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Posted: 4 years ago

Heyyyy......sorry for being late. Got stuck with some work related issues and only today I got free time for myself😭😭. But guess how surprised I was when I saw not only one but 3 UPDATES 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. You JUST MADE MY DAY!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤ You are AWSOME 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻.


Soooo, about update 11, I think this update showed various facets of bondings, in both emotional and physical levels. The loving and caring aspects of physical bonding between a child and parents, both between Sai and Abba and Sai with Chavuan couple was beautifully portrayed in this update. When a person is in emotional distress due to worry and fear, no matter how much independent or brave you try to be, you will definitely need support and who else would understand this need other than a parent???? The assurance and the trust that "we are here for you" was beautifully brought out today with all the interactions between Sai and the older people. Her agreeing to have food with them even when she is worried about her dad shows her appreciation towards that bonding and support.

But she doesn't break down in front of them coz the only person who can provide the level of emotional support she yearns for is not there. Thus she breaking down in Virat's arms when he came to her when she least expected it destroyed her pretense of bravery regarding her father's situation. And Virat really knows how to make an impression in his girl's heart coz this will further strengthen Virat's place in her heart 😍😍😍😍😍.


And once again it was proved that "mothers REALLY know it all" coz they notice everything when it comes to their child 🤭🤭. Ashwini sure has noticed the similarities between Virat and Sai and that Sai will be the best shot Virat can have at an understanding and caring partner. It coupled with Ninand's high regard on Sai must have confirmed her decision. And I couldn't stop laughing when she so innocently informed Sai of how Horlicks bottle from flat ended up in Medical Camp 🤣🤣🤣🤣 and Sai having a fit knowing who is the culprit and why it ended up there..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


An amazing update dear and a great job done like always in this update as well👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. I'm hoping to write another comment for update 12 🤩🤩🤩🤩


Happy Writing ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Cute update!!!


Shilpa understands sai and even life in general quite better than sai herself at times....

Valuable life lessons out there!!!!


Impatient virat causes indirect suspension for self and even shivam.... That is not great!!!


Pura chandrapur Nagpur AA Raha hai..... Shaadi ke details final home wale hai is Baar??? Will impatient virat get all frisky with sai??

I wonder how will samrat react to this... Mayb he will be indifferent....


Kya Shivam An Shilpa mein Kuch ho Sakta hai in the near future??


I am hoping sai an her job remains safe .... It was unavoidable family Emergency after all!!! Her senior doctor might be old acquaintance or professor....


Happy writing!!!


Can we get lil lalchi an expect an update by evening??

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Posted: 4 years ago

So here I'm again for the update 12 🤭🤭🤭🤭


I really really liked this update coz it was both funny+entertaining but deep and emotional at the same time. And trust me, I was grinning like an idiot myself when Kamal asked Virat about him being there. I was 110% sure that Sai was ready to smack Virat on the head 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 if he answered in affirmative to the question whether he asked his parents to ask for Sai's hand. But on a serious note, it was a very wise decision from Virat's end to clear up that he himself ask his parents to look for an alliance for him but did not specifically asked for Sai.


And one of the reasons why I really liked this update was how both Sai and Virat openly admitted about their "pata nahi" feelings regarding their marriage without tip toeing around each other with silly and nonsensical excuses. Both of them cares about each other tremendously, with Virat being vocal and open about it and Sai being sure in her heart but refusing to accept it in her mind. But marriage is a commitment for a life time and getting into it without being 100% sure of their feelings for each other could leave both of them with broken hearts. Sai's "pata nahi" is understandable due to the confusing battle between her heart and mind. But from Virat's end, could it be that his "pata nahi" was because he still does not understand the true depth of his feelings that well. Yes, he understands that he feels for her with an intensity and depth, which is a far cry from that of friends. And that's the reason he refused to be her friend first coz he knows he can not toned down his intense feelings, which keeps intensifying each day, to a level of friendship no matter what. But does he understand his feelings 100%?? I don't think so. But his small efforts to get atleast a single step closer to her indicates that he is more than willing to find the correct answer to that "pata nahi" together with her, if she allows him to.


