Not a Disease but a Beautiful gift| Rudhita OS| Part2 on Page 1

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🤗behen

Beautiful one dear

I could imagine both of their confusion and emotions well👍🏼

I'm eagerly waiting for the second part 😳

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Alfu ❤️

Beautifully penned Rudi's emotions and Ani's care towards bon 😳

Sampoo maa yahan bhi 😡 🤬

Hope we get the similar scenes in Episode aswell 😳

Can't wait for the next part 🤪 update soon

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Beautifully written piece of work Alif 🤗

Bav j saras lakhyu chhe 😳😆

I also want to watch something similar in the upcoming episodes..

Bon is in pain and ani is restless!! You have described their emotions so well Alif👏

Waiting for the next part

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Beautiful 👏waiting for next

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Thank you for writing on this subject but I cannot comment because my Hindi is not very soon, so please translate the Hindi into English if you have time.🤗

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Alfu🤗

I read both the chapters at once... I must say you're truly a great writer for our little Bondu..

The way you penned Bon's pain and Ani's dilemma is perfect and apt....👍🏼

The reader can easily felt the pain easily with the emotions you scripted here beautifully...😭

I hope we get something like this in show too..

Great job behen... Waiting for next update... 😊

Wanna see Ani blasting Sampoorna..

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Lovely part Alif🤗

I don’t know how I missed it

You have described Bon’s emotions so perfectly.. she is going through lots of mental trauma .. good thing is ani is an intelligent man here.. the examples of sun and light for menstruation cycle given by ani is really perfect .. good thing is finally Bon understood everything what ani wanted to convey!! I loved the way you have described their emotions !! Good job girl👏

Waiting for the next part

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