FF is this my home pt:75 pg:105(14/6)

Is this my home?

Hi frds iam new to ff as a writer but I have read most of the ffs on our jb. This is mine imaginary part involving all character names of our beloved ks but description different and story starts like this

PART:1

Our bani (Dixit / mehra / walia ) returning from US going to mount abu for marriage of her half sister meera

Returning India after 5 yrs , notices the changes all over the place new buildings etc .ride .remembering all the past events ,sitting in the taxi .

Our jai (mr.walia) in his office doing the work busy with his employees angry on their mistakes. Phone rings .Invitation to mrgg and reception of his frd tarun sablok.Accepts it but says he is busy so he cannot come to mrgg but will be for reception

Bani reached mt.abu and the house wearing a blue plain salwar kameez with glasses . rano and pia waiting for bani receive her warmly.

Pia and rano are twins but do not look same and neither have same dreams in life. Pia is in fashion designing and rano is in mbbs (doctor).

Pia and rano are 6yrs younger to bani.they are not her sisters but her half sisters.

The welcome is warm except for one person.

Bani enters the home. {is it her home ?, no}

In the hall nishikant dixit is talking over phone on mrrg preparations looks at bani and hugs her warmly

"Kaise hoo beti ,bahut saal hogai tumhe dekh ke ?"

"Mein Mumbai mein hoon papa .aur papa mein theek hoon aap kaise hain"

Touching his feet for blessings and wipes her eyes so that the tears do not flow down

Nishikant asks one of the workers to take her to her room

Bani enquire about aunty (2^nd wife of nishikanth dixit) they say she is in her room

Bani goes there .kirthi(her aunty)sitting on bed giving instructions to workers over decorations .looks at bani but doesn't speak bani comes near her bends to take her blessings asking abt her well being .

Aunty: "I am fine .how r u? till when r u going to stay?"

Bani :"I am fine aunty .i will be until mrg only and I will leave as soon as possible."

After telling that she leaves. Kirthi starts taunting manhoos kahi ki....Bani hears it but doesn't say a word.Goes to her room shared with pia and rano.

By the way pia and rano r not daughters of nishikant and kirthi

They r happy to see her and ask various questions.

Pia and rano:Di kaise hain apka US ,hamare liye kya laye ? apka dost pushky kaisa hai?and etc

Bani: US achha hai. Open the bags for ur gift but don't open pink box that is for meera and I didn't meet her where is she.

Pia: she went to beauty parlor for some make up.

Rano: di aap sabko Mumbai mein ho aisa kyon kehthi hain ?

app sachh nahin batana chahthi aap 5yrs se hamein sirf phone par baat karte hain.is bar hum appko nahin bejne wale kahein bhi.aap hamare sath Mumbai mein hi raheinge.

Bani: haan haan soochthi hoon. Waise ab muje tumhare saath hi rehna hain tumhare rishtey jo dekhne hain.koi boy frds to nahin batao na pia kuch chakkar vakkar chal raha hai kya.😉

Pia: di appko hamesha aisa kyon lagta hai ki mein hi aisa kyon karoongi?😆

Rano:kyon ki tum aise hi ho!!!!

Aur phir jagda

Bani: tum log abhi badle nahin ho .vaise hi jagad the ho .rano tumhare padai kaise chal rahe hain.Kitne patients ka haal bura kiya?

Pia: di ye jise chuthi hai woh to bichara gaya kaamse. 😆

Rano: aise koi baat nahi hain di. Mera ab1 1/2 yrs hain ab exams ke baat mein mera mgm main junior dr ki training hain.to main Mumbai mein hi rahoongi.Di aap Mumbai shift ho jayee na pls.

Bani: pia tera kaisa hain.

Pia: mein Mumbai mein senior designers ke supervision ke andar kaam karna chahthi hoon.di, aap Mumbai aajaye ye hum sab saat rah sakte hain .di, ab akela rehna pasand nahin maa ki jane ke baat aap hi hamare sabkuch hain par aap hamein chodkar US chalein gaye ab to pls hamare saath raheye.

Bani: muje bhi tum logon se door nahin rahena .achha teek hain mein Mumbai shift hote hoon.ab bas koi aur baat nahin .

Rano: di ,bookh lag raha hai.😛

Pia: pure chocolates to khatam kiya ab kaisa bhook.mooti😡

Rano :muje tere jaise maintain karne ki jaroorat nahin kyunki mein bahut kubsoorat hoon tumhare jaise nahin😆

Bani: ab tum log phir se shuru ho gaye. Accha muje bhi bhook lag raha hain chalo kana khate hain

Bani gets down from bed and door opens , meera enters wearing a simple salwar and rushes to bani and hugs her.

Meera is 3yrs younger to bani.

Meera: di aap kaise hain, kab aaye,aap ne muje maaf kar diya and starts crying

Bani: are mein abhi aye hun , aur kaise maafi ab roan mat pls . vaise bahut cute lag rahe hoon hamare jeejo ka kya naam hain, kaise hain, kaise mile ab bataugi ya nahin

Meera: di voh ,unka naam tarun hain. Voh ek vakeel hain Mumbai mein kaam karte hain ,voh college ke anniversary function me milain aur bas hogaya.