A fantastic job done on this update as well dear👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. I would once again say that you are an amazing writer coz you are combining all this myriad of feelings and emotions and various shades of each character in to a one story so beautifully. Kudos to all your efforts 🤩👍🏻


Happy writing ❤

Edited by Ninabarbie - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

OMG.......Sai FINALLY AGREED!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🎊🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉. Awwwwwww I'm soooooo happy 🤩🤩🤩 Seems like she is finally trying to take the steps to come out of her fear of totally losing herself in this love. I'm so proud of her.....🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. Now I can definitely say by far this is my favourite chapter 🤩🤩🤩🤩.


And I really really love our Shilpa /Shivam duo to the bits ❤❤❤ That Shilpa who was swooning in the beginning of the chapter was SOOOOOO ME🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣!!! And she was 100% correct. Marriage is a life time commitment and understanding your partner is necessary. But understanding your own feelings and expectations from a marriage is more important than that because it will make sure that you will not loose your own identity in the long run. And is it too much to hope for something between Shilpa and Shivam.............???????????😍😍😍😍


And not only in their habits, Sairat is having a connection when it comes to other incidents in their life as well???. Both of them having work related issues and hiding it from their respective families. They are SOULMATES.......😍😍 But on a serious note I hope that work issue will be solved well for all Sai, Virat and Shivam . Don't want them to suffer 💔💔💔💔 and keep doing what they like.


Another fabulous update dear.....🤩👍🏻. Will be really grateful if we can get that other update tonight as well. Fingers crossed till next update 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻.


Happy Writing ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow.... Hurra... Sai maangay, maangay.... I am so happy... I really hope their professional lives get sorted as soon as possible... But ya seriously your story is very good combination of both drama and love... Very nice

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Posted: 4 years ago

I was planning to thank everyone, but decided to post the part instead. You can thank Gayatri and Nina for it 💗Will continue to read comments after posting. Please continue to comment and thank you for all the love. Am missing romance-addict


Part 14


It’s Friday around noon, they have just had lunch. Her father is chatting away with Usha Maushi, no one would have guessed this man has had stents put it 4 days ago, she shakes her head listening to them talk about whether garlic or ginger goes with goda masala. The doorbell rings and she knows who it is before she even opens the door. She sits straight and stares at her toes and then curls them and plants them tight on the floor. The bell rings again, poor Maushi steps out, hits her shoulder while walking to the door and opens it.


Her father steps out and exclaims, “Arrey ya ya..Usha, yehi hai ACP Virat”.

A deep voice replies, “Abb toh aap mujhe Virat keh sakte ho” and then turns to Maushi and gives her a box “Usha Maushi aap ke liye, Uncle ko nahi”.

Maushi is shy, but he holds her by the shoulder and insists.

“Kis ke liye?”

With a straight face, he says, “Aapki Sai shaadi karne vaali hai”

Her father claps his hands in excitement and says, “Sai..sachh?!” And tears corner his eyes. He blinks them while his daughter gets up and walks to him.

“Aap royenge toh nahi karungi”

Kamal pats his daughter’s hand and looks at Virat. “Toh Tumne mana hi liya?”

Sai gets irritated, “ismei inko kyu credit mil raha hai?”

Virat with a mischievous smile says, “Actually Sai ne mujhe manna liya”.

Everyone laughs, as Usha Maushi takes the box of sweets and walks into the kitchen saying she will serve it and Kamal follows her.


The couple stare at each other. Virat in a white shirt on jeans holds Sai’s wrist, she gasps but let’s him hold it. Her back is to the kitchen and he is stands opposite her.

He bends and moves his lips under ear whispering, “Just Sai, thank you”.

She smiles softly, “it’s ok.”

He smirks, raises his head and says “Vaise thank you toh tumhe kehna chahiye”

She looks at him and says, in all seriousness, “Bus mei aaye? Shoulder thik hai?”

