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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet has a problem. Maan showed care and understanding for the first time.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 20)

Winner: Creampuff⭐️

Runner-ups: UmaDevi97

SpecialMention: Khwaishfan

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): aparna3011,Alamelu, sanum23

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

QnA- Episode 3

Nilz: Hello all, welcome to the Third episode ofQnA with Maan & Geet. This episode is specially for Khwaishfan. So Khwaish please start with your questions

Khwaishfan: Question for Geet: What do you think that Maan wants to hurt you?

Geet: Does he not? Who cooked up the Revenge plan huh?

Maan: And somebody physically tried to hurt me

Geet: I did not intent it and I even treated you

Khwaishfan: ok ok moving on. Question for Maan: Why are you so concerned about Geet?

Maan: What? Who told you that!

Geet: Are you concerned about me?

Maan: No!

Geet: Thought so. Neither me. Just FYI

Maan: Good

Geet: Good

Both of them keep staring at Khwaish awkwardly doing everything possible to not look at each other

Khwaish walks out




Part 21

M-It’s no big deal. You don’t have to feel less than anyone because of this and even if Piyush would have told me then that would just prove he is a jerk and not make you look bad. You just need a partner who has patience, and you will find one. Relationship is not just about s*x. Also, there are other ways

She wipes her tears and looks up at him

G-What do you mean?

M-Well...you are the doctor....

Maan ab kitna hi bole

She wipes here tears

G-I haven’t discussed this with anybody, not even my friends. I am too ashamed

M-Trust me there is nothing to be ashamed of

She nods

M-You look beautiful

He says cupping her face between his hands

M- And Piyush is stupid... really stupid to have let you go...

Maan wipes her tears

She nods her head

It's not something she doesn't know… but hearing Maan say it…why does it make her feel so much better?

He draws her close and kisses her slowly

She is stunned...

Her reaction goes from emotional sad to emotional happy , to emotional confuse, to confuse to wait-a-minute, to hmmm this is nice, to WHAT?? To what the hell?? To so what if it feels good. Maanl! opportunistic perverted piece of sh*t!!

After 10 seconds into the kiss she pushes him away and shouts

G-WHAT THE HELL!!!!YOU SICK PERVERT!

M- What? I thought we were having a moment...

G -No, we weren't

M-No?? It sure felt like one

G-OK it was an emotional moment. Emotional. Do you understand what that is Emotional?

M-Of course I do… but you follow up with a physical gesture.That's how it is supposed to be

G- What? That’s absurd. How did you come up with such nonsense? This may work on your friends with benefits, don’t ever try that sh*t with me again

M- What are you so pissed for? It's not like it's gonna lead to s*x? A kiss is nice gesture…you should just enjoy it..

G-Maan!!!

M-Hey stop screaming and acting all self-righteous. You knowI am right; we were having a moment and I am not a Pervert. At least I don’t take advantage of drunk people

G -I am not acting . I am righteous! And I don't take advantage of drunk people either. It's all in your head

M- All in my head? My head? You should know Geet, I can perfectly recall what you did to me that night at the bar.

G-I did nothing wrong!

M- You waited around till I was drunk and then…

He pauses...

Till he is talking in general, It's fine. But to lay out details of how he got taken advantage of by this girl who is half his weight is embarrassing. What about his male pride?

G- Then what? Huh what?

M- Tum nahi manogi? Just accept it and we can close this topic.

G-Hah! I accept nothing. You remember nothing!

M - Oh you are asking for it!!

He suddenly moves towards Geet and picks her up in a princess carry

She yelps felling scared

G- OH MY GOD! I am gonna fall. Maanl!!! Put. Me. Down!!

Maan bounces her up in air a little scarring her even more and now instead of getting down she firmly loops her hands around his neck

He takes her and puts her on the bed and climbs on top of her... careful not to put too much weight on her

M-So you are saying that this did not happen?

She gasps in shock

G- Hell no!!

M-Oh really?

G-I am sure! Get off me! Let me up! This is ….this is…

Geet is feeling at loss for words for first time…never did she expect to land in this kind of a situation or position…calling him a pervert again is mild abuse now

She is scared! In general, scared of what is happening

M- Didn't you confess you like me on top of you?

He asks confused coz the version he remembers is completely different

G-God damn no! Maan, get off me!

Maan lowers himself a bit more over her so that now their bodies are touching..

M-You didn't say you like my weight on you?

