I waa busy, srry for late rply the chptr was nicely written loved it can't wait for kamal sir and virat's meetingđđ
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I waa busy, srry for late rply the chptr was nicely written loved it can't wait for kamal sir and virat's meetingđđ
Thank you so much for your comments. I wanted to mark this as part8 but I have something else planned for that, so also to complete the weekend this one is 7A. I hope you guys continue to love and comment.
Part 7A
She tries her best to stand in such a way that her father misses him, but despite being almost the same height, Viratâs broad shoulders give him away and it doesnât help that he himself does nothing to be discreet. Her father switches a button inside the house on the side of the door but realizes itâs not working, âArrey yeh bahar ka switch kaam nahi kar raha, chalo Achaa hua tum aa gayi, Mai toh sone hi valla thaâ she moves inside the house and Virat places the bag inside the house, her father looks at him do that and says âArrey Uber mei aayi kya, chalo Achaa hua, mujhe lagaa tum bus stand ss auto lene vaali thiâ and then looks at Virat and says âThank you driver bhaisaab.â Virat stares at her father and then at her, hoping of course she will correct her father, but that was not to be, Sai never makes it simple. She squeaks âAbaaa unko bathroom use karna thaaâ ..her father nods hurriedly, âho ho,,,,please jayiye...voh aage left mei, vahee pe sabun aur towel haiâ Virat nods and side eyes Sai, who looks everywhere except at him.
Her father starts chattering away, âToh Tumne anghuti vapas kar diâ Sai hurriedly stops her father, âAabba..â nodding her head towards Virat, who is walking even slower to the bathroom. Her father continues loudly, âArrey usmei kya hai?! Driver hai. Main toh pehle hi keh raha thaa ki ladka doctor hai, iska matlab yeh nahi ki tere liye best hai, jab Shilpa ne phone karke mujhe bola, main jaake Bhagwan ke paas agarbati jalaya, Achaa hua tumhe akkal aayi.â Sai hits her head and says, âAbba ...magni ko khatm karna hum dono ka faisla thaaa, abb please aap jaake so jayiye naâ . The bathroom door shuts and the sounds of water can be heard, her father continues, âLekin kaise log hai, tujhe aise hi vapas aane de diyaâ Sai sighs and shakes her head, âAbba ...maine hi zidd ki thi, please mujh iss baare mei baat nahi karnaâ. Her father nods his head, âAchaa Achaa thik hai, chal abhi..â then points to the bathroom âAur yeh mahashay ghar banane vale hai kya andar?..â starts knocking the door âOho pahune..â the door opens and Virat stares at them.
Sai internally prays that he leaves, Virat nods and walks towards the main door. Sai almost heaves a sigh of relief, but Virat spoils it and turns and looks at her father, salutes him âSir, Mai ACP Virat Chauan, main Sai ko drop karne aaya tha, meri family ko milne aayi thi Sai, Samrat mera chota bhai hai. Jo Kuch hua, inn dono ki marzi thi aur Samrat bhi kaafi sharminda hai.â Her father just stares at him, and then stares at Sai, absolutely shocked. Sai is afraid that her father may collapse of a heart attack, she says softly â Abba aap thik hai na?â Her father bellows, âSai tu vedi aahes ka?!!?!â He yells at her pointing to Virat and then at her âMain inhe Uber driver samajh baitha aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi, kaha gaye tere manners, ghar aaye mehmaan ke saath aise karte haiâ Sai looks at him sheepishly, her father yelling at her makes her feel even more annoyed with Virat, but she just bows down , while her father goes all out for Virat, âPlease please aap andar aayiye na. Baithiye baithiye. Sai, jaa paani lekar aaaâ Sai mutters âinhone bahut paani pee liyaa vaiseâ Her father drags a chair forcing Virat to sit, Virat immediately holds her fatherâs hand and says âAap mujhe aap kyu bula rahe ho, main aapse bahut chota hun aur IPS junior bhi, DCP Sahebâ her father beams at him, âArrey ACP abhi ka abhi call karke bata do ghar pe ki aaj raat yahi sone vale ho, main abhi jaake kambal vaguera leke aata hunâ As Virat is about to tell him no, her father stops him, âNahi nahi baat sunni padegi, main abhi aata hun, Sai tu jaa paani leke aaâ
