Thank you all for your lovely comments. Loved reading each of them, @romance_addict is missing, hope all is ok đ€đ
Thank you all for your lovely comments. Loved reading each of them, @romance_addict is missing, hope all is ok đ€đ
Thank you all for loving Virat - I wanted to write someone who I thought Virat was going to be - a man who is sure of himself, who knows to stand up for what is right, who is sensitive and can be stubborn, relaxed and passionate guy, like a new age sexy. I felt that was possible with the showâs Virat , but alas.
I have stopped watching the show, now only write this Virat and Sai - so thank you all for your comments
@ninabarbie - if the promo was a dream... I hope not too! I hate when ITV creatives do that, it really undermines our intelligence na, so I will never dare to do that with my lovely readers.
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Some messages on previous page for my commentors, I love you all but my special love is reserved for those odd 10 of you who have read and commented from my first chapter. I hope I will always be able to match your faith in me, thank you thank you,
Part 8
It is the latter part of the week, Thursday evening to be precise, this was supposed to be the week of nothingness before everyone from her batch moves on to the next thing in their lives. Thankfully Samrat and she had not made any plans, because he was to be in Nagpur with his family and she was hoping to spend an extra day before she joined the camp over the coming weekend. But none of that now, a part of her did wonder how his family was doing and she has a sad smile thinking they must be thoroughly enjoying themselves. She was thinking of each of them, and then stopped when Virat âs face entered her imagination. But she always pushes it away. He never made an attempt to call her, not that she missed it or looked forward to it, no way! In fact, she doesnât want to even discuss it so when Shilpa insists to talking about it all, she is dismissive
âKya matlab Samrat ke dada tumhe chodne aaya thaa??â Shilpa questions, Sai rolls her eyes, âKuch nahi, unko I think zara controlling ki adat hai, voh sab chodh na, tu apni bata!â Shilpa looks at her suspiciously âTu kya chupa rahi hai? Uncle keh rahe the ki unse milke bahut Achaa lagaâ, Sai makes a face, âkyu nahi lagta, Bilkul unki tarah hai, IPS kahaniyan, bekaar jokes, aur self importance ki toh limitâ Shilpa tilts her head, âcome on, kitna sweet to drop you all the wayâ Sai âplease haan, sweet Kuch nahi, batameezi thi, apne aap ko bahut smart samajhte hai, I am not interested!â Shilpa stares at her, âwhat do you mean, not interested?!â
Shivam roars on the phone laughing, âTu apne bhai ke ex- fiancĂ© mei interested hai, tu apna life ko jitna complicated bana sakta hai...tujhe toh medal milna chahiyeâ A flash of her with all his medals around his neck, he rubs his hand on his face and mutters , âTu hasna band karegaaâ that just makes his friend laugh even louder, âYaar,tujhe aisa dekhke pata nahi kyu tere par taras bhi aa raha hai aur mazaa bhi aa raha hai..â Virat rolls his eyes, âMai phone rakh raha hun, byeâ shivam cajoles, âAre are,...Achaa bol abhi, sun raha hun..abb kya iraada hai, roz call kar raha hai kya usse?â Virat seriously, âNahi, lekin Saturday ko uske ghar jaane ka plan hai, Main anyways bhivapur jaa raha hun, aur uske Abaa ke paas purane files bhi haiâ Shivam nods and says into his phone, âhmm..case ka kya Chal raha hai?â Virat replies, âTu kab aa raha hai?â And they continue to talk about the case.