Bani: vaah bai ,muje mallom nahin ki itna sab kuch ho gaya tune kuch nahin bataya mein tuj oe gussa hoon

Meera; di soory,kaan pakadte hoon maaf karo na .

Bani :acha teek hain maaf kiya

Rano and pia who went to take food come into the rom look at bani and meera .give a small smile .

Pia and rano and meera donot have good relation but for their bani di they keep quiet.

They brought rice and dal in one plate and water.

B:Ok now u all r not eating or wat?

P: di we will eat after wards.

B:nahin u will all eat with me. And she shares her food with all the other 3

They all smile and are happy. Nishikant who comes to see for some work looks at the sceen and feels happy.

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Okay frds there r so many things like

Rano ,pia,meera relation

Bani, pia and rano relation

Our j and b relation all will come in next parts.

Now frds if u like my story line then pls encourage me

Our jb will be together as all ways

Gr8 starting
plz cont soon
]will be waiting for next part

looking for ward for jb milan
pls cotninue

davia

intersting story something different
pia, rano, meera bani all sisters 😆 😆 😆
cant wait to see your story progress

well frds thanxs to yousha,piku,kitkat,hirpreet.
i will be continuing the story soon

Hey
the starting was gud
but i am some what confused who is whose real sister
who is half sisiter and who are their parents 😕
Well next part may clear my doubt
Waiting for next one
Thanksssssssssssssssss

After the lunch bani takes some rest while pia and rano go for refreshments and meera to her wouldbe tarun over phone.
After that at night ,bani doesn't come to dinner .Its only meera and nishikanth and kirthi Even rano and pia are in there room

R and p came to mrrg only for their bani di

The next day is haldi bani is in her room along with r,p,meera

Meera gets ready the relatives have come. kirthi comes to see meera and calls her out.


When meera sits and elders start applying haldi one by one some ask bani to put haldi on meera but looking towards aunty bani refuses but on furher saying she applies it. Keerthi aunty is not happy seeing this.


In the evening the mehendi ceremony is there when meera mehendi was started all people laugh and make fun.then meera asks bani to put mehendi in her hand first bani refuses but r&p also say .

So a girl starts applying mehendi .in the middle pia goes to the girl and tells her in the ear to put the name jai in the mehendi
And it should be hidden

Bani looks at pia seriously about to say something when aunty says yeh abhagan ko kya mehendi lagaon gay jiska pati ne use chod diya ho?

Listening this bani gets up and runs to her room
Meera ,pia and rano r angry but no word is uttered.

In the room bani sleeps on the bed and remembers the days when




Flash back 1

she was 5yrs kiran her mother had come to see her .

Kiran and nishikant were married .after bani was born they were divorced for some reason.

Nishikanth mrrd kirthi and meera was born after 2yrs.bani was with nishikanth as court gave him the custody.

Kirthi loved bani initially until meera came into her life .kiran had mrrd mr.mehra 40yr old business man whose first wife died in an accident and no children after he was mrrd to kiran ,pia and rano were born.
Kiran used to visit bani once in a while.

When bani started going school,her vacation was only with kiran in her home.

So bani attached to her mother
Like this her bachpan of 14yrs goes. Nishikanth doesn't care abt bani much he loves her but doesnot spend time with her
Kirthi starts controlling bani by always taunting her and she is afraid to speak to anyone evev to kiran she doesnot say a word.

Suddenly kiran knows wat happened to bani and speaks to mr.mehra for bani custody he agrees abt tht and the court allows kiran to take her
.kiran and mr.mehra leaves the children (r&p) in her home and they go to nishikanth house .on the way they met an accident and both die on the spot.

Bani cries that day like anything then she goes to pia and rano and brings them to her home.

Seeing this keerthi is very angry and shouts at her saying inka kharcha kaun uthayaga etc.

Bani goes to her dad and says papa pls allow p*r to be with us .the money for their expenses will be born by me.

Listening to this nishikanth feels bad was abt to say no need to pay then kirthi says okay and tells her their monthly will be paid by bani.
Bani agrees so they stay in same room.r&p go to school.

Bani starts teaching students giving tuitions and the amt goes to kirthi .she also works part time.

Her day used to start at 4: in the morning ,taking bath, going out and doing pooja and cooking breakfast and lunch at 6:oo the students wuld come for tuiton at 8:30 leaving r ,p&m are woken up and make them ready take them to school along with her and after coming at 4 she used to go for her part time and come at 8 and prepare dinner and serve and tudy for her 10th exams till 12 oclock

The door opens and rano ,pia enter the room bani sees them and wipes her tears and smiles at them.




So frd now understood,

Bani daughter of kiran and nishikanth

Meera dauter of nishikanth and kirthi

Pia and rano daughters of kira and mr.mehra


Our jand b will come soon

Hi all, I was wondering if anyone knows the songs that is played occasionally on Kasamh Se and whould like to leave both names...Thank YOU

wonderful start pls cont soon....

hi readers,
thanxs for spending ur valuable time in readding my ff but i want some feedbacks so that i can change any thing tht u dont like and also for boosting my confidence