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Posted: 5 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Superb update n vaibhav now knows that his bhai is jealous seeing his bonding with purvi bcoz he thought that vaibhav like her n he told vaibhav to purvi bhabhi n vaibhav thought about what sanyukta told him n he is ready to help her n thnxx for pm me

Happy to know you enjoyed😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Hey Nish first of all sorry i missed it i didn't pay attention to the date ...silly me šŸ˜†

Tabhi main sochu, ki I kept waiting and Ziva n feedback nhi diya😃


lovely updtā¤ļø...am loving this jealous Vir ufff...the way he roared ā€œPAR MUJHE AITRAAZ HAI!ā€ šŸ˜Ž...i can imagine it šŸ˜†šŸ¤£

There's a lot more where it came from. Muahahaha!😈


Looking forward to Vai plan...but i hope Pur ll realise that Vir is damn jealousšŸ˜ˆšŸ˜†

Lets see. Maybe later~😈


Thks for the updt Nish šŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
#83

Ha ab to lottery lag Gaye hai sai me 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Vaise maine 3 episodes dekhe (sorry slow ho Gaye hu ab pehle mai 24 episodes dekh lete thi ek din me)

That anime is quite good

It took me a little time to get used to with Chinese (Korean and Japanese are fine esa lagta hai Japanese to mere 3rd language ho Gaye hai🤭)

But animation was beautiful Like really beautiful I didn't expect this much mtlb cgi or 2d animation ka itna kamal ka blend tha art style plays a major role

I find cgi little distracting during night time when they were fighting with bride zombies

That ML is such a adorable man šŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆ

The war flashback scenes were really good

Story interesting lag rahi šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”

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Posted: 5 years ago
#84

Part 7 - Raakh


Yet again! Once again!

Fingers clenching into fist, Virender tried to rein in his bubbling anger or he was sure to explode. With brows drawn together and profanity waiting at the tip of his tongue, he stared-glared as Vaibhav stood at the doorway and fumbled with his words.

ā€œPurvi, I had to ask somethingā€¦ā€ He trailed, corner of his vision pricking with deadly glares.

Purvi nodded and tilting her head, waited while Vaibhav gulped, trying his best to maintain his faƧade of a smile, what with his head placed under guillotine in this instant!

ā€œHa..vohā€¦ā€ Scratching his forehead, he gulped and send off his prayers to heavens. God knows he needed it!

ā€œC-Can we talk outside?ā€

'Or I might die inside!'

Purvi squinted her eyes in confusion at his request but nodded nonetheless, and turned towards Virender, who was immersed in reading a book.

As if! Vaibhav scoffed at his poor pretense. Bhai is definitely choking the ink out of that book, imagining it as my neck!

ā€œHum abhi aate hainā€ And with that she stepped out after Vaibhav.

(ā€œI’ll be right backā€)

Virender who had schooled his expressions to nonchalance let the faƧade fall and menace dawned over his persona. Flinging the book to one side (Titled- How to kill slowllly!) he rose to his feet, strode to the doorway and peered from behind the doors, cautious. But there was no one. Baffled, he stepped out into the hallway and saw two silhouettes disappear at the end of corridor and into a room. He followed suit, his steps urgent and halting near the open window, he peeked inside.

ā€œWhich one should I wear?ā€ Vaibhav asked pointing to his bed littered with garments.

ā€œYe sab kya hai?ā€ Purvi suppressed a chuckle at his confusion as she looked over the outfits.

(ā€œWhat is all this?ā€)

ā€œThat…there’s a function at my friend’s place..soā€¦ā€ Vaibhav trailed.

ā€œAcha…hum batate hainā€.

(ā€œAlright, let me help thenā€)

And after going through all the outfits, she narrowed down on a formal wear and a traditional wear.

Picking up the coat, Vaibhav gave it once over. ā€œI think it’s too formalā€.

ā€œBas fir aap ye kurta daal janaā€, Purvi piped up as Vaibhav picked the kurta.

(ā€œIn that case, you should wear the kurtaā€)

ā€œBlue?ā€ He asked with raised brows and she nodded, ā€œ Haan! As far as I’ve seen,you really like blue so I chose for you a blue oneā€.

ā€œAnd what about you?ā€ Vaibhav quipped and Virender felt his fingers twitch. He could hear them. And he could see him. And he didn’t like what he was seeing.