As she lies on her bed next to her, Shilpa exclaims, âso sad yaar, uska family bahut sweet lagta haiâ, Sai presses her lips, âwah! ab jab engagement tut gaya hai, tab tujhe sweetness dikhayi de raha haiâ Shilpa grins, âArrey mai sirf yeh keh rahi hun, ki basically perfect jaisa kuch nahi hota, Samrat ko hi dekh le, uski family bahut achi hai, lekin usmei koi sensitivity nahi thi, aur kahi aisa bhi hota hai, ki ladka hira hota hai aur uski family mogamboâ Sai is quiet because she is lost in thinking of Virat winking at her, taking her to his house, dropping her home. Shilpa continues, âAgar Samrat ne thodi sensitivity dikhai hoti, Tumhari dekhbal ki hoti, toh aaj bhi tere ungli mei anghuta hotaâ Sai shakes her head, âMeri dekhbal karne ki zrurat nahi hai kissi ko, Mai apni dekhbal khud rakh sakti hunâ Shilpa folds her hands in a clap namaste and says âHaan meri Ma, Mai yeh nahi keh rahi hun, ki tu ablaaa naari hai, Mai yeh keh rahi hun, ki jo admi sensitive hotey hai, voh sexy hotey haiâ Sai rolls her eyes, âgenerally admi ya toh dominating hotey hai, ya insensitiveâ Shilpa looks at her and says, âitni bhi unfair mat ban, jab humei achaa nahi lagta ki society auraton ko ya toh Devi ki roop mei ya phir chudail ki roop mei dekhte hai, toh Humei bhi aadmiyon ko haivan ya berahem categories mei nahi daalna chahiyeâ. Sai becomes quiet and looks at her friend, and Shilpa holds her hand and says softly, âDekh, I know, Samrat ko leke, you are feeling hurt, lekin mai sirf yeh kahungi, ki apne aap ko dusra chance deâ Sai hugs her friend, who has been like a sister to her, she knows she will miss her. Shilpa has no interest in joining the medical camp and is waiting to hear from her uncle who is the head of emergency in a hospital in Pune.
As the night sets in, he is seated in his balcony, and Mr Dubey is yelling at his wife, âChodh kyu nahi deti, itna beraham hu tohâ to which Mrs Dubeyâs words run through the night sky âKaise chodhu, shaadi kiya hai toh nibhaana hai naâ...after a few inconspicuous words between them, a door is slammed, the lights are off and giggles are heard, and he smiles realizing all is well in the Dubey world. He picks up his phone, and goes into dialed calls and rubs his thumb against the number that has no name saved against it, before he can do anything, his phone vibrates, his mother is calling him, he is in no mood to talk. He knows that the the family has been very somber and quiet about what transpired over the weekend. His mother had called him two days ago, only to get a monosyllabic reply from him that he was at his place but he was traveling around a lot on work and will not be home during the week.He knows his mother thinks that it was his way of punishing her, but thatâs not true, he needs to figure out some things.
Ashwini hangs up, so he is not picking up, she feels terrible, but a part of her also knows that this had to be done, that in the short run, it may have seemed terrible, but in the long run 3 people have been saved from leading unhappy lives. Her husband mocked her, âTumhe lagta hai ki Tumne yeh problem ko handle kar diya hai, ki tum mahaan ho, koi Bhagwan ho, lekin sahi mayne mei voh ladki Sai actually bahut hi suljhi hui nikli, iss baar tum bach gayi, aage jaake aisa na ho.â She ignores her husbandâs warnings and knows that her elder son will come around. For now, she must concentrate on sending her younger son off to Mumbai. Samrat leaves Saturday morning, she hopes that Virat will be here with the rest of the family to say bye to him.
Itâs Friday night, her father is fussing around as she packs her suitcase. âAbba itni badi Horlicks packet ki zrurat nahi hai, main agle weekend aa jaungiâ her father smiles, âArre, roz teen baar toh peene vali ho, aur phir theek se khaana nahi khane vaali ho, voh toh pata hai mujheâ She rolls her eyes, âAur yeh protein powder vaghera mai nahi peeti, chieee!â He laughs, âchota packet rakh le, agar use kiya toh agle weekend aur leke jaana, ab chal mujhe aur bhi kaam haiâ She looks at her father, âAapko kya kaam hai?â Her father, âArrey Kuch mere purane files dekhne hai, mere paas bahut saara information hai, jo ACP Virat ke kaam aa sakeâ She curiously asks, âbhiku billi ke baare mei?â Her father is surprised, âTujhe kaise pata, Virat ne tujhe bola kya?â She shakes her head, âNahi Abba..aisa Kuch nahiâ Her father nods, âAchaa hua, kyunki voh bahut dangerous hai, jitni kum leak ho information, uske gang ko utni asaani se rok sakte haiâ she looks concerned, âAap retire ho chuke ho na, inn sab mei kyu padd rahe ho?â Her father explains, âArrey aisa nahi hai, Mumbai ka police Virat ke saath jyaada cooperate nahi kar rahi hai, toh maine socha, mere paas jo information hai, usse de deta hun, at least purani bhi ho, lekin Kuch leads toh abhi bhi kaam aayenge na, Chalâ and he leaves her with her suitcase and she continues to pack.