Her father goes inside and she is annoyed at him, âKya zrurat thi apne aap ko introduce karne ki? Nikal jaate na..â he gives back âUnhe laga ki meri family ne tumhare saath thik se bartaav nahi kiya, main sunke le leta kya?â She rolls her eyes, âMain Unhe samjha detiâ he rolls his eyes back at her âI donât think soâ she folds her hands and moves her upper body towards him âAaj Raat rehne ki kya zrurat hai aapko?â He replies by folding his hands and retorts, âMain tumhare Jaise nahi hun, agar koi apna ghar offer kar raha hai, toh mujhme itni manners hai ki mai thank you bolke offer le luâ she squints her eyes at him, âAchaaa, toh isiliye aap mere peeche aaye, mujhe manners seekhane?â He steps back and gloats âNaturally, tumhare aaba bhi keh rahe the, ki tumhare paas manners nahi haiâ. Before she can answer, her father appears with a blanket, pillow and a bedsheet along with a towel, soap and an extra toothbrush. He puts everything on the chair and looks at Virat with a huge smile, âYeh sofa bed ho jaata hai, Sai help kar degi, kal savere chai hamare saath pike jaana, mujhe tumse bahut saare baatein karni hai, bahut din baad, IPS junior milaa hai, mazaa aayegaâ Virat grins and nods and Sai rolls her eyes and angrily shifts the sofa making it into a bed.
After her father leaves, He turns to her, helps her pull out the bed, opens the bedsheet and unfurls it on the folded out bed, she starts to tuck the corners in, he looks at her, her feisty disposition makes him feel mischievous, âJust Sai, yaha ek hi blanket hai, agar mujhe beech raat thand lagey, toh mai tumhare paas aajau?â She glares at him, âKya?!â His smugly replies, âmatlab extra blanket ke liye aur kaha jaau?â She glares back at him and says âVaapas Nagpur!!!â He bursts out laughing, she rushes to him and shuts his mouth, âShhh! Abaaa jag jayengeâ he holds her wrist, raises his eyebrows even more mischievously and says, âAur Humei aise dekhenge Toh kya sochenge?â She continues to glare at him, a little uneasy at the proximity, moves back and turns, he holds her elbow and says softly, âMai isiliye rukk gaya kyunki tumhare Aabba ko bura lag raha thaaâ she nods and he continues âJaise tumhe Aai ke liye bura lag raha thaâ he makes her turn towards him and she looks into his eyes, he continues âTum gar chaho ki mai beech raat chala jaau toh..â she interrupts him, âNahi ruk jajiyeâ...he lets her go and flings himself on the bed, saying, âvahi toh mai keh raha tha,,.ki tum gar chaho bhi toh nahi jaane vaala, good nightâ, he hugs a cushion and turns his back to her and she rolls her eyes, and as she is about to leave the room, he whispers loudly, âJust Sai, light off kar denaâ
The next morning, when she walks into the living room, hair wet and in a long skirt and cotton top, the bed has become a sofa, her father and Virat are chatting away, she notices one cup on the coffee table and the two men look up at her, one of them admiringly which causes a flush to settle in her neck and the other worriedly, she nods at both of them and enters the kitchen, her father follows her with a âArrey usne chai ke liye na kar diya, kal raat ka baat bura maan gaye shayadâ she shakes her head and says, âAisa Kuch bhi nahi hai, Abba, voh chai nahi Horlicks peete haiâ her father smiles widely and says, âChal bana de Tum dono ke liye aur haan thode pohe bhi banade, usse nikalna hai, duty pe hai bechara, Kuch de khaane ke liyeâ and her father leaves the kitchen. She shakes her head in shock, what a different tune her father is singing, when Samrat used to come over, her dad could not wait for him to leave, and now unbelievable, she is irritated with her dadâs obvious bias.