ā€œHum, kya?ā€ (ā€œWhat about me?ā€)

ā€œWhat is your preference?ā€ He asked, his eyes following hers as she looked down. Smiling, Vaibhav went to the bed and picked up a white kurta embroidered with gold designs. ā€œHow about this one?ā€

Purvi looked up slowly and her eyes widened. It had caught her eye instantly and yet she had not recommended this one to Vaibhav. It wasn’t his to wear.

ā€œBut you don’t like lighter shades?ā€ She commented, more like tried to talk him out of wearing this one. She had bought this for Virender.

ā€œBut you do!ā€ An instant reply followed and Virender fought the urge to throttle him. His brother badly wanted to die young!

As Purvi passed Vaibhav a baffled look, he cleared his throat and chuckled, ā€œWhat?! Once in a while, I try to dress up according to others too. Anyway, thank you so much for the help and really sorry for disturbing you at this time. I hope bhai won’t be too angry!ā€

ā€˜Angry?! I’m livid! Furious even!’ Virender thought and decided to make a quick retreat as he saw Purvi make her way out.

Later,Virender found himself strolling the lawns in the dead of night. He really needed to arrange his thoughts. Incidents he had tried to pass off as coincidences till this very moment had revealed themselves to be conscious efforts on someone’s part.

It hadn’t been his imagination. Vaibhav had started to depend on Purvi more and more. The past few days, he had by far surpassed Juhi and Manas when it came to competing for Purvi’s attention. One, Vaibhav had refused to take his advice and continued to call her Purvi!

Puvi ye…Purvi wo…Purvi..Purvi.Purvi!

He had been very tolerant of that. He had regretted his outburst too. He had no right to meddle in their friendship. No matter his feelings, if he couldn’t call out her name, it was his issue only. That was fine.

But what about all those times, when he would try to get a quiet moment with her and Vaibhav would waltz in to interrupt. It hadn’t been over analysis on his part as he had thought earlier. It felt like, No,he was sure after today that Vaibhav had been intentionally sabotaging their lone time. He couldn’t have been any more obvious. Something as insignificant as outfit selection could’ve waited till morning but against his better judgement,Vaibhav had knocked on their doors in the middle of night! The cheek!

And why did he even require baawri to select dresses for him. He had never allowed maa to do that after growing out of his teenage. Then, why now? And, why her?!

And that kurta….Virender groaned. She had bought that for him. It was his!

Flashback

ā€œDekhiye, Mukhi ji!Kesa laga aapko ye kurta?ā€ Purvi asked holding the off white kurta in her hands, her eyes beaming.

(ā€œHow do you like this Kurta?ā€)

ā€œWhen Vaibhav was searching for some outfits, my gaze fell on this Kurta and I just knew that this is the best. Aap pe ye—

Virender cut her off,harshly. ā€œToh mane ke suna rahi hai. Ja ke dede Vaibhav neā€

(ā€œThen why are you telling me this? Go and give it to Vaibhav then!ā€)

ā€œPar hum ye aa—

At that moment he saw Vaibhav go past their room and paying no ear to Purvi, Virender called after him. ā€œVaibhav, idhar aa!ā€

ā€œJi bhaiya?ā€ He asked, and looked on as his brother took his hand.

ā€œHave this!ā€ Virender placed the kurta in his hands and bit a smile, ā€œPurvi tere liye laai haiā€.

(ā€œPurvi has brought this for youā€)

ā€œBut bhai this is f—

ā€œTanne sun liya na maine ke kaha. Ib isse le aur jaaā€. Virender asserted allowing Vaibhav no chance.

(ā€œYou heard me. Take this and leaveā€.)

Vaibhav nodded meekly and walked out while Virender gritted his teeth, his emotions on a rise when a voice boomed from behind him.

ā€œAapki problem kya hai?!ā€ Purvi exploded behind Virender as he whipped around and sneered at her,his own temper flaring by leaps and bounds.

(ā€œWhat is your problem?ā€)

ā€œIb maine aisa ke kar dia? Tu hi kurta kurta kar rahi thi toh de diya maine usne jiske liye tu lai thi!ā€

(ā€œWhat did I do now? I simply gave it to the one for whom you had bought it!ā€)

ā€œAur kiske lie laae thhe hum ye? Suna aapne humein?!ā€ Purvi asked, her eyes tearing.

