Meri Muhabbat Badi Ajeeb hai..Os

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guys Wrote this os in another forum long back ,though someone copied it too ..writing it here now.


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"Doctor sahiba how are u?you here?Rani turned her head towards the source of the sound as her heart started beating vigourously at hearing the familiar voice after 11 long years,the voice of Dr.Veer Singh Rajawat."

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"Didi where are you lost ,we are getting late,we have to pack up things and leave for hospital ",Naira tried to bring her elder sister Rani out of her thoughts as they were packing stuff for their sister in law who was admitted in hospital.Rani came out of her thoughts but unfortunately quite late as they both realised that her little neice Aryana had swallowed few tablets from Rani purse and they both started panicking,Rani being a doctor was quiet in control but when she saw the little one getting the symptoms of the drugs toxic dose,she left the house in a hurry directing her driver to rush to the nearby emergency and thus they reached there rushing to the paedatrics emergency,till then Rani turned completely pale due to her diseases and the fear of losing her part,her neice,her Aryana ,her chotu.Rani was followed by her sister Naira,who was following Rani like a lifeless soul,scared of the dreadful consequences.

On reaching the third floor by climbing the never ending stairs,they rushed towards the doctors room but unfortunately due to their bad luck they found it empty,the attendant at doctors room informed that the doctor on duty had just left the office and went there,pointing to a corridor and Rani rushed towards there only to be stopped by the man asking her to stop as the doctor gonna blast at her for coming after him like that but Rani being Rani didnt listen and went forward only to be stopped in her tracks by a very familiar voice,the voice which she loved to hear long back,but it was the voice which she never wanted to hear at least in such a situation.As she turned her head,she found Dr.Veer Singh Rajawat staring at her in the same way as he used to do in college days.

"Rani u here?"Veer asked her again as she was lost somewhere."y..y..yes im here just check her please ,she asked him by looking at the half conscious Aryana in her arms,Veer heart skipped a beat as thought of Aryana being Rani daughterr hit his mind but composing himself he took her in his arms and started checking her,and testing his luck he threw a question towards Rani by looking at Naira"Rani!Howss Ramu Kaka,Rani was startled by the question as it wasnt the right time and place ,not getting his intention she simply replied,"he is good,and the next question was "where do you live ?and Rani iritatingly replied ,same house,model town "and Veer heaved a sigh of relief and moved towards Naira"you are the mother?and she nodded her head and he asked her very few necessary questions.

After losing the track for few minutes after watching his real love,his first love,his last and true love,he turned into a selfish lover but now the dr.Veer Singh was back,ordering his assisstants to prepare the emergency tools for the much needed stomach lavage for Aryana.

He really wanna save the child,he wanna save her as it was his duty,he wanna save her as she was someone child,he wanna save her because she was the girl for whom he saw tears flowing uncontrobally from Rani eyes which pierced his heart.Rani was the same girl for whom he blasted on a teacher at college for scolding his Rani and making her cry,Rani was the same girl for whom he went against the most strict teacher and called out her proxy by showing himself as an absent student.Rani was the same girl for whom he threatened the college guys as to not utter a single bad word against her.

Rani was the same girl whom he loved once and whom he loves still,with these thoughts he almost ran towards the emergency room attending aryana,he so wanted to wipe Rani tears,to hug her,to take her in his embrace assuring her of his love ,assuring her of him being by her side but he cant,though he tried his best to soothe her aching heart with his assuring words and suddenly he heard a patient telling someone that the little girl whom the doctor is attending is his relatives and Veer heart sank as Rani wasnt his relative but she was his LIFE.

After sometime which seemed ages aryana was saved fully conscious crying and asking her favourite mausi Rani to take her in her arms.Veer Singh Rajawat succeeded in giving smile to the person who was the real reason behind his smile.

Rani took her in her arms carrying her out of the room pacing here and there to pacify the disturbed little girl unaware of the pair of eyes gazing at her and picturising the never possible future with his Rani carrying his and Rani daughter in her arms and suddenly he noticed a lone tear leaving his eye.

The wound is deep and forever ,he still want her but she is far away from him,she is still single and this truth warm up his heart but he cant have her.

He cant have her but he can enjoy the few moments with her and he went to the doctors night room which he offered to Rani as little aryana was reluctant in going back to that emergency room.

He decided to call her one last time the way he used to call her "Rani "and she stood up hearing him that way after 11 long years.

"Rani please come here",and she followed him only to b stopped by him, she is fine ,you guys can take her home , he wanted to tell her alot but he cant,he left her ,leaving through the door bidding her bye,he was near but so far,he still love Rani, his heart still beats for Rani,he is selfish he moved on but today his heart danced at the fact that Rani is still single.Veer Singh Rajawat left from there repeating these lines in his mind

Meri Mohabbat badi ajeeb h

Itne dor hote hue be wo dil k buhut qareeb hai

Koi manne naa maane isse

Mera dil hi mera sab se bada raqeeb hai

Meri mohabbat badi ajeeb hai

Meri mohabbat badi ajeeb hai

Ajeeb hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it. So beautiful. I know it's an OS but love if you can continue. Love to read their reunion too.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Loved it. So beautiful. I know it's an OS but love if you can continue. Love to read their reunion too.

thank u so much fr these encouraging words🤗

Will try to continue.

I have many ideas in my mind,will try to post soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful! 🤗 Yes please do continue ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow please continue this reunion dikha do!!!!!

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