Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

Its just so perfect and fabulous❤️

Thank you so much cherry 😳 stay tuned for the next

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Sorry for late unres 🤗

Koi na😆😆

Yaar you know how much I love this song Thanks for choosing this 😳

Yup i know isiliye toh confirm krne se pehle teko pucha tha😳

The song and lyrics which you chose really fits well in this situation❤️

Yupas Bon has feelings for him, and upar se the way he is taking care of her... Isse better lyrics ho ni sakte the...right?

Haaye pehla pehla pyaar vaali feels ☺️ Next vaala Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar pe likh rahi ho kya? ☺️❤️

Han pehla pehla pyar hai...pehli pehli bar hai☺️

Next one jaldi pta chal jayega🤪tna toh bta diya hai ke it will HIS pov...eekkkss i'm so excited for the next one

I loved their puchka and chaat date vaala idea 😛 Mujhe bhi khaana hai 😭

Jab likha tha yeh part mera bhi man huya tha😭

Poor Bon 🤣 She said pyaara pati in the spur of the moment ☺️🤪🤣 Ani ke dil me ghanti bajj gayi hogi 🤪

I think Ani ke dil ka telephone bajne lga hai let's see aage kya hota hai😆

Awww Bon ko Ani se pyaar ho raha hai ☺️

Bon ko toh pyar pehle hi ho chuka hai magar🤪

It was really a very sober and subtle way to start their romance...

Thank you so much...tere review ka humesha intezar rehta hai🤗

Loved it!!! 🤗

Thank you again🤗

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Unresed

Shukriya

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Amazing Jyoti!

I loved the end specially! The wishful thinking and the pinning away she experiences is 🥺

Sorry for the late comment. I have been busy with exams and havent been active on IF recently.

Thank you Akshu🤗

Sometimes so many thoughts overpower you when you don't get the same reciprocation from the person you love🥺

And no need to be sorry darling🤗 i hope i didn't disturb you😆 hope you are doing good😳

It was beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ thank you so much for writing and sharing always 🥰🤗

Originally posted by: Ms.akabane

It was beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ thank you so much for writing and sharing always 🥰🤗

Thank you much dear❤️🤗

OS 6? 🤔Did I miss any part😲

Jyoti 🤗again fantastic job.

More than fantastic.Its so so lovely ❤️

I feel so light, good and full of love everytime I read your os's.

Aisa lagta hain ki khatam hi na ho yeh joh tum likhti ho❤️

I'll not say I'm impatient, but ek request hain😳Tiny intimate sequence toh banta hain ek❤️😆☺️

Haha,ise kamsekam dobaar padhke souungi❤️

Awwwww it was full off awww moments yaar and your signature :') nostalgia hits hard

It part was sooo soothing yaar 🖤💞 loved it

"******OS 5 feedback*****"

Jyoti,first of all, apologies for being so careless😡

Gussa a raha hain mujhe khudpar😵control....!!!😒

Aww, so basically Kaun Mera aur Lo Safar,donon se we can infer that both are absolutely immersed in the most purest form of love for each other!

Especially Anirudh,he cannot afford to lose her company for even a day or two🤪.He's such a nice soul.He's ready to do everything so that Bondita isn't reminded of the negativities that once plunged hard in her heart.

Your fictional Anirudh is honestly husband goals!Ab bas BONDITA ko pata chal jaay ki Anirudh bhi usse usi tarah se chahta hain.

Jyoti, your stories radiate so much freshness and positivity!surreal!

Jaldi likhna aage kya kya hoga👍🏼😳