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Posted: 4 years ago
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As we know the show has turned into complete rubbish with once good characters like Pallavi and Dida turning completely evil. Also Abhi being a puppet in the hands of his evil sister and daughter is really irritating. So this story is basically how I wanted the whole Rhea suicide track to play out.

Part 1

Rhea has tried to commit suicide because Ranbir rejected her. Her family saves her own time and brings her to hospital. Rhea is getting treated and Mehras and Kohlis (except Ranbir) are standing there worried. Alia sees this as an opportunity to turn Abhi and Kohlis against Prachi. So she starts blaming Prachi for Rhea’s suicide.

Alia: All this happened because of that Prachi. She is the reason why our Rhea is in this condition. If she hadn’t come in between Ranbir and Rhea, then none of this would have happened.

Abhi: What rubbish Alia. Prachi is not responsible for all this. If Rhea is not strong enough to handle life then how is that Prachi’s fault. So stop blaming Prachi for all this.

Pallavi: Abhi is right Alia. You can’t blame Prachi for Rhea’s actions. And Ranbir is not some toy that Rhea can snatch from Prachi. If Ranbir loves Prachi, then that is his choice. Rhea can’t force her love on someone.

Alia: All of you are supporting that Prachi right. Then see this video first. You will understand her real color.

Saying this Alia showed Maya’s fake confession video, blaming Prachi, to everyone. Abhi and Kohlis are shocked seeing this.

Abhi: Where did you get this from Alia?

Alia: How does that matter bhai? This is the real color of your favorite Prachi.

Pallavi: Stop it Alia. Do you want us to believe a liar like Maya over Prachi who helped us always? That is never going to happen. This Maya is making up stories again. And you are foolish enough to fall for that and blame an innocent girl like Prachi. I don’t know what your problem with Prachi is. But stop spreading hate like this. No matter what you or anyone else says, we will always trust Prachi.

Abhi: Exactly. So Alia, if you want to stay here, then stay quietly. Otherwise you can leave right now. But I won’t tolerate a word against Prachi. Is that clear?

Alia could see the tide turning against her completely. She silently nodded her head and stood quietly.

Meanwhile, Ranbir reaches there too.

Ranbir: Chief, Mom what’s going on?

Pallavi: Rhea tried to commit suicide beta. Doctors are treating her.

Ranbir didn’t know what to feel right now. He definitely didn’t have any sympathy for an evil creature like Rhea. But he felt bad seeing his Chief’s condition.

Ranbir: It’s ok Chief. Rhea will get fine soon.

Prachi’s home


Ranbir informed Prachi about Rhea’s suicide attempt.

Prachi: Ma, we need to go to City Hospital. Rhea tried to commit suicide.

Pragya: What? Is she Ok now?

Prachi: Don’t know Ma. Her treatment is still going on.

Pragya: But Prachi, are you sure you want to go there? You know what she tried to do with you.

Prachi: Ma, I am not going there for Rhea. I’m going there for Mehra sir. He is a good man and don’t deserve all this pain.

Pragya: Ok beta. Let’s go.

Pragya and Prachi reached the hospital. Pragya gets a call. So she asks Prachi to go inside.

Prachi went inside and saw everyone standing worried.

Prachi: Mehra sir

Abhi looked up to see Prachi standing there. A relief washed over him seeing her. He didn’t know why but whenever this girl was near him, he felt like he got his lost daughter back.

Prachi went and hugged her Mehra sir. She always respected and loved him like the father she never had. And it pained her immensely to see him so broken.


Prachi: It’s ok sir. Rhea will get fine soon.

Abhi: No beta. I failed completely as a father. I couldn’t give her a good upbringing. I couldn’t make her a good human being. And I couldn’t make her strong enough to face rejection. All this is my fault.

Prachi: Please don’t say like that sir. Whatever happened is not your fault. Please don’t blame yourself for other’s mistakes.

Alia was getting irritated seeing Abhi and Prachi’s bond. No matter what she did, Prachi was still her brother’s favorite. She knew that if things went like this then it won’t be long before Abhi learns Prachi’s real identity. She can’t let that happen. She can’t let Prachi and Pragya comeback to Mehra house again.