She refuses to partake in any banter with him with her father around, not giving her father the satisfaction, but she didnât need to. As they say eating pohe, her father and he chatted merrily about IPS days, training, seniors, mess, good god! She rolled her eyes while she cleaned the table, it was like there were two of each of them, and she wasnât even drunk, they just laughed and bonded on the same things, so annoying! She stays and tinkers in the kitchen, refusing to be around when he leaves, not wanting to give any of them the satisfaction, when she hears a deep, âtumhara phone kaha hai?â She turns back and stares at him, âKyu?â She watches him spot it in the living room and walk towards it, she washes and dries her hand and enters the living room, he has opened her phone and pressed buttons and gives the phone to her âbye, Just Sai, Mai tumhe phone karungaâ she looks at him and says âKiss liye?â He answers flatly, âbaatei jo karni hai, iss liyeâ and he walks out of her home, hugs her father near his car and drives off, while she stands at the doorstep, holding the phone, trying to still her beating heart. He looks at the missed call on his phone with a wide grin and then shakes his head, what is he doing?!!
The whole of Sunday is spent in restlessness...she doesnât want him to call, he canât wait to call her. When later in the evening, her phone rings, she jumps and almost drops the book she is reading, she knows itâs him. She picks it up, determined to keep it short...
âPahunch gaye?â
âHaan, kya kar rahi ho?â He smiles, sitting on his bed
âKuch nahi kitaab padh rahi thiâ
âKaunsi?â
âAap thake nahi? long drive thaa na.â She says refusing to get chatty
âTum baat nahi karna chahti?â
She is quiet, biting her lip, unable to tell him, a yes or a no. She decides to go with
âMujhe Chandrapur vapas chodhne ke liye thank youâ
âHmmm..â
âMatlab, zruri nahi thaa, lekin Abaaa ko Achaa lagaâ..she corrects herself, in case he gets the wrong idea.
âHmmm, aur tumhe?â How is she supposed to answer that except with a,
âMujhe kya? Main toh anyways bus mei aani vaali thi..â
âHmm..â
âAgar aapko baat nahi karni hai, toh phone kyu kiya?â Tired of his noncommittal hms.
His silence eats at her, she wants to press end, but his smirk stops her,
âTumhari baatei sunne ke liye phone kiya.â
She presses end, he laughs and looks at his phone, lying down on his bed, holding the phone to his chest to calm his beating heart.
The weekend has turned out to be nothing like she had imagined, nothing like she had hoped for, nothing like she had wanted....and for him, everything he was afraid of.
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Originally posted by: notaquitter
I didnât have time to add a comment yesterday. But as usual a great update.
Like so many I like the taxi drivers dialogue. I like the unexplainable attraction that Virat has for her. I am puzzled over the promo 1 and how it is going to be included in the story.
i assumed that Virat knew about samrat and Sai breakup. Hence she left to her place. Maybe I am wrong here. Canât wait to see how the story pans out đ
@ bold - yes you have assumed correctly, Virat followed her not because he didnât know about the breakup, he followed her becos she didnât say bye to him and that irritated him.
I am liking how the promo has confused everyone, feeling quite like one devil đ about it đđ€Ł I am now very curious how it is going to be received when it finally happens đ€Șđ€Ș
Amazing. Only one thing to say, this Virat has game.
Will leave a detailed review later. Going to re-read it. đ
awww!!!!acp virat is falling hard and fast for just sai. amazing. he has strted enjoying her badbad now and calling her for the same. sai is reluctant for obvious reasons but cannot stop herself either. cant wait for their story to unfold. â€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïž
Someone needs to tell Sai's abbha that Virat is happier than him that Sai broke up with the doctorđ
It's amazing loved it virat and sai's phn call wasâ€â€. Plz update next part soon đđ.
Haha 'Driver bhaisahab' itna door chodne aaye for this LOL. Of course he wouldn't go quietly. As soon as Kamal heard ACP, man mein ladoo phoot gaye lol.
Loved how he rang her. This Virat gives me butterflies.
Looks like Virat has fallen in love with Sai...đ„ł I loved how the story is going...đđ»thank you so much for update...đđ»
Oh dear, you are making me fall in love with this Viratâ€ïž
He is witty sarcastic and what not.
Eagerly waiting for the next phase in their life.đ