Geet gasps and tries her best to push him away

G-F*ck no!! I told you, you were heavy!! I couldn't support you from bar to my car! I had to call those condescending waiters to help you carry to the lift! A**hole get away from me!!

Geet gives him a hard above with her full strength... but he only moves a cm away…

Maan seems frozen in thought

M- We didn't lie on bed like this? Really?

G-Believe what you want!

Geet gives him a disgusted look

M-But I really remember lying down and being very close you.And I could smell you that's how close we were!

She is shocked and at lose of words

Geet looks up and refuses to respond

She will not tell him that she let him keep his head on her lap and didn't proceed to shove him to the ground

But now she feels, she should have left him to rot there that night

He moves away a little now, they are not touching but he is still on top of her caging her into the place

M- Then you didn't gro-…ahem... didn’t check out my abs?

Maan just can't say he got groped in public… he has an image…still a semblance of image to maintain

G-Why would I do that?

M- Don't lie. You gave me a closer full body pat down than airport security

G-Maan, I am Not a pervert like you

M-Hey! Not calling you that…there is nothing wrong in wanting to touch a s*xy bod

Geet finally manages to grab his ear and pinches it hard, pulling it close to her mouth and shouts—


G- I did not take advantage of you... I searched for the key…took you to the room, took off your shoes and socks. ONLY SHOES AND SOCKS and left!!

M- You left?!

Maan rubs his abused ear

Geet thought ki ab to hatt jayega lekin ye kya ha?? One hand pushup?! Damnit!!

M -You promised you will stay the night!! Geet you are a liar!! Really what can I believe?

She facepalms in her mind

G-Maan get off me please. I feel really uncomfortable.

She tries a gentler approach

He looks at her skeptically ki ye bhag jaayegi without answering if I get up

M- You really left? Nothing happened? You didn't do anything?

G-Nothing happened. I left after I made sure you were sleeping ok and wouldn't choke on your vomit

He sighs and rolls over to the side

Now they are lying side by side

Geet draws in a deep breath ki jaan mei jaan ayi

M- ok.. so you didn't do anything…but didn't you at least get tempted?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff


Part 20

Superb Part 👍🏼👍🏼

Another funny Q & A....,,, 😆...... they act like they are part of a comedy show 😆 do they?

Wow love maan’s determination, the gadha actually made the correct decision for once by actually going to geet’s place to comfort her b/c she was upset . Especially since he did not know which apartment she lives in b:c it took him extra effort so he is not that much of a gadha...Geet jo bhi kahe

Like that he is concerned b/c she is actually crying 😭 & that is totally out of character for her ........ maybe that's a dimension of her character that she doesnt not show

shocked that geet has a condition that interferes with her having *** ( I had never heard of that before , I learned something new )😳 yeah, that's a real thing

Admire how maan comforted her& I agree with him b/c the physical aspect of the relationship is only one aspect & it is not the entirety of a relationship.... there is so much more ......,. Was kind of suprised hearing something this profound from maan ...,.,,,, maybe geet’s intelligence is rubbing off on him 🤓😆 or maybe we all underestimate him

Maan is starting to look a little less like s gadha 😆 lol

And I can’t believe that Is why piyush dumped geet ..,,,, I totally agree with maan that he is an a**hole!!!! 😡😡😡 yup

Geet should of spread a rumour that he had erectile disfunction or something else to hurt him b/c he really hurt geet. hehehehe....but would Geet do such a thing? Coz here she doesnt blame Piyush for dumping her, she blames her lackings

Like how maan is trying to reassure geet

But you left us hanging at a critical point again ...., maan was just about to tell geet the other ways 😆 Uske liye next part hai naa

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Thank you so much for superb update 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 20

Arre yeh Maan bhi na ek number ki gadhe hai, oi itni raat ko koi ek ladki ke ghar me aiyegi kya ab Geet badnam hui Maan ki waja se, aur woh gana munni badnam hui darling tere liye. Bilkul ek number ka ullu hai.... Guaranty izzat ka phaluda.... budhu samaj ne ki koshis toh karo.... 😳Now I'm getting it.... Ok so Geet has problems physically and was degrading herself for this...Aur woh jack ass Piyush ne Geet ko isseliye dump kiya...?🤬 What a jerk, he's a complete douche bag. Usse toh main sandbag bana ke upar latka ke punching bag bana du...Mixie me dalke Piyush chutney bana dungi phir usse phirranas ki breakfast me dungi😡... I think Maan is somewhere confused ki ok Geet ke yeh problem hai lekin iss me bura kya hai...?🤔 Par mujhe ek doubt hai Di, ki yeh dono ko ek dusre se feeling hai ki nahi....? 😕 kya chakkar chal raha hai indono ki bech me....🙄