(ā€œAnd who might that be? Did you listen to me?!ā€)

Virender turned his face away, her sad visage melting his anger. ā€œVaibhav ke lie hi toh—

(ā€œOfcourse, for Vaibhav. Who elsā€”ā€œ)

ā€œAapke liye!ā€ She shouted as his eyes widened in shock. ā€œHum vo kurta aapke liye laaye thhe.Socha tha ki aap par safed kitna jachta hai toh ye bhi khilega aap parā€.

(I had bought it for you! Since white suits you, I had thought this would also look good on you!ā€)

Virender pressed his eyes close, and sighed. He had done it yet again. Turning to face her, his heart shattered as she wiped her eyes and he forwarded his hands to wipe her tears but to no avail.

She stepped back.

ā€œBaawriā€¦ā€

She raised her palm upfront. ā€œRehne dijiye, aapne apna faisla suna diya hai. Aur shayad theek hi hai. Shayad Vaibhav ji iss tohfe ki kadra karenge!ā€

(ā€œLet it be! You gave your decision. And maybe it’s for the best, Vaibhav ji might appreciate itā€)

Having said that, she spun on her heels and stormed out of the room.

He had been piss frustrated that afternoon. He wanted to blame it on the strenuous dealings at Panchayat but he knew better. She had gone shopping with Vaibhav (and kids) and that did not sit right with him. He had come home for lunch just to see her and she had not been there. And when she had come back, her on and on rambling about her outing had just tickled him the wrong way. He had exploded without listening completely, and the first ever gift she had brought him had gone to Vaibhav, and he could blame none for that blunder. It was on his foolishness and jealousy.

He needed to do something about that.

And then someone needed to be taught a little lesson or two.


So how was it? Since last time I was asked to provide english translations for hindi dialogues, I've provided them in bracket. Hoping it will help😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#85

INDEX (Continued)


Part 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155655658

Part 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155706569

Edited by nish_vir - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Ha ab to lottery lag Gaye hai sai me 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Vaise maine 3 episodes dekhe (sorry slow ho Gaye hu ab pehle mai 24 episodes dekh lete thi ek din me)

Haha..dont be😃 (24 seriously! Ye toh mere lie impossible haišŸ˜†)

That anime is quite good

Told you so(Pinocchio noseeeešŸ˜Ž)

It took me a little time to get used to with Chinese (Korean and Japanese are fine esa lagta hai Japanese to mere 3rd language ho Gaye hai🤭)

Same here. It was weird for me too but then i got used to it. And yes, i too think ki anime taught me new language, knowledge of another culture and a lot more. I do think that I've learnt a lot from these thingsšŸ˜†( manga pdh pdh ke british heirarchy of duke, marquis bhi samajh aa gyi hai!

But animation was beautiful Like really beautiful I didn't expect this much mtlb cgi or 2d animation ka itna kamal ka blend tha art style plays a major role

Tabhi toh. It is beautiful. Ist epi ki ending speciallyā¤ļø when hua Cheng gives his hand to xie Lian (the male bride) and they walk out and all. I dont understand chinese but that ending song is in my heart now!

I find cgi little distracting during night time when they were fighting with bride zombies

Technicalities skip mešŸ˜† sorry.

That ML is such a adorable man šŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆ

Which one?šŸ˜† the one we see in the start or the other one ?

The war flashback scenes were really good

Story interesting lag rahi šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”

It is! As soon as i was done with anime, i went to novel and completed itšŸ˜† couldn't wait for season 2.

Also, I really appreciate you giving me feedback. I mean you really did watch it (people don't usuallyšŸ˜†). Its great being able to share my enthusiasm.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Part 7 - Raakh


Yet again! Once again!

Fingers clenching into fist, Virender tried to rein in his bubbling anger or he was sure to explode. With brows drawn together and profanity waiting at the tip of his tongue, he stared-glared as Vaibhav stood at the doorway and fumbled with his words.

ā€œPurvi, I had to ask somethingā€¦ā€ He trailed, corner of his vision pricking with deadly glares.

Purvi nodded and tilting her head, waited while Vaibhav gulped, trying his best to maintain his faƧade of a smile, what with his head placed under guillotine in this instant!

ā€œHa..vohā€¦ā€ Scratching his forehead, he gulped and send off his prayers to heavens. God knows he needed it!

ā€œC-Can we talk outside?ā€

'Or I might die inside!'

Purvi squinted her eyes in confusion at his request but nodded nonetheless, and turned towards Virender, who was immersed in reading a book.