He decides to call his mother back, he knows Samrat is leaving the next morning. âArre Achaa hua tune call kiya, kal Samrat nikal raha hai na, hum sab milke savere breakfast karenge, tu bhi aajaâ. He shakes his head, his mother thinks she can make everything alright with pohe, but it has been awhile since he had some, âkitne bajje ka flight hai?â, his mother smiles, âsavere 9 baje ka, lekin breakfast hum log 6:30 ko kar lenge, Devyani bhi uthne vaali hai Saturday ko, voh dekhne ke liye toh tujhe zrur aana chahiyeâ he smiles at his motherâs enthu, âAa jaunga, mujhe anyways uske baad Bhivapur jaana hai, toh mai 7 bajje niklungaâ. He hangs up with a smile, he needs to stop being angry with her for so long.
The next morning, there is much activity both in the Joshi and Chauan households. The MBBS graduates are off to the next step in their journeys. But the activity has begun much earlier in the Chauvan household. After breakfast., Devyani is chatting with Samrat, âTu kya sirf Pakhi ko roj phone karega aur humei nahiâ Samrat laughs and says, âMain vaha holiday ke liye nahi jaa rahaâ Shivani who is looking outside the window says, âVeeru garden mei kya kar raha hai?â Samrat looks out and leaves to meet his brother, who is on the phone, âJee mai 11 baje takk pahunchjaunga, Bhivapur mei kaam hone ke baad... Nahi nahi, Maine breakfast kar liya hai, nahi, vahi se Nagpur ke liye niklungaâ Samrat wonders who he is chatting with, but Virat hangs up before he can try and figure out. Samrat looks at him, âKisse baat kar rahe the?â Virat replies, âKuch nahi kaam thaa..tu bataa all set.â Samrat nods, âHaan voh medical college ke locker mei kuch cheezei reh gayee hai, most probably Sai lekar aayegiâ Virat curious, âSai yaha aa rahi hai?â Samrat shakes his head âAaj nahi, agle hafte, anyways donât worry Devyani se keh diya hai, voh handle kar legiâ Virat looks at him funny, âMujhe kyu worry hona hai?â Samrat rolls his eyes, âArre you know, donât worry, voh aake aapke ghar pe nahi rukne vaali..â Virat narrows his eyes to his brother as his brother continues with no thoughts to his words, âAur voh anyways jyaada der kahi nahi rukti, ya shayad aayegi bhi nahi, voh kissi ko mauka kaha deti, very âindependentâ Sai..agar uska bass chale toh voh zindagi bhar akeli apne Abba ki tarah..â and before Samrat can complete his thought, his brother Virat clocks him on his face, Samrat almost falls to the ground, barely managing to balance himself.
