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Posted: 4 years ago

As usual awesome. So Virat came to Chandra

Ur. Nice. I thought he won’t let her drive that long, so sweet of him. He is getting know sai. I like their conversations, let them talk about their work issues and both come up with a solution. Sai’s dad is so happy. Eagerly waiting for next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

So here I'm again for the update 12 🤭🤭🤭🤭

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And one of the reasons why I really liked this update was how both Sai and Virat openly admitted about their "pata nahi" feelings regarding their marriage without tip toeing around each other with silly and nonsensical excuses. Both of them cares about each other tremendously, with Virat being vocal and open about it and Sai being sure in heart heart but refusing to accept it in her mind. But marriage is a commitment for a life time and getting into it without being 100% sure of their feelings for each other could leave both of them with broken hearts. Sai's "pata nahi" is understandable due to the own confusing battle between her heart and mind. Could it be because from Virat's end, his "pata nahi" was because he still does not understand the true depth of his feelings that well. Yes, he understands that he feels for her with an intensity and depth, which is a far cry from that of friends. And that's the reason he refused to be her friend first coz he knows he can not toned down his intense feelings, which keeps intensifying each day, to a level of friendship no matter what. But does he understand his feelings 100%?? I don't think so. But his small efforts to get atleast a single step closer to her indicates that he is more than willing to find the correct answer to that "pata nahi" together with her, if she allows him to.


A fantastic job done on this update as well dear👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. I would once again say that you are an amazing writer coz you are combining all this myriad of feelings and emotions and various shades of each character in to a one story so beautifully. Kudos to all your efforts 🤩👍🏻


Happy writing ❤


Nina I just loved how you analysed this, really. Just beautiful

Articulated it so well, I feel like you have been able to find the pulse of Virat in this explanation. In many ways they are similar, they have to act immediately. They are independent minded and impatient but just the levels are different, maybe. Thank you for this, it makes me think of my characters too, lovely!

🙏🏽🙏🏽💗


Edited by columbia - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Love love and love girl!!!!


Sai agreed!!!! 😁😁

Virat is way ghai gagbad case!!! 😂😂 Apne family KO bhi Inform Nahi kiya and came here jhatpat


Usha is sooo smart and soooo motherly... She conveyed her thoughts and hopes for sai so nicely.... and without offending anyone!!!


Cute movement between sai an virat to enjoy the mundane..... Watching her do the basic house work.... Sitting at temple...... Enjoying and cherishing the moment...❤️❤️


Happy writing!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kudi maan gayi shaadi ke liye 😃

Awesome update

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Posted: 4 years ago

these two are so cutee❤️

and columbia you are on a roll these days

updates every day wow🥳

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Posted: 4 years ago

HATS OFF TO UR WRITING SKILL ...💕💕❤️👍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia

I was planning to thank everyone, but decided to post the part instead. You can thank Gayatri and Nina for it 💗Will continue to read comments after posting. Please continue to comment and thank you for all the love. Am missing romance-addict


Part 14


It’s Friday around noon, they have just had lunch. Her father is chatting away with Usha Maushi, no one would have guessed this man has had stents put it 4 days ago, she shakes her head listening to them talk about whether garlic or ginger goes with goda masala. The doorbell rings and she knows who it is before she even opens the door. She sits straight and stares at her toes and then curls them and plants them tight on the floor. The bell rings again, poor Maushi steps out, hits her shoulder while walking to the door and opens it.


Her father steps out and exclaims, “Arrey ya ya..Usha, yehi hai ACP Virat”.

A deep voice replies, “Abb toh aap mujhe Virat keh sakte ho” and then turns to Maushi and gives her a box “Usha Maushi aap ke liye, Uncle ko nahi”.

Maushi is shy, but he holds her by the shoulder and insists.

“Kis ke liye?”

With a straight face, he says, “Aapki Sai shaadi karne vaali hai”

Her father claps his hands in excitement and says, “Sai..sachh?!” And tears corner his eyes. He blinks them while his daughter gets up and walks to him.

“Aap royenge toh nahi karungi”

Kamal pats his daughter’s hand and looks at Virat. “Toh Tumne mana hi liya?”

Sai gets irritated, “ismei inko kyu credit mil raha hai?”

Virat with a mischievous smile says, “Actually Sai ne mujhe manna liya”.

Everyone laughs, as Usha Maushi takes the box of sweets and walks into the kitchen saying she will serve it and Kamal follows her.


The couple stare at each other. Virat in a white shirt on jeans holds Sai’s wrist, she gasps but let’s him hold it. Her back is to the kitchen and he is stands opposite her.

He bends and moves his lips under ear whispering, “Just Sai, thank you”.

