Arhi SS: OLFACTION!! (T#8) Volume II- Important Note pg 87 - Page 28

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

Haaw, ek to I am around and upar se yeh sab... 😭

But true, the love for not just N, but now for you all brings me back here. 🤗

Thanks EC 🤗

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Whatte wow. Brilliantly written N!

There's a door that's being pushed and pulled. Who is going to ram into the door first is the question 😂😂

There's so much tension in the air, emotions and sexual. We'll skip the sexual for now as it's important that emotions are on the same page.

I love how Lavanya is so understanding and caring. She basically baby sits both of them. 🙈🙈 She deserves happiness. Bas.

Cheers N! ❤️❤️🤗

RES ❤️

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Brilliant writing N, and a phenomenal chapter that gives away so much and yet, conceals the anguish of their hearts.

If I loved Khushi for reacting to Arnav's ignorance, I loved Arnav for giving that bit of his where he tells her to think and decide.

A much needed push for Khushi in the right direction and if she is sensible, she will get the hint and wont push him away.

I just hope, Arnav gives her time to come around.

Now looking forward to Kartik and Medha, and Shyam & Alvira.

Updated...

The conflict of emotions was done very nicely N. When one is getting sober, the other was pushing away, when one was extending an olive branch, the other doesn't want to take it, but in private they both are reminiscing the past where they shared affection for each other.

Arnav informed Kartik about Khushi. He doesn't hold any grudges. But, what will family do? What will Alvira do? Questions waiting to be answered.

How is Medha? Hasn't she taken more than required medicines on the day she found out Kartik loved Alvira before she married him? Was Kartik hiding something from Khushi?

Lavanya is trying to help Khushi and Arnav. But, they have their own reasons to be stubborn. They are right in their own thinking and I don't blame them.

Lovely update.

Cheers...

Lovely update.

Lavanya was one character I loved in the serial and you have done complete justice to her in your story. A modern girl with strong values. Her heart is broken but she keeps no resentments . Rare find ...

coming to khushi it’s really hard to let go of guilt !!!!
I think it’s easier to forgive others but very hard to forgive oneself. I hope Arnav’s love and care will help her let go of past and start working on building the bridge from her side ....

I don't know how I was expecting them to move further... but this was certainly not what I could have imagined. It suddenly felt like they took a couple of steps backwards, rather than forwards. But like you said, taking out the frustration was necessary too.

And eventually, any show of emotions is better than giving the cold shoulder and ignoring each other. Arnav has given her a choice... now the ball is in Khushi's court.

Will wait to see what she decides and how the external factors come into play. I'm also curious about what Khushi knows about the past that Arnav doesn't.

Eager for the next chapter 😳.

Love,

Stuti

Wonderful update N. Loved it very much. There is underlying tension between them which will be goes away only when they start to talk about it. Waiting to see who is going to do. Lavanya is darling as always.

Awesome update

Khushi has so much of guilt in her that she is unable to move on from the past.....

But she needs to move on......

Their past was horrible....given so much of pain and took away the happiness from their lives......

But her living in guilt will not make any changes..... In the past it was not in her hands... She hurted Arnav... But at present his happiness is in her hands and But their is something she can do....

Lavanya is the one charectors I live so much in this story.... The way she is well sorted of....so much admirable

Another amazing update loved it so much.

The onslaught of emotions portrayed through your flawless writing is just cherry on the cake.

The passion of pain can be felt through the update.

Loved it so much.

Continue soon.

Thanks a lot for the pm.

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

Haha. Anna

I promise you a happy end. Dont worry.

And that is why we love your stories dear, cos you give HEA 🤗