Samrat holds his face, yells at his older brother âKya problem hai, Maine aisa kya keh diya?!â Virat glares at him, âTu Sai ke baare mei baat karna band kar deâ Samrat looks deep into his brotherâs eyes and starts laughing, âohhhh myyyy gooooddd..dada, aap usse pasand karne lagey ho, wow! Aai ko pata hai?. Voh toh heart attack se mar jaayegiâ Virat remains very quiet and looks away, while their father enters the garden, âYahaa kya Chal raha hai tum dono ke beech?â Samrat looks at his father, âDada se puchlo!â Virat walks away saying, âMai nikal raha hun, safe flight Samratâ. Ninaad watches his older son leave, he looks at Samrat who is adjusting his jaw and has a sly smile on his face, âChal Mai tujhe airport chodh detaa hunâ
Her father is tiptoeing around her, and she knows he wants to partake in some great philosophical lesson, she smiles quietly, âKya hai Abbba?â Her father looks at her and says, âTu thik toh hai na, matlab humne Samrat ke baare mei baat hi nahi kiâ Sai smiles and says, âAbb aapko uska naam yaad haiâ Her father smiles sheepishly, âAisa nahi hai beta, mujhe pata hai ki tu sochti hai ki mai tujhe lekar bahut possesive hun, lekin mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki, tujhe ek na ek din shaadi toh karna hi hai. Meri bass yehi ashaa hai ki tujhse jo bhi shaadi kare tujhe puri tarah apnaaye, tu sirf independent doctor hi nahi hai Sai, tu uske aage bhi bahut kuch haiâ. She looks at her father as he continues, âTu samajh rahi hai na ki mai kya keh raha hun?â She smiles and says, âHaan Abba, Mai samajh rahi hunâ her father smiles and puts his hand on her head and says, âkoi jaldi nahi hai, tu apna time le, tu pehle apne aap ko jaan le, phir dekhenge na ki kaun hai akhir tere layak!!!.â They laugh together, She thinks of her fathers words as she takes a shower and gets ready for her bus.
A few hours later, she watches her dad pack varan bhaat and khachumbar in a tiffin box for her bus journey. Her eyes fill up for the man who has been a mother, father, guide, philosopher, friend all in one , she walks and hugs him from behind, âAap bhi chaliye na mere saathâ He taps her hand, âArrey, tu mujhe chodhke jaa rahi hai, Mai kyu aau, tu hi reh jaaaâ She canât argue with that and she laughs, the doorbell rings, her father asks her, âdarwaza khol, Mai yeh sab saaf kar deta hunâ She nods, wondering who it could be, she opens the door and there standing at the door is Virat in his uniform, she has seen many a uniformed men while growing up, but never before has she been flushed and felt heat travel from the back of her neck to her cheeks before. She is shocked at her reaction, and even more irritated when he smiles and doffs his cap to her, âJust Sai.â she immediately reacts, âKyu aaye?â He smirks with a wink, âBuss aisehi.â
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Please leave a comment. Thanks so much.
Thanks so much for this story. I love Virat and Sai in this!! â€ïž wonder aage lya hoga , can't wait to read more..
I usually wait to read stories over the weekend or wait for few chapters so that i have more content to read when there is no episode, but this one was interesting right from promo till the latest update. You have such a great imagination and your writing style is awesome!!!!
Your story just made me feel so good and just filled me with so much happiness, I dont know how to explain it. Thanks again, I will be saving this and read it many times over.
very nice update. virat has his eyes set on his goal and he will not rest till he reaches his âjust saiâ. sai is attracted but trying hard not to think about him. samrat understood his dadaâs feelings for his ex-fiance. but please yaar, yeh samrat ko gayab kardo, i cannot tolerate that jerk. looking forward for just sai and acp virat.â€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïž
I absolutely adore your story. I wish Virat was like this in the show. Ff/os writers are what is keep going especially when we have a bad episode or when Virat acts up. So please continue soon.
Your writings are so good and you know how to maintain the âtarpaoâ your readers đ
I thought samrat reaction would be different. May be angry or little jealous or anything than the laugh. It shows that he did love her and she was just a good companion.
Could you please upload the next chapters ASAP đ„șđ„ș
Originally posted by: columbia
@bold - do you mean generally? Or the way I wrote it? Let me know, would love to make my writing better. Thx for the comment
I mean generally.
Sai and samrat make a weird couple. đ
I donât think you have to change your writings. IMO you are good, very good.
Iâve read some stories with mature parts and I think of you as one of the best I read.
itâs hot, bold, sexy.....đđ
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