Mineil SS: "HOMECOMING" (Epilogue at pg-45 on 17.1.21)

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N_sharmaa

@N_sharmaa

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Posted: 4 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: anjali0111
Kasam se ye haa....haa...mein jo mazaa hai..🤣

DT was dedicated for this haa..haa🤣

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

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Posted: 4 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: anjali0111
I hope tumhari story ka happy end hua

haa yaar...

1 love since class 8

12 years beech m bhut kch hua...career pressure...different cities...family...mutual breakup but eventually we realised hm dono jitna bhi ghum le ultimately ek dusre k pass hi laut aayenge...and happy ending (shaadi) avi baaki h ...hopefully 2-3 saal m but haa indeed a peaceful ending it is...❤️

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zalima

@zalima

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Posted: 4 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: anjali0111
Kasam se ye haa....haa...mein jo mazaa hai..🤣

Saara nasha iss haa..haa .mein hai ☺️

Woh courtroom wala drama ☺️

MiNeil ke beech ka tension ☺️

Kya pagalpan tha 🤣

Anjali .. MiNeil ke upar saare profession almost covered up hai ek political wala baaki hai .

Aur lawyer wala b ☺️ dono opposition lawyers

ye courtroom wala jo sapna tha FF mein de do try karo ..jab free ho toh

Edited by zalima - 4 years ago

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 4 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: zalima
Saara nasha iss haa..haa .mein hai ☺️
Woh courtroom wala drama ☺️
MiNeil ke beech ka tension ☺️
Kya pagalpan tha 🤣

Anjali .. MiNeil ke upar saare profession almost covered up hai ek political wala baaki hai m
Aur lawyer wala b ☺️ dono opposition lawyers

ye courtroom wala jo sapna tha FF mein de do try karo ..jab free ho toh

Ok😆

Abhi to khushi ka ye senti SS padhkar main bhi kuch senti likhne ke mood mein hoon😆

Uske jaisa achha to nahi likh paungi kyunki senti story uski speciality hain but phir bhi try karungi

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zalima

@zalima

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Posted: 4 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Ok😆

Abhi to khushi ka ye senti SS padhkar main bhi kuch senti likhne ke mood mein hoon😆
Uske jaisa achha to nahi likh paungi kyunki senti story uski speciality hain but phir bhi try karungi

Sab ko OK bolti ho🤣

Ye tera mechanism hai 🤣

Tum toh ek number ki writer ho ..senti wali story ko b justice dogi tum

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 4 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: zalima

Sab ko OK bolti ho🤣
Ye tera mechanism hai 🤣

Tum toh ek number ki writer ho ..senti wali story ko b justice dogi tum

@bold sahi pakde hain.... Situation diffuse karne ka sateek tarika🤣

But really I suck at writing senti story...ruhani ishq mein borderline psycho, senti, dukhiyari mini🤣 ke bare mein likha tha jo jyada pasand nahi ayaa kisi ko🤣

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zalima

@zalima

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Posted: 4 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: anjali0111

@bold sahi pakde hain.... Situation diffuse karne ka sateek tarika🤣

But really I suck at writing senti story...ruhani ishq mein borderline psycho, senti, dukhiyari mini🤣 ke bare mein likha tha jo jyada pasand nahi ayaa kisi ko🤣

Dukhiyari mini kisi ko b acchi nahi lagegi yaar

Kyun ki Mini jo show mein thi uska ek strong image hai .jo emotional,senti b thi lekin percentage of being practical zyada tha aur strong b thi woh image ko change karna tough hai

Shayad koi aur heroine hoti toh suit hota lekin ash mini par nahi

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 4 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: zalima

Dukhiyari mini kisi ko b acchi nahi lagegi yaar
Kyun ki Mini jo show mein thi uska ek strong image hai .jo emotional,senti b thi lekin percentage of being practical zyada tha aur strong b thi woh image ko change karna tough hai
Shayad koi aur heroine hoti toh suit hota lekin ash mini par nahi

Ya that was very specific character....dedicated to ishu🤣 i still can imagine her blushing and calling srj aap, unka...🤣 it was for fun...but I enjoyed writing that also...after the heavy doses of cure me and embrace...it was light and relaxing😆

But I know why more people couldn't connect to it...jaise crappy par kitna bhi socho positive role suit nahi hota waisa hi mini ka hai....they have very strong image to break...cant mould them beyond a limit.

Anyways....will try something different...more of philosophical kind of this time😆

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 4 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: zalima

🤣🤣 ek number ka ye aadmi
Yaar ..show mein b aisa hi tha ☺️
Wish hume future track dekhne ko milta
Woh toh kuch na kaho moment mein b lips ko catch kar raha tha☺️🤣

Kitni bechain hoke tumse mili/mila
Tumko kya thi khabar thi main kitni akeli/ akela
Haa... haa..ha..ha ☺️
Haa..haa.....haaa..ha..ha☺️

oh god zalima🤣🤣Ur observations 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 mineil k case m x ray glasses h tumhaare pass🤣