Alia: What are you doing here Prachi? Aren’t you satisfied with Rhea’s condition? So why did you come here again?

Pallavi: That’s enough Alia. You have no right to insult Prachi like this. And I won’t tolerate a word against Prachi.

Ranbir and Prachi felt glad hearing Pallavi’s words. They were afraid that Pallavi won’t accept their relationship. But seeing her strongly supporting Prachi, they were really happy.

A voice: What is going on here?

- TBC-

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Posted: 4 years ago
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really good ❤️

can't wait for the next part.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This can happen only in our dream.... chalo let’s satisfy ourselves in dreams atleast

But it’s a good one ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I hope you continue. Sounds much better than the actual shitshow we ended up getting.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2


A voice: What is going on here?

Everyone turned around to see Pragya standing there looking confused. Abhi was shocked and happy at the same time to see his Pragya.

Prachi: Ma

Abhi: (smiling) Pragya

Pragya: (with happy tears) Ji

Prachi, Ranbir and the Kohlis were confused seeing Abhi and Pragya’s reaction. On the other hand, Alia was seething with anger seeing her plan fall apart miserably.

Prachi: (confused) How do you know my mother Mehra sir?

Abhi: Mother?? Pragya is your mother?

Prachi nodded her head hearing his question.

Pragya: You are Prachi’s Mehra sir?

Prachi: What’s going on here Ma? How do you guys know each other?

Abhi looked at Pragya for confirmation. Pragya nodded her head smiling. Abhi’s face broke out in a wide smile realizing that Prachi was his daughter. He couldn’t contain his happiness at this revelation.

Abhi: Pragya is my wife.

Pragya: Wife??

Abhi: Yes Prachi. Pragya is my wife and you are my daughter. Do you know how happy I am right now? I have been yearning to meet you for such a long time. And you were in front of my eyes all this time.

Prachi didn’t know how to react at that moment. Mehra sir was her father. She didn’t know how to react to that revelation. A large part of her was jumping in joy. The man whom she always thought as her father was really her father. She was so happy. But at the same time, a dread filled. He had abandoned her and her mother once. What if he does that again? All the taunts she and her mother had to face all these years came back with full force. Tears started to fall from her eyes continuously.

Abhi, Pragya, Ranbir and Kohlis were completely shocked seeing Prachi’s reaction. They had thought she will be extremely happy. But here she looked so dejected and miserable. Abhi took a step towards his daughter. Her each tear was breaking his heart into a thousand pieces.

Abhi: Hey princess, what happened? Why are you crying?

Prachi: (hugging him tightly) Why did you leave us papa? You will leave us again?

Abhi and Pragya felt their heart break seeing their daughter so broken. In their ego, they put their daughter through so much pain.

Abhi: No princess. Papa won’t leave you ever. Please give me a chance. I will make up for the last 20 years we had to stay apart.

Prachi looked into her father’s eyes. She could see only sincerity and love in those eyes. Slowly, she nodded her head.

Prachi: Only one chance.

Abhi felt at the top of the world. His daughter agreed to give him one chance. And he was never going to make her regret it. He was going to fill so much happiness in his daughter’s life that she will forget all the sorrows of the past. With this determination, Abhi hugged both Prachi and Pragya.

Suddenly the OT door opened and a doctor came out.

Doctor: Your daughter is fine now Mr Mehra. Luckily the wounds were not that severe. We need to keep her under observation for 48hours. Then you can take her home.

Abhi: Thank you so much doctor.

Abhi felt like everything was finally falling in place. He got his elder daughter and wife back. And Rhea was also OK. He thanked the gods for solving all the problems.

-TBC-

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Posted: 4 years ago
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abhi pragya evlilikleri gerçekleşti bu dönemden sonra dizi nasıl bir şekil alacak


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful Jane. Just continue. TBH, this is more refreshing than the rot I am reading in the updates. The EK group only shows negativity. Unless TRPs fall to a record low, these people won't bother to give such positive storyline.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awesome story...very much logical n sensible as compared to show...

loved how pallavi n abhi supported n defended prachi.. please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Jane , this is so beautiful as usual👏

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