He nods with a hmmm and then unbuttons a single button below his open collar button, she stares and whispers “Kya kar rahe ho”

He takes the hand he has been holding and let’s her fingers run on his shoulder, “tum batao, shoulder thik hai?” Her hand is hot over his skin, and the scar feels jagged and yet soft. She whispers looking into his eyes, “time lagega”.

He looks into her eyes, “I don’t mind”.

Suddenly, Usha Maushi calls out from the kitchen, “Sai..” Sai tries to pull her hand away from under the collar, yelling, “Haan aa rahi hun” he doesn’t let her, she pushes him, all bothered, and walks to the kitchen door, with him following with his trademark smirk.


Usha Maavshi is in the kitchen with a plate and arti and her father is seated at dining table smiling, Maavshi signs her to bring Virat also inside. He stands close to her, not holding her hand opposite Maavshi as she takes their aarti and tells them to take Abaa’s blessings, they do. Her father blesses them, pats Virat’s shoulder and Sai’s face. Sai has seen her father this happy when she got into medical college, is marriage really that important? She thinks. Her father seems to be chatting with him


“Khana khaya tumne? Thoda varan bhaat hai, kaogey?”

He washes his hands in the kitchen tap and grabs a plate from the shelf, like he was born to eat in the kitchen, while she heats the bhaat for him. She takes the plate from him and serves the bhaat and gives it to him. He sits at the table and starts tucking it in, while Maavshi offers some achaar to go with it.

“Apni Sai ko mirchi achaar bahut pasand hai” Maavshi relates while adjusting her pallu. He smiles at her and asks for more.

“Toh tumhare Aai baba ko bata diya” Kamal asks.

“Nahi, hum pehle aapko batana chahte the”. He replies and continues eating. Her father is touched, and she can’t deny it, she is too, just like that he knew this is what she would have wanted. Her father is slowly getting up, “main dupahar ke liye thoda rest le lu, uske baad tumhare baba se baat karunga, thik hai. Virat, tum raat ke liye ruk rahe ho na? Baatei karenge tab”. Virat smiles, and Sai helps her dad to the room.


When the father and daughter are in the room, he with no inhibitions asks for a second helping which brings limitless joy to Usha Maavshi,

“Sai ko bachpan se padhai ka hi shauk thaa, baaki sab bache, TV, computer, dost, picture, ismei hi busy the, lekin apni Sai ko buss Doctor banna thaa. Raat raat bhar padhti, Jaise voh sirf doctor banne ke liye hi ji rahi ho”

He winks at Maavshi with a mischievous smile and says,. “Toh matlab Sai ko Khana banana nahi aata”

Maavshi blushes, “Aga bai, aisa thodi boli mai”

He continues grinning and says, “Sai Doctori kabhi nahi chodegi, aap fikr mat karo”

Maavshi grins and says, “Apni Sai bahut swabhimani hai, agar voh khud badalna chahe, toh tum bhi usse rok nahi sakte, lekin haan, Sai se pyaar karna bahut asaan hai, kyunki voh pyaar ke badle mei sirf shudh pyaar deti hai. Maine sunna tumhare Aai baba nazdiq mei rehte hai, Sai ko bada phamily se hamesha lagaav hai,”

Virat nods listening to more small bits of Sai’s personality.


Maavshi has stepped out for some errands, while Sai is folding clothes in her room, and Virat is seated on her bed, uninvited, a leg folded and foot tucked under the other thigh which is dangling off the bed, his hands are busy playing catch with his phone, while he stares at Sai walking around and putting folded clothes in her cupboard. She isn’t looking at him, but is very aware of him.


He looks at her desk, “Toh tum yaha baithke state topper bani?” She smiles as she continues to put things away, “Haan. bachpan se ek hi desk use kiya hai maine”.

She shuts the cupboard door and turns to look at him, leaning on the door.

“Aur jab padhai se break ke liye kya karti thi?”He peers at her

“Paas mei ek temple hai, vaha jaake bench pe baith jaati”

He stands up, and walks towards her, “Chalein?”