Lekin lagta hai ki ab Maan sab handel karunga....😆 haina...? Nice update Di 🤗


hahahah tumne toh pura plan plan liya hai Piyush ke liye😆I likey!!! Ab rahi baat dono ko ek dusre ke liye feelings hain ki nahi woh toh woh hi jaane, par tumhe kya lagta hai dono ko ek dusre ke liyte feelings hai ki nahi.....jo bhi chakkar chal raha hai usmein Geet Maan ke liye poori raat jag ke care karti hai then usse milne jaati hai aur Maan bhi Geet ko rota huya dekh ke time ka naa sochke jagah ka naa sochke dauda chala aata hai....ab samajhlo jo bhi hai

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hello.... how are you and your family? I and my family are fine. How are you and your family?

appreciate the continuous updates........... glad you are liking the updates

well thanks for the award Thanks for the wonderful comments and questions


enjoyed the Q&A Session.....

apt reactions from Maan and Geet heheheh thanks a lot...this means a lot


Part 20

intriguing update.... beautifully written

sad that she thinks that he wants to hurt her

perhaps his actions have reflected this

of cos he is shocked seeing a crying Geet

agree with him that she is strong and sassy person

at least he does not feel nice seeing her cry

glad that he gave on the revenge long time ago

finally she reveals something about what she thinks Piyush told her

great that Maan went to meet Geet

can understand her reaction seeing Maan there

the gossip will now continue

she had a valid reason to ask him to go out of the house

he did not have to tease her

in her frustration she tells him everything

well Maan is confused

liked that he consoles her and tells her that Piyush did not tell him anything

oh so she has a condition

good that Maan googled this without her knowledge

he is right that Piyush is an a-hole

Piyush is indeed a jerk

loved his advice and assurance to her

relationships are more than the physical aspect

her question is reasonable

how will he respond??


Thanks for such a wonderful analysis. We will know how he responds in the next part


update soon 🤗


Question for Geet

What do you think that Maan wants to hurt you?


Question for Maan

Why are you so concerned about Geet?


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Hi dear,

Sure why not... 🤣hum sath milkar Piyush ki band bajayenge.... Aur hamare writer Didi ko bhi sath lenge...🤣😜


This is love. Yes I will happily join the team. We are the Geet Gang against Phuski Piyush!

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Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 20


Caring and Curious Update


Maan comes to Geet's apartment and like always he

does not realize asking about a single woman's apartment can cause

unwanted gossip by the neighbors

Geet tells Maan that she cannot be intimate with a man

because she suffers from some ailment

and Maan looks up on google to see what this ailment is about

he must have been shocked yet he composed himself and concern

and care came out soothing Geet

Maan saying intimacy is not important , surely he does not believe this


sorry I'll I'll start guessing the next part and ask questions

soon


Great analysis on Maan. But why do you think Maan cant believe that int*rcourse is not important. He meant intimacy is important but there are other ways to be intimate than to just have s*x

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Nilanjana..... Hope ypu are well?


I am fine dear. Thanks for your concern. Me and my husband went for a weekend road trip. Hence couldn't update

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Loved the update.

Gosh these 2 r like Tom and Jerry but cute.

They take one step ahead and 2 steps behind.

But slowly opening up and getting to trust each other.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Q&A was priceless smiley37

Thanks kwaishfan for the questions & thank you di for the amazing responses !!smiley32smiley32smiley32

Part 21

Dynamic update !!!! smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

What a roller-coaster ride of emotions for maan & geet in this update !!! 🎢

But I loved every minute of it !!! smiley4

From maan comforting geet which led up to him calling her beautiful & the slow & sweet kiss 😘 !!

But geet’s response was out of this world !!! She definitely was going on some sort of emotional roller coaster ...... it was hilarious & her final response calling maan a “opportunistic perverted piece of sh*t” smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37

And funny how their argument led them to the bed smiley36

Maan’s disillusional version of his drunken night vs what actually happened ........I think that is what maan was subconsciously wishing really happened !!

Interesting how geet was rendered speechless with their compromising position smiley36...... I didn’t think that was possible smiley36

But the ending was even funnier maan finally realizing that nothing happened but asking geet if she was tempted smiley37smiley37smiley37

It seems like these two definitely have developed feelings for each other but they have not realized it yet ..,,,, just my hunch

Thank you sooooo much for the pm & update 😍

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