hogi, aur kahan.


He then realises that she obviously is going to be spending more time there than their own room. Lucky Tai he says and blushes. Virat tu toh Tai se bhi jealous ho raha hai aaj kal and smiles and hits himself.


Chalo dekhkhe aata hoon ki mere do pyaari pyaari ladkiyaan kya kar rahen hain.


Moves towards the room slowly to give them a surprise. 


He can hear some music.


 jeevan ko abhi khushiyan milne waali hai

O Hariyali banno 


And then he stops right there mesmerized yet another time with her moves and her adayen. What a sight to behold, she is dancing gracefully to the song and teaching a few moves to his Tai too who is enjoying it not like a kid but like a woman who is about to get married. 


Should he be looking at his woman or the kind hearted soul who just showers so much love on others with absolutely no expectations. 


He is brought out of his trance, mehendi hai rachne waali haathon mein gehri .....


And then he notices how the two women have been dancing showing their arms and palms adorned with an imaginary mehendi on it. Wait what, she has worn a chunri on her head? Beautiful, why am I not able to find the right adjective he thinks. 


Their bond is so beautiful and pure and something that no one can understand. How in such a short period of time has she managed to make a place in his Tai's heart, a place that is not given to anyone that easily (by both the women he adds and smiles).


 Tai ka hi kyun, mera bhi toh he thinks and then blushes. Oh god Virat, the two girls in front would have also not blushed as much as you, what's wrong with you. This girl will just swallow you, madam ki jo attitude hai, uske saamne mera toh kuch bhi nahi he thinks. 


They twirl and twirl and are laughing and enjoying the moment so much. He didn't know when his legs started to move towards the two and kind of startled them but then he signed them to continue by joining them in the dance and enjoying every second of this. 


Sai first gets startled looking at him and then eases slowly when he starts to dance with them. She feels a little shy with the chunri on her head and due to the song and his appearance all of a sudden. 


He twirls his Tai and then when his Tai pushes him towards Sai, both look at each other and Sai just lowers her eyes. He then holds her hands and starts dancing with her trying to look into her eyes which is still looking at the ground. Virat holds her chin and lifts her face and makes her look at him. She looks at him and they both start searching something in each other's eyes. Tai becomes very happy looking at them and watches them in awe.


 Virat changes his position a little and pulls her a little closer, Sai gets surprised with his move but lets him take the lead. They both are lost in each other and the clap of Tai brings Sai back to her senses and she tries to come out of his hold but he refuses to leave her. 


Sai looks at him questioningly but Virat challenges her. Virat senses that this is all new to her and Tai is in the same room, he then starts to twirl her around, round and round and when she gets a little giddy and is about to fall, he bends a little forward and catches her in his arms all the while looking at her.


The music stops, their legs have stopped moving but they continue to be in the same position for sometime. This is very new to them, their first dance together, the proximity awakens new sensations in Sai and Virat is in cloud nine thinking that she has also got affected as much as him. 


Sai Viru ki jodi kitni acchi hai, ekdum sacchi. Both of them move from their position and look at Devi Tai and Sai hugs her. 


Virat then says Tai, aapko itna khush dekhke mein bahut khush hoon. He then says he will be back in a minute.


 He returns and has his arms behind his back and then says mere paas kuch hai and smiles.

 Tai gets all excited and asks Viru kya hai, mujhe do na. 

He says nah, aap pehle guess karo and then Tai says pata hai mujhe, chocolate and jumps up and down. 

Sai looks at the duo and smiles and feels very happy. 

He says nahi and she pouts, he then brings it forward and shows it to her. 

It is a beautiful maang teeka. He then says Tai aapki shaadi hone waali hai, toh main aapke liye koi gift laana chahtha tha, mujhe laga pehle mein angooti leke aaon par woh toh Pulkit leke aayengey, isliye socha maang teeka le aata hoon. She looks at it all excited and becomes very happy. 


Virat asks, accha laga? Pasand aaya? Tai then asks Sai to help her wear it and then shows it to Viru, mujhe bahut accha laga, tu bol Viru mein kaisi lag rahi hoon.


Virat gets all emotional and smiles and hugs her. 

Sai feels very happy and gets reminded of how her aaba used to love her like this. She then prays to god that Tai gets all the happiness in the world, she also prays Virat sir ko humesha aise hi khush rakhna and gets tears in her eyes. 


Virat notices this and asks her through signs if she is okay and she nods her head saying yes. 


Both of them return to the room after saying bye to Tai and letting her rest.


Virat had laid their dinner on the table and Sai understands that he was waiting for her to have it together. She then opens the tray and notices a small box next to the bowls while Virat keeps glancing at her sideways acting all innocent. 


She looks at him but he keeps looking at his file, there is a small written note, thank you Sai. 


She opens the box and finds a beautiful pair of payal in it. It was so beautiful, an intricate design in payal with kundan pear shaped drops. Sai gets all emotional and looks at Virat who by now is by her side. 


He asks her through his eyes if she likes it and she nods her head in full excitement and gives him her best smile. 


He signals her to wear it and she then asks him why did he get her a gift again through eyes.


He then holds her hands makes her sit on the chair, he sits on the ground, pulls her legs and makes her wear the payal. Sai just couldn't understand what was happening but she let it be and was also loving this new feeling. She looks at him lost and with lots of questions in her eyes.


He then breaks the silence, tumhare pair bahut sundar lag rahe hain. Jis din tumhe tumhare pairon par alta lagaya hua dekha aur usi pairon pe allergy ki nishaan bhi dekha, main leke aana chahtha tha. Aaj socha tumhare liye aur Tai ke liye kuch leke aaoon. Tumne jo Tai ki zindagi mein khushiyan bhar di hai, uske liye thank you Sai. Tumhe pasand aaya? 


Sai is overwhelmed and looks at him and her feet. She is left speechless as to how much he thinks about her and how fortunate she is to have him. Sai thinks what is she going to do for him, will she ever be able to repay him? Returning his money with interest is not enough, never, how will she ever be able to thank him. 

   Sai looks at him and thinks Virat Sir aap yeh ya kar rahe hain, aapke taraf kheench rahen hain mujhe, itna kamzor bana rahen hain, aise mein aapse kabhi door nahi jaa paoongi, chahthey kya hain aap. 

Virat looks at her beautiful feet and then her. He notices her confusion, can sense her taking slow and hesitant steps towards him, his life, but trying to stop herself. Virat thinks Sai, khudko mat rokho, I will never let you leave. 


She then composes herself and says thank you Virat sir. She gets up and tries to move and says woh meri bhi Tai hain. Police waala hoke mujhe rishwath de rahe hain aap?

Virat then gets up and then stops her and says, patni ko gift de ra hoon, haq hai mera and looks at her, challenging her to reply and smiles fully aware that she would not dare to open her mouth after this.


Here you go, one more from me. Hope you guys like it. 


Very nice, Kash aise scenes serial mein hote. Very nicely written. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

lovely. ise scenes dekhna gamara nasib mein kyun nahi hai!!!!jokes apart it is very well written . ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovvvve it!


Kaash hamara Virat aisa hota. Par woh toh gadha hai 🤦🏻‍♀️ 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Awwww this is simply awesome

Loved it 

I really hope some day we get to see scenes like this in our show 

Do write more

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Posted: 3 years ago

The second last para stole the show!! Keep writing more 

Posted: 3 years ago

Aww this is beautiful!♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

It's amazing loved it. Tai and sairat's bond is ❤❤.