She nods, goes check on her father and texts Maavshi. They take the short walk to the temple. They sit on the bench next to each other. Virat relaxed with his ankle on the other knee and his hand around her resting on the back of the bench and she crossed legged leaning on the back of the bench with folded hands. Even though its late in the afternoon, the bench is under a tree and not very sunny. They are people watching.


“Uncle aur secretary, ya father aur beti”

“Uncle apne secretary ko mandir kyu leke aayenge??”

“Prayaschit karne, hey Bhagwan mujhe maaf kar de ki mai apne secretary ke saath time spend kar raha hun, lekin tum hi Dekho kitni hot hai” he says very seriously.

She laughs and snarking adds, “Achaa toh voh hot hai?”

He is not even sheepish, looks at her and says flatly, “of course, agar nahi maanti, toh uncle se puch lete hai”

She bites her cheek, gives him a side eye, “Achaa jaake puchlo, agar beti nikli, chappal toh tumhe padne vaale hai, aur soch lo, yeh mandir hai, chappalo ki koi kami nahi”

He laughs, “Rehne do, mere paas bahut chappal hai”

They laugh together. He looks at her and whispers, “Vaise vahaa koi Aunty tumhe ghur ke dekh rahi hai”

An Aunty comes by and says, “Aga Sai..tu hi hai na? Pata chala Joshi Saheb ka operation ke baare mei, tu unke liye aayi hai na, kaise hai voh? Aur tu kaisi hai?”

Sai gets up and a part of her dupatta falls on Virat’s lap. He picks up the edge and feels it, and plays with it, completely ignoring the conversation, when his ears pick up on

“Aur yeh tumhara mangetar hai? Doctor hai na?”

Sai just returns with a smile, the awkward silence goes on longer for a minute and the Aunty looks at Virat and has an uneasy smile.

“Jee nahi, Mai Doctor nahi, IPS hun, ACP Nagpur mei”, he says flatly, while sitting, still holding the edge of her dupatta.

Sai half turns and looks at him. The Aunty nods with an “ache Achaa” and leaves.

“Kuch kehne ki kya zrurat thi?”

“Usse laga ki Mai Doctor hun, agar unhe Kuch ho jaata yahi pe, aur sabse kehti ki yeh Doctor hai, mujhe bachaa legaa, tab aur bhi beizzati ho jaati” he says seriously, still fiddling with her dupatta.

She makes a face, pulls her dupatta from him, “chaliye Ghar chalte hai, bahut ho gaya hot girls aur Gali ki auntiyan”

He stands and chuckles, “ok Just Sai”

She mock glares, “mut bulayiye, Just Sai..main aapse naraaz hun”

He holds her elbow and whispers into her face, “Toh kab bulau?”

She smiles a little, and then with big eyes, “Thodi der baad, main aapse thodi aur gussa toh ho jaun?”

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Edited by columbia - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Okay where to start, I so wanted them to go on the boat ride in that chapter but Virat had to go on work. i really loved the inclusion of Bhiku gang, it was well weaved into the story.


It was a real surprise to me that Virat’s parents are so aware about their sons wishes. No drama approaching other alliances which was brilliant.


I also liked Virat’s refusing the condition wala bath when he is at Sai’s place to give moral support to her. Tadpathi hoon was 🙈.

It was so Sai of her to drop everything when she heard ACP was shot. And how the kiss was weaved into the story was brilliantly placed .

I love how differently she accepted the marriage proposal. You have amazingly developed the story to hook us on to the plot.


can’t wait for the next update after this horrifying week of tiring tv episodes :)


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Posted: 4 years ago

It's superb virat is trying to know more about sai from usha mausi ,he love her so much😍😍.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Love Sai-Virat here. They’re so cute; feels so real❤️ Love your work, you really have a way with words. Impressive 💫

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update dear

Loved it

They are really cute

So janab sai ki jawab miltey hi aagayi chandrapur kya baat hai

Him getting to know about sais nature bit by bit is so beautiful

And their convo give me hubby wifey kind vibe 😆 I know they are going to be but phir abhi seh mujhe woh vibe milrahi hai

So he is gonna stay there for that night

Please do continue soon

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