She smiles softly, “it’s ok.”

He smirks, raises his head and says “Vaise thank you toh tumhe kehna chahiye”

She looks at him and says, in all seriousness, “Bus mei aaye? Shoulder thik hai?”

He nods with a hmmm and then unbuttons a single button below his open collar button, she stares and whispers “Kya kar rahe ho”

He takes the hand he has been holding and let’s her fingers run on his shoulder, “tum batao, shoulder thik hai?” Her hand is hot over his skin, and the scar feels jagged and yet soft. She whispers looking into his eyes, “time lagega”.

He looks into her eyes, “I don’t mind”.

Suddenly, Usha Maushi calls out from the kitchen, “Sai..” Sai tries to pull her hand away from under the collar, yelling, “Haan aa rahi hun” he doesn’t let her, she pushes him, all bothered, and walks to the kitchen door, with him following with his trademark smirk.


Usha Maavshi is in the kitchen with a plate and arti and her father is seated at dining table smiling, Maavshi signs her to bring Virat also inside. He stands close to her, not holding her hand opposite Maavshi as she takes their aarti and tells them to take Abaa’s blessings, they do. Her father blesses them, pats Virat’s shoulder and Sai’s face. Sai has seen her father this happy when she got into medical college, is marriage really that important? She thinks. Her father seems to be chatting with him


“Khana khaya tumne? Thoda varan bhaat hai, kaogey?”

He washes his hands in the kitchen tap and grabs a plate from the shelf, like he was born to eat in the kitchen, while she heats the bhaat for him. She takes the plate from him and serves the bhaat and gives it to him. He sits at the table and starts tucking it in, while Maavshi offers some achaar to go with it.

“Apni Sai ko mirchi achaar bahut pasand hai” Maavshi relates while adjusting her pallu. He smiles at her and asks for more.

“Toh tumhare Aai baba ko bata diya” Kamal asks.

“Nahi, hum pehle aapko batana chahte the”. He replies and continues eating. Her father is touched, and she can’t deny it, she is too, just like that he knew this is what she would have wanted. Her father is slowly getting up, “main dupahar ke liye thoda rest le lu, uske baad tumhare baba se baat karunga, thik hai. Virat, tum raat ke liye ruk rahe ho na? Baatei karenge tab”. Virat smiles, and Sai helps her dad to the room.


When the father and daughter are in the room, he with no inhibitions asks for a second helping which brings limitless joy to Usha Maavshi,

“Sai ko bachpan se padhai ka hi shauk thaa, baaki sab bache, TV, computer, dost, picture, ismei hi busy the, lekin apni Sai ko buss Doctor banna thaa. Raat raat bhar padhti, Jaise voh sirf doctor banne ke liye hi ji rahi ho”

He winks at Maavshi with a mischievous smile and says,. “Toh matlab Sai ko Khana banana nahi aata”

Maavshi blushes, “Aga bai, aisa thodi boli mai”

He continues grinning and says, “Sai Doctori kabhi nahi chodegi, aap fikr mat karo”

Maavshi grins and says, “Apni Sai bahut swabhimani hai, agar voh khud badalna chahe, toh tum bhi usse rok nahi sakte, lekin haan, Sai se pyaar karna bahut asaan hai, kyunki voh pyaar ke badle mei sirf shudh pyaar deti hai. Maine sunna tumhare Aai baba nazdiq mei rehte hai, Sai ko bada phamily se hamesha lagaav hai,”

Virat nods listening to more small bits of Sai’s personality.


Maavshi has stepped out for some errands, while Sai is folding clothes in her room, and Virat is seated on her bed, uninvited, a leg folded and foot tucked under the other thigh which is dangling off the bed, his hands are busy playing catch with his phone, while he stares at Sai walking around and putting folded clothes in her cupboard. She isn’t looking at him, but is very aware of him.


He looks at her desk, “Toh tum yaha baithke state topper bani?” She smiles as she continues to put things away, “Haan. bachpan se ek hi desk use kiya hai maine”.

She shuts the cupboard door and turns to look at him, leaning on the door.

“Aur jab padhai se break ke liye kya karti thi?”He peers at her

“Paas mei ek temple hai, vaha jaake bench pe baith jaati”

He stands up, and walks towards her, “Chalein?”


She nods, goes check on her father and texts Maavshi. They take the short walk to the temple. They sit on the bench next to each other. Virat relaxed with his ankle on the other knee and his hand around her resting on the back of the bench and she crossed legged leaning on the back of the bench with folded hands. Even though its late in the afternoon, the bench is under a tree and not very sunny. They are people watching.


“Uncle aur secretary, ya father aur beti”

“Uncle apne secretary ko mandir kyu leke aayenge??”

