Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin

SAIRAT Drabble : the stubborn sai

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Posted: 3 years ago

Residents of Chavan niwas are well aware about Sai’s stubbornness and focus. But what was happening now even melted the hearts of the people who hated her the most. It was right, grief united all.



It’s been two days since they received any updates from Virat or his senior about his whereabouts. It’s been two days since Sai has sat in front of bappa praying for Virat’s return. The only thing she did was try DIG  sirs number in between her prayers to get any updates.


The residents witnessed varied emotions from her, her initial wrath at Virat for leaving her like this, her unending tears and having a one sided conversation with bappa bargaining with him that she would do anything to get any morsel of news about him. Only Devyani was able to calm her down even aai could not control her. They tried to force feed her but nothing worked. She was Sai Joshi, who could force her to do anything. There she sat in front of lord Ganesh’s idol like a statue having a staring contest with bappa.


They all heard the police jeep arrive at the entrance and at last a tired and injured Virat stepped out of the jeep. His family rejoiced his arrival with their own tears and rants. He assured them that his injuries are very minor and apologised for worrying them.  Suddenly he felt this heavy weight on his chest and a trembling figure hugging him tightly.


He realised that it was his wife, he held her shoulders and looked at her. The person who stared back at him was a hollow shell of the wife he left behind. The pain and sorrow in her eyes left him breathless. He forgot all his pain and the only thing he wanted to know was if she was alright. 


Before he could say anything she looked at him and gave him the Sai Joshi smile and fainted in his arms.



** please ignore the grammatical errors. This another random drabble


Edited by notaquitter - 3 years ago

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Can we get part 2 of this

Want TMK and gand to praise sai

And virat to comfort his TPS

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Posted: 3 years ago

Please continue soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey wanna know the next happenings...its awesome❤️but ended too quickly😒plz continue 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

very well written ❤️❤️❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Oh this could actually happen on the show! Plesse write more to this.....  even family members will havd to let Virat know how Sai reacted and that will definitely overwhelm him! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful Drabble.... 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

This content was originally posted by: notaquitter

Residents of Chavan niwas are well aware about Sai’s stubbornness and focus. But what was happening now even melted the hearts of the people who hated her the most. It was right, grief united all.



It’s been two days since they received any updates from Virat or his senior about his whereabouts. It’s been two days since Sai has sat in front of bappa praying for Virat’s return. The only thing she did was try DIG  sirs number in between her prayers to get any updates.


The residents witnessed varied emotions from her, her initial wrath at Virat for leaving her like this, her unending tears and having a one sided conversation with bappa bargaining with him that she would do anything to get any morsel of news about him. Only Devyani was able to calm her down even aai could not control her. They tried to force feed her but nothing worked. She was Sai Joshi, who could force her to do anything. There she sat in front of lord Ganesh’s idol like a statue having a staring contest with bappa.


They all heard the police jeep arrive at the entrance and at last a tired and injured Virat stepped out of the jeep. His family rejoiced his arrival with their own tears and rants. He assured them that his injuries are very minor and apologised for worrying them.  Suddenly he felt this heavy weight on his chest and a trembling figure hugging him tightly.


He realised that it was his wife, he held her shoulders and looked at her. The person who stared back at him was a hollow shell of the wife he left behind. The pain and sorrow in her eyes left him breathless. He forgot all his pain and the only thing he wanted to know was if she was alright. 


Before he could say anything she looked at him and gave him the Sai Joshi smile and fainted in his arms.



** please ignore the grammatical errors. This another random drabble


The only bad thing I can point ouy is it's a drabble and it ended so damn quickly.

As a reader,  as much as I want to read more, but as a writer, I feel it's better to leave it alone. Poignancy and keeping readers wanting nore has its own beauty. Hard to create such masterpiece,  buy when you've built it, just leave it be! Something like that.


Really enjoyed the drabble. Hope to get more golds from you!


Happy writing!


Cheers♥ 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Please could u add another part to it. i hope they show something like this..

Edited by appisuri - 3 years ago