As if! Vaibhav scoffed at his poor pretense. Bhai is definitely choking the ink out of that book, imagining it as my neck!

ā€œHum abhi aate hainā€ And with that she stepped out after Vaibhav.

(ā€œI’ll be right backā€)

Virender who had schooled his expressions to nonchalance let the faƧade fall and menace dawned over his persona. Flinging the book to one side (Titled- How to kill slowllly!) he rose to his feet, strode to the doorway and peered from behind the doors, cautious. But there was no one. Baffled, he stepped out into the hallway and saw two silhouettes disappear at the end of corridor and into a room. He followed suit, his steps urgent and halting near the open window, he peeked inside.

ā€œWhich one should I wear?ā€ Vaibhav asked pointing to his bed littered with garments.

ā€œYe sab kya hai?ā€ Purvi suppressed a chuckle at his confusion as she looked over the outfits.

(ā€œWhat is all this?ā€)

ā€œThat…there’s a function at my friend’s place..soā€¦ā€ Vaibhav trailed.

ā€œAcha…hum batate hainā€.

(ā€œAlright, let me help thenā€)

And after going through all the outfits, she narrowed down on a formal wear and a traditional wear.

Picking up the coat, Vaibhav gave it once over. ā€œI think it’s too formalā€.

ā€œBas fir aap ye kurta daal janaā€, Purvi piped up as Vaibhav picked the kurta.

(ā€œIn that case, you should wear the kurtaā€)

ā€œBlue?ā€ He asked with raised brows and she nodded, ā€œ Haan! As far as I’ve seen,you really like blue so I chose for you a blue oneā€.

ā€œAnd what about you?ā€ Vaibhav quipped and Virender felt his fingers twitch. He could hear them. And he could see him. And he didn’t like what he was seeing.

ā€œHum, kya?ā€ (ā€œWhat about me?ā€)

ā€œWhat is your preference?ā€ He asked, his eyes following hers as she looked down. Smiling, Vaibhav went to the bed and picked up a white kurta embroidered with gold designs. ā€œHow about this one?ā€

Purvi looked up slowly and her eyes widened. It had caught her eye instantly and yet she had not recommended this one to Vaibhav. It wasn’t his to wear.

ā€œBut you don’t like lighter shades?ā€ She commented, more like tried to talk him out of wearing this one. She had bought this for Virender.

ā€œBut you do!ā€ An instant reply followed and Virender fought the urge to throttle him. His brother badly wanted to die young!

As Purvi passed Vaibhav a baffled look, he cleared his throat and chuckled, ā€œWhat?! Once in a while, I try to dress up according to others too. Anyway, thank you so much for the help and really sorry for disturbing you at this time. I hope bhai won’t be too angry!ā€

ā€˜Angry?! I’m livid! Furious even!’ Virender thought and decided to make a quick retreat as he saw Purvi make her way out.

Later,Virender found himself strolling the lawns in the dead of night. He really needed to arrange his thoughts. Incidents he had tried to pass off as coincidences till this very moment had revealed themselves to be conscious efforts on someone’s part.

It hadn’t been his imagination. Vaibhav had started to depend on Purvi more and more. The past few days, he had by far surpassed Juhi and Manas when it came to competing for Purvi’s attention. One, Vaibhav had refused to take his advice and continued to call her Purvi!

Puvi ye…Purvi wo…Purvi..Purvi.Purvi!

He had been very tolerant of that. He had regretted his outburst too. He had no right to meddle in their friendship. No matter his feelings, if he couldn’t call out her name, it was his issue only. That was fine.

But what about all those times, when he would try to get a quiet moment with her and Vaibhav would waltz in to interrupt. It hadn’t been over analysis on his part as he had thought earlier. It felt like, No,he was sure after today that Vaibhav had been intentionally sabotaging their lone time. He couldn’t have been any more obvious. Something as insignificant as outfit selection could’ve waited till morning but against his better judgement,Vaibhav had knocked on their doors in the middle of night! The cheek!

And why did he even require baawri to select dresses for him. He had never allowed maa to do that after growing out of his teenage. Then, why now? And, why her?!

And that kurta….Virender groaned. She had bought that for him. It was his!

Flashback

ā€œDekhiye, Mukhi ji!Kesa laga aapko ye kurta?ā€ Purvi asked holding the off white kurta in her hands, her eyes beaming.

