|PurVir Drabble Series|Part 14 on Pg 19 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

You and sri do magic...ab mujhe accha khasa sochna hoga where to take this...

Look at you, trying to be modest and all. You will now write something great and have me thinking for hours on how to continue.

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Look at you, trying to be modest and all. You will now write something great and have me thinking for hours on how to continue.

Not at all...🙈

Jiya, arya and sri you know you all of them are doing God's job thank you making this week bearable 🤧🤧🤧

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Okay a drabble on demand by nezuko and amaraddict...❤️

Not a part of this series...just a bonus before i write part 11

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A normal morning in the haveli...

Vir was a bit low that morning, still upset and angry and confused as he had seen yogi and vipul joking with purvi and both of them had held Purvi's hands to take her away from the kitchen for a game of ludo...When he tried to join the game, he saw that already four people were there, Vaibhav having joined them...

He couldn't forget his feelings, it was as if someone splashed cold water on his face and then a burning sensation..."why...i love only sakshi...but when ever i see baawri, i just forget everything about sakshi, only purvi remains ..maybe....no!"...he thought...

While he was sitting there in his office part of tge room, overthinking, a rustle of clothes clinging of bangles snapped him back to reality...

She was coming out of the bathroom, her hair wet, face radiant, a deep blue saree half draped, and the mangalsutra and red bangles her only ornaments....she looks like a goddess, Vir thought...

Purvi couldn't see Vir as she didn't pay attention towards the office. She wasn't able to wear this saree which juhi and manas had gifted in the bathroom...it was too heavy to wear it there.

As purvi started getting ready, Vir could feel his heart doing backflips and the butterflies in his stomach....he hadn't ever seen her getting ready...

Purvi first struggled with the saree, it kept slipping off...she usually wore lehanga choli... Vir's hands ached to help her with her pallu, but he wanted to see the whole process too, enjoy it...

She simply pulled the anchal of the saree and tucked it near her waist, planning to attack it after getting ready, and started drying her hair... Water droplets were spraying around her as the towel whipped up and down and Vir couldn't believe he was feeling jealous of a towel...

Then she simply let down her hair, plain and simple, no elaborate hairstyles, yet so so beautiful, Vir realised

As she applied kohl and put on a small bindi, all Vir wanted was to drown in her eyes, emmerse in the feeling that she was all his, no ome else's... And her lipstick... when she coloured her lips red...all he was capable to desire was to just kiss her then and there and end his own dilemma and her pain too...

Her earrings were simple and the kamarbandh...the kamarbandh was what she couldn't find... though she searched for it everywhere...

Then Vir could control no longer...he went up to her , took out her kamarbandh from his pocket and wrapped it around his waist...

Purvi was so shocked at first she couldn't say anything...why was he doing this...why was her kamarbandh with him...why the hell was he giving her so many damn false hopes?...

"Aap yahan...hum ne dekha hi nahi aap yahan thhey-" Vir put a finger on her lips before she could say anything more...

Then he pulled out her tucked anchal from her waist and helped her with it...not bothering about the pained confused looks she was giving him... And finally...took some sindoor from her box and filled her parting in her hair...

Doing this he turned her around so both of them were visible in the mirror he said....

"There... you look perfect"

And he went away before purvi could see through his expressions and see how much he enjoyed seeing her like that, getting ready and how much he wanted to hold her and just be there with her.... forever...

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Jiya my girl 🤗🤗

Thank you so much ❤❤❤❤

Tumne actually itni jaldi likh diya😳😳

That kamarbandh scene🙈🙈🙈🔥🔥🔥 haye he even put a sindoor on her 🥺🥺😫😫😫 my heart this was really good eagerly waiting for the part 11👍👍😁😁

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 10

A knock on the door caused them to break free from each other, both trying to catch their breath.

It was Servant...

"mukhiji wo Mama sarkar aapne yaad kar rahe the......"

"haa.. "

He couldn't even look at her... The proximity they had few moments ago has created a havoc in him... He knew he has done something for which he was stopping himself since long...he wanted to taste her lips always, specially whenever she compared him with her tau... But today the jealousy in him made him do it....

