Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 6

Hope Shyam does not show up please not nice update

Wow another amazing update.

Khushi is married nahinnn

It will be task for Payal to manage between Arnav Akash n Khushi.

What I also like here is Payal seems to be a strong character. She is not weak and she knows where to take a stand

Very nice start to the "Story of the decade"

Part 1: Both Arnav and Khushi are struggling with their own demons, Arnav - emotional, Khushi - both physical and emotional.

I have to appreciate Khushi's courage here to try and escape, even though she has tired earlier and has been caught every single time. Her determination and courage to escape hell is praiseworthy. She did not die in the hell but she escaped.

Arnav's panic attacks and his phobia seeing fire was so heart breaking to read.

Payal is a beautiful soul.

Part 2: Khushi might be a broken person but she is a person with strong principals. She refused to take any kind of advantage or help from her savior and wants to work and live respectfully. This nature of Khushi will surely take her a long way.

Arnav needs healing, he needs someone to apply balm on his injured soul.

Very nice chapters both the writers, Aboli and Raji. Great going.

Just read both parts and what an eventful start indeed! I simply love the concept - we still have the world of AR and (what I think is) a similarly traumatic past that Arnav and his family have to deal with. However, the twist of Khushi being married to an abusive Shyam Manohar Jha took me by surprise and amped up the suspense of the story for me.

I am intrigued by where the tale will take us, mainly because I'm a sucker for characterization and character arcs, and there's a lot to be discovered here - Khushi secrets and vulnerabilities with her marriage and her personal life in general, as well as Arnav's panic attacks and mental health paired with his weariness around strangers in his house... so very interesting!

Two wonderful chapters by Aboli and Raji 👏❤️

Edit: Forgot to add this but I adore Payal and Arnav's relationship here. Wish we got to see more of their dynamic in the show as well.

Originally posted by: ItsRain

Just read both parts and what an eventful start indeed! I simply love the concept - we still have the world of AR and (what I think is) a similarly traumatic past that Arnav and his family have to deal with. However, the twist of Khushi being married to an abusive Shyam Manohar Jha took me by surprise and amped up the suspense of the story for me.

I am intrigued by where the tale will take us, mainly because I'm a sucker for characterization and character arcs, and there's a lot to be discovered here - Khushi secrets and vulnerabilities with her marriage and her personal life in general, as well as Arnav's panic attacks and mental health paired with his weariness around strangers in his house... so very interesting!

Two wonderful chapters by Aboli and Raji 👏❤️

Edit: Forgot to add this but I adore Payal and Arnav's relationship here. Wish we got to see more of their dynamic in the show as well.

Rain ji! Join in on the Writer's side too! 😳

Would love to read your writing style blending here ❤️.

Check out this thread if you haven't-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/5197657/story-of-the-decade-inviting-all-ipk-writers-announcement-on-pg-29

Chapter 1

A great beginning of the story!

So there is a haunting past for Arnav and Akash and an equally disturbing present for Khushi. Is it the shared pain that will bring them together and open up? I am already looking forward to their interactions.

The fact that Khushi is married will be an added impediment to the story and I am eager to see how it would pan out in the coming chapters by the other talented writers.

With respect to the writing, I really liked your narration style. Allowed me to connect with the characters.

Thanks a lot for this beautiful start.

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Chapter 1

A great beginning of the story!

So there is a haunting past for Arnav and Akash and an equally disturbing present for Khushi. Is it the shared pain that will bring them together and open up? I am already looking forward to their interactions.

The fact that Khushi is married will be an added impediment to the story and I am eager to see how it would pan out in the coming chapters by the other talented writers.

With respect to the writing, I really liked your narration style. Allowed me to connect with the characters.

Thanks a lot for this beautiful start.

Thanks a lot❤️. I am also eager to see how this story shapes up. Do join us as a writer too🤗. Will be glad to have you on board. If you want to join us do visit this link and drop a message.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/5197657/story-of-the-decade-inviting-all-ipk-writers-announcement-on-pg-29

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Yeah but I am missing childish khushi here😉

Can't wait for the next chapter

Once upon a time may be. Let us see if someone decides to show us a childish Khushi.😉

Cheers....

Originally posted by: shiv456

Hope Shyam does not show up please not nice update

Thanks for the comment.

Cheers....

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

Wow another amazing update.

Khushi is married nahinnn

It will be task for Payal to manage between Arnav Akash n Khushi.

What I also like here is Payal seems to be a strong character. She is not weak and she knows where to take a stand

Thank you for the comment.

Cheers.....