(ā€œHow do you like this Kurta?ā€)

ā€œWhen Vaibhav was searching for some outfits, my gaze fell on this Kurta and I just knew that this is the best. Aap pe ye—

Virender cut her off,harshly. ā€œToh mane ke suna rahi hai. Ja ke dede Vaibhav neā€

(ā€œThen why are you telling me this? Go and give it to Vaibhav then!ā€)

ā€œPar hum ye aa—

At that moment he saw Vaibhav go past their room and paying no ear to Purvi, Virender called after him. ā€œVaibhav, idhar aa!ā€

ā€œJi bhaiya?ā€ He asked, and looked on as his brother took his hand.

ā€œHave this!ā€ Virender placed the kurta in his hands and bit a smile, ā€œPurvi tere liye laai haiā€.

(ā€œPurvi has brought this for youā€)

ā€œBut bhai this is f—

ā€œTanne sun liya na maine ke kaha. Ib isse le aur jaaā€. Virender asserted allowing Vaibhav no chance.

(ā€œYou heard me. Take this and leaveā€.)

Vaibhav nodded meekly and walked out while Virender gritted his teeth, his emotions on a rise when a voice boomed from behind him.

ā€œAapki problem kya hai?!ā€ Purvi exploded behind Virender as he whipped around and sneered at her,his own temper flaring by leaps and bounds.

(ā€œWhat is your problem?ā€)

ā€œIb maine aisa ke kar dia? Tu hi kurta kurta kar rahi thi toh de diya maine usne jiske liye tu lai thi!ā€

(ā€œWhat did I do now? I simply gave it to the one for whom you had bought it!ā€)

ā€œAur kiske lie laae thhe hum ye? Suna aapne humein?!ā€ Purvi asked, her eyes tearing.

(ā€œAnd who might that be? Did you listen to me?!ā€)

Virender turned his face away, her sad visage melting his anger. ā€œVaibhav ke lie hi toh—

(ā€œOfcourse, for Vaibhav. Who elsā€”ā€œ)

ā€œAapke liye!ā€ She shouted as his eyes widened in shock. ā€œHum vo kurta aapke liye laaye thhe.Socha tha ki aap par safed kitna jachta hai toh ye bhi khilega aap parā€.

(I had bought it for you! Since white suits you, I had thought this would also look good on you!ā€)

Virender pressed his eyes close, and sighed. He had done it yet again. Turning to face her, his heart shattered as she wiped her eyes and he forwarded his hands to wipe her tears but to no avail.

She stepped back.

ā€œBaawriā€¦ā€

She raised her palm upfront. ā€œRehne dijiye, aapne apna faisla suna diya hai. Aur shayad theek hi hai. Shayad Vaibhav ji iss tohfe ki kadra karenge!ā€

(ā€œLet it be! You gave your decision. And maybe it’s for the best, Vaibhav ji might appreciate itā€)

Having said that, she spun on her heels and stormed out of the room.

He had been piss frustrated that afternoon. He wanted to blame it on the strenuous dealings at Panchayat but he knew better. She had gone shopping with Vaibhav (and kids) and that did not sit right with him. He had come home for lunch just to see her and she had not been there. And when she had come back, her on and on rambling about her outing had just tickled him the wrong way. He had exploded without listening completely, and the first ever gift she had brought him had gone to Vaibhav, and he could blame none for that blunder. It was on his foolishness and jealousy.

He needed to do something about that.

And then someone needed to be taught a little lesson or two.


So how was it? Since last time I was asked to provide english translations for hindi dialogues, I've provided them in bracket. Hoping it will help😃

Nish nish nishhhhh.... beautiful ā¤ļøā¤ļø...

Aap tuitions do ge kya writing ke??

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Posted: 5 years ago
#88

Nish thks for the new updt šŸ¤—...it's lovely and becoming more interesting ā¤ļø....


Vir's jealousy doesn't know any boundary now šŸ˜†šŸ¤£....the way he followed Pur and Vai lol🤣🤣....banda pagal hogaya🤣🤣


Now he is suffering from his own blunder🤪


Looking forward to the next one and wht ll take place now


Plzzz do updt soonšŸ¤—šŸ¤—

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Posted: 5 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Nish nish nishhhhh.... beautiful ā¤ļøā¤ļø...

Thank you😃

Aap tuitions do ge kya writing ke??

šŸ˜†depends on who is the student. I dont teach overqualified studentsšŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
#90

Lovely!

I am actually enjoying this jello VPS šŸ˜†

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