Mukhi stormed out of the room leaving a baffled and messed up purvi behind...she was still in that moment when he took her....the moment he cupped her face she has surrendered herself to him... Bcoz she loves him... But what made him do thiswas question eating her up.... "par Unhone yeh kiya kyun... Wo humse pyaar nahi karte... Aaj bhi wo sirf sakshiji se pyaar karte hai.... Purvi tu bekar ke sapne mat bun... Dekhna baadme aake kajenge ki weak moment tha ho gaya bhool ja... Isiliye tu koi umeed mat rakh..."

Purvi left for the kitchen to complete her remaining cores.... She completed her all the cores was when prakashi came to her...

"maa poora kaam ho gaya hai... Khana bhi humne table pe laga diya hai.... Hum thoda bacho ko dekh kar aate hai... "

"chali jaana pehle chai bana de sabke liye.. Bacho ki chinta na kar dono khel rahe hai yogi ke saath...chai lawn me le aana... "

"thik hai MA... "

Prakashi left from there with a mischievous smile... Purvi dint understand why did she gave such a smile....

Mukhi went to Mama sarkar who was sitting in lawn...

"aapne bulaya mama sarkar... "

"haa vir... Wo baandh ke bare me baat karni thi tujhse... "

Mama sarkar couldn't believe what he saw.... He cleared his eyes and saw again... He could see sindoor marks on mukhi left cheek...mama sarkar thought as he was in his painting room some color would have stocked there... Just when he was about to say.... He saw purvi coming and saw her sindoor smudged... Mama sarkar got it what would have happened... He sat back smiling....

"key hua aap has kyun rahe ho... "

His loud voice got everybody attention to him and now everyone started smiling softly seeing both of them.... Mukhi lost his cool completely... Even purvi was puzzled while serving tea to everyone...

"arey aisa kounsa chutkulla maara maine jo khe khe khe kar rahe ho sab... "

"wo bhai ji... Humesha na shaadi shuda aadmi ko kamre se nikalne se pehle ek baar aine me dekhna chahiye.... " said yogi...

This made everyone laugh out loud.... Purvi checked mukhi face to know why is yogi saying all this and she noticed her sindoor... She got so embarrassed seeing him like this... How can he be so dumb to come just like that....

"kyun... Mhare chehre pe aisa key hai jo mujhe dekh ke aana chahiye.... "

"ek min bhai ji... "

Yogi clicked a pic and showed him.... Now mukhi was speechless... He was so embarrassed that he could just utter....

"mein aata hoon...." saying he just ran away.... Followed by purvi who can't even lift her face up....

Both of them just ran to their room.... They couldn't look at eachother...mukhi wiped the sindoor on his face and purvi wiped the smudged sindoor....

"wo... Thaare se kuch bolna tha.... "

"hum jaante hai aap kya kehna chahte hai... "

"key jaanti hai tu... "

"yehi na jo thodi der pehle jo hua wo bas galti se hua... Wo kehte hai na weak moment... "

He couldn't believe that she said it a mistake which was their first kiss...

"arey... "

"please kuch mat boliye... Hum bohut baar sun chuke hai ki aap sirf sakshiji se pyaar karte hai aur Hume yeh baat yaad hai.... "

Saying she left the room with wet eyes.... Mukhi was cursing himself as his love for Sakshi has given her such a pain that she thought that he will think about their first kiss as a mistake and instead of hearing it from him she thought of accepting it by herself.....

"Maine tanne itna dard diya key bawri.... "

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Hope u all like it.... Don't throw chappals if it's not good...

Sri🤧🤧🤧❤❤❤

Mamaji you are supposed to fight the evil not to join them🙄🙄🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️ ap kaise kebab me haddi ban Gaye

Yogi ka dialogue hai this is already 10/10

Ek to inki pehli kiss upar se vo bhi Sab ghr walo ko pata chal gaya hai in dono ne kuch kiya hai😭😭🤣🤣🤣

Vir ka sakshi rag bandh hua to purvi ne start kardiya ek bar sun to lete vo kehna kya chata hai🤣🤣🤣

Yogi ne click ki..... op stuff right there

Sri you write it beautifully 👌❤❤❤

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

How do you guys write so damn well....ab main next part mein kya likhu kaise likhu darr lag raha...❤️❤️❤️🙈🙈🙈

Thank you jiya... 🤗

Waiting for ur super amazing update....

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Sri, this is exactly how I thought the scene would play out. I love how you dealt with the aftermath of thalt kiss. Also, Purvi thinking the kiss was a mistake was just heartbreaking. But I feel equally heartbroken for Vir too. He knows he's hurting his bawrii but I also understand his dilemma. He's been in love with Sakshi for so long that it won't be easy to give himself the liberty to fall for someone else now. Oh I just love this.