“Prayaschit karne, hey Bhagwan mujhe maaf kar de ki mai apne secretary ke saath time spend kar raha hun, lekin tum hi Dekho kitni hot hai” he says very seriously.

She laughs and snarking adds, “Achaa toh voh hot hai?”

He is not even sheepish, looks at her and says flatly, “of course, agar nahi maanti, toh uncle se puch lete hai”

She bites her cheek, gives him a side eye, “Achaa jaake puchlo, agar beti nikli, chappal toh tumhe padne vaale hai, aur soch lo, yeh mandir hai, chappalo ki koi kami nahi”

He laughs, “Rehne do, mere paas bahut chappal hai”

They laugh together. He looks at her and whispers, “Vaise vahaa koi Aunty tumhe ghur ke dekh rahi hai”

An Aunty comes by and says, “Aga Sai..tu hi hai na? Pata chala Joshi Saheb ka operation ke baare mei, tu unke liye aayi hai na, kaise hai voh? Aur tu kaisi hai?”

Sai gets up and a part of her dupatta falls on Virat’s lap. He picks up the edge and feels it, and plays with it, completely ignoring the conversation, when his ears pick up on

“Aur yeh tumhara mangetar hai? Doctor hai na?”

Sai just returns with a smile, the awkward silence goes on longer for a minute and the Aunty looks at Virat and has an uneasy smile.

“Jee nahi, Mai Doctor nahi, IPS hun, ACP Nagpur mei”, he says flatly, while sitting, still holding the edge of her dupatta.

Sai half turns and looks at him. The Aunty nods with an “ache Achaa” and leaves.

“Kuch kehne ki kya zrurat thi?”

“Usse laga ki Mai Doctor hun, agar unhe Kuch ho jaata yahi pe, aur sabse kehti ki yeh Doctor hai, mujhe bachaa legaa, tab aur bhi beizzati ho jaati” he says seriously, still fiddling with her dupatta.

She makes a face, pulls her dupatta from him, “chaliye Ghar chalte hai, bahut ho gaya hot girls aur Gali ki auntiyan”

He stands and chuckles, “ok Just Sai”

She mock glares, “mut bulayiye, Just Sai..main aapse naraaz hun”

He holds her elbow and whispers into her face, “Toh kab bulau?”

She smiles a little, and then with big eyes, “Thodi der baad, main aapse thodi aur gussa toh ho jaun?”

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my dear sweetheart,thanks a lot for giving back to back update...i am in love with your write.


my fav parts:

  1. Just sai - Indicates more deeper meaning. For me(Virat) sai is everything,i (Virat) dont want anyone else but Just Sai.😉
  2. He looks at her desk, “Toh tum yaha baithke state topper bani?” - You are taking us back to our childhood days,our school, our old home,place..missing everything..😭
  3. with him following with his trademark smirk. He winks at Maavshi .I really want this to happen in the show.him smirking and winks at sai.how will neil bhatt look in that😆
  4. chappal toh tumhe padne vaale hai, I Think we are too much obssessed with chappal especially using it for virat that,we are not missing to use it in every FF,SS,OS.
  5. Sai gets up and a part of her dupatta falls on Virat’s lap. He picks up the edge and feels it, and plays with it, completely ignoring the conversation, yeh tho bachoan ka harkataen kar raha hey🤣😆.i really loved this part. Either we do this with our mother's saree or hamari saheliyaan...wish i become a kid again.🥺
  6. He takes the hand he has been holding and let’s her fingers run on his shoulder, “tum batao, shoulder thik hai?” Deewana,pagal,he is not in his sense at all..patha nahi suhaag raat mein kya karega🤣😆pagal ho jayega..

Please dont kill sai's aaba in this..Atleast let you spare him🤣.but my instinct says you are going to write a big drama in the next update,sai's emotional breakdown🤣🤪😆...


First time giving a detailed feedback. Thank you once again.


you know more than writing, i love to use 😆😈😆...

Edited by chinnu_kaku - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Never change that just Sai thing! Its too adorbs ❤️

I love it when he calls her that

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Posted: 4 years ago

I love your Sai and Virat .They are too too real .Beautiful writing ,Kudos !

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Posted: 4 years ago

wow!!!!simply superb. lived how virat knew sai would want her father to be informed first and respected her wish. i loved their conversation about how sai needing a little more time to be comfortable with the idea of marriage and virat saying that he wont mind waiting. they may seem to be talking about his injury but both understood what the other is trying to say. they had this connection from the very first meet and it seems to be growing day by day.

just like us sai melts when virat calls her ‘just sai’, so he wants him to call her that when she is a little more angry, so sweet. waiting for the next update.❤️❤️❤️❤️

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