Now let's see where Jiya takes this.

Thank you arya... 🤗

I am glad we think alike... 😉

Now purvi is really afraid to even think that he might love her bcoz she don't want to get hurt again and again so she adapted the way of accepting her fate as a on sided lover....

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Okay a drabble on demand by nezuko and amaraddict...❤️

Not a part of this series...just a bonus before i write part 11

------

A normal morning in the haveli...

Vir was a bit low that morning, still upset and angry and confused as he had seen yogi and vipul joking with purvi and both of them had held Purvi's hands to take her away from the kitchen for a game of ludo...When he tried to join the game, he saw that already four people were there, Vaibhav having joined them...

He couldn't forget his feelings, it was as if someone splashed cold water on his face and then a burning sensation..."why...i love only sakshi...but when ever i see baawri, i just forget everything about sakshi, only purvi remains ..maybe....no!"...he thought...

While he was sitting there in his office part of tge room, overthinking, a rustle of clothes clinging of bangles snapped him back to reality...

She was coming out of the bathroom, her hair wet, face radiant, a deep blue saree half draped, and the mangalsutra and red bangles her only ornaments....she looks like a goddess, Vir thought...

Purvi couldn't see Vir as she didn't pay attention towards the office. She wasn't able to wear this saree which juhi and manas had gifted in the bathroom...it was too heavy to wear it there.

As purvi started getting ready, Vir could feel his heart doing backflips and the butterflies in his stomach....he hadn't ever seen her getting ready...

Purvi first struggled with the saree, it kept slipping off...she usually wore lehanga choli... Vir's hands ached to help her with her pallu, but he wanted to see the whole process too, enjoy it...

She simply pulled the anchal of the saree and tucked it near her waist, planning to attack it after getting ready, and started drying her hair... Water droplets were spraying around her as the towel whipped up and down and Vir couldn't believe he was feeling jealous of a towel...

Then she simply let down her hair, plain and simple, no elaborate hairstyles, yet so so beautiful, Vir realised

As she applied kohl and put on a small bindi, all Vir wanted was to drown in her eyes, emmerse in the feeling that she was all his, no ome else's... And her lipstick... when she coloured her lips red...all he was capable to desire was to just kiss her then and there and end his own dilemma and her pain too...

Her earrings were simple and the kamarbandh...the kamarbandh was what she couldn't find... though she searched for it everywhere...

Then Vir could control no longer...he went up to her , took out her kamarbandh from his pocket and wrapped it around his waist...

Purvi was so shocked at first she couldn't say anything...why was he doing this...why was her kamarbandh with him...why the hell was he giving her so many damn false hopes?...

"Aap yahan...hum ne dekha hi nahi aap yahan thhey-" Vir put a finger on her lips before she could say anything more...

Then he pulled out her tucked anchal from her waist and helped her with it...not bothering about the pained confused looks she was giving him... And finally...took some sindoor from her box and filled her parting in her hair...

Doing this he turned her around so both of them were visible in the mirror he said....

"There... you look perfect"

And he went away before purvi could see through his expressions and see how much he enjoyed seeing her like that, getting ready and how much he wanted to hold her and just be there with her.... forever...

***

Jiya.... 🤗

So beautiful... Vir made her wear the saree.. And the kmarband... I so want a kamarband scene in the show as well.....u wrote so well I visualized them literally....

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

You and sri do magic...ab mujhe accha khasa sochna hoga where to take this...

Look who is talking... Ur writing takes me to purvir land.... I start imagining them....

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Sri🤧🤧🤧❤❤❤

Mamaji you are supposed to fight the evil not to join them🙄🙄🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️ ap kaise kebab me haddi ban Gaye

Yogi ka dialogue hai this is already 10/10

Ek to inki pehli kiss upar se vo bhi Sab ghr walo ko pata chal gaya hai in dono ne kuch kiya hai😭😭🤣🤣🤣

Vir ka sakshi rag bandh hua to purvi ne start kardiya ek bar sun to lete vo kehna kya chata hai🤣🤣🤣

Yogi ne click ki..... op stuff right there

Sri you write it beautifully 👌❤❤❤

Nezu... 🤗

Glad u liked it.... Yogi ko dialogues milna is out manokamna... Hope show me jald hi poora ho.... 😆