Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 5

Raji! Really you gave a magnificent turn to the story.

Though story is going smoothly but its really tranquil for me.

Here I can see some bonding starts between Khushi and Payal. May be they have any special bond who knows in next chapter may be i can see some revelation on it.

Comes to Khushi, I love her simplicity. How pure she is!

Because of some tragic past she can't get over from it. Excited to see how Arnav will gonna help her.

But here I am worried about Payal hope so Arnav and Akash will not say anything to her about her decision related to Khushi. Let's see what happens next.

Would love to read next chapter😊

Perfect Continuation to the story. I really loved the detailing.

Your style is so unique that it keeps me hooked to the story even if the progress is smooth.

Awesome chapter :)

Wohoo Raji...should I say the beautiful part surprised me on more than one occasions but in a good way😉👏

First of all Arnav...he didn't have much trust on strangers... but he cared for her last night😆... should I say care is from first night 😳

Payal is the strongest character 😉... From grilling her husband... to caring for big brother and then managing a gloomy Khushi...

A middle path for Khushi's stay...liked it

I guess even Hari Kaka is scared of Payal Bhabhiji🤣

No Arshi moment yet....but let's see if something will happen in next one🤔

And that last line was Gajab. I mean you put the burden of some dhamekdar twist on next update😆

All in all loved it😃

Originally posted by: abivicky86

The title “Story of the Decade’’ is very apt. After reading the two chapters I really feel so it is going to be the best story and it will be interesting to read since it is going to be written by many members who are brilliant writers.

The chapter was beautifully written though much is yet to be revealed. Payal came as kushi’s savior by saving her from Shyam and so also she showed that how large hearted she is by allowing her to stay in the outhouse as requested by kushi since she did not want to be caught by shyam.

But one wonders how long can Payal keep kushi away from coming in front of Arnav as she knows he does not like intruders in his home.

.Excited to read what happens next.

As Stuti said, this story is still an Anamika and waiting to receive a proper name.

Cheers....

Originally posted by: Vandie

Beautiful storyline

Married Khushi and Arnav!!

Is Khushi going to help in kitchen? So many mysteries regarding their past!

But this is such a short update..

Hope to have regular and longer updates

Waiting eagerly

Love

Vandie

Cheers....

Originally posted by: Asha1968

This is a great initiative - different writers bringing in their own style of writing and telling the story from their own perspective.

A gradual build up to the story... wherein Khushi is trying to think her next course of action, Arnav sceptical about Khushi and Payal in a dilemma in that she wants to help Khushi but not upset Arnav.

Looking forward to 17th

Cheers...

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Raji! Really you gave a magnificent turn to the story.

Though story is going smoothly but its really tranquil for me.

Here I can see some bonding starts between Khushi and Payal. May be they have any special bond who knows in next chapter may be i can see some revelation on it.

Comes to Khushi, I love her simplicity. How pure she is!

Because of some tragic past she can't get over from it. Excited to see how Arnav will gonna help her.

But here I am worried about Payal hope so Arnav and Akash will not say anything to her about her decision related to Khushi. Let's see what happens next.

Would love to read next chapter😊

Cheers....

Originally posted by: ShiriFictionPen

Perfect Continuation to the story. I really loved the detailing.

Your style is so unique that it keeps me hooked to the story even if the progress is smooth.

Awesome chapter :)

Now I can sit back and read all other chapters. I am sure everyone will use their own flavours and garnish to make the chapters more interesting. Looking forward to read your chapter next week.

Cheers.....

Originally posted by: Pinnkiswan

Wohoo Raji...should I say the beautiful part surprised me on more than once occasions but in a good way😉👏

First of all Arnav...he didn't have much trust on strangers... but he cared for her last night😆... should I say care is from first night 😳

Payal is the strongest character 😉... From grilling her husband... to caring for big brother and then managing a gloomy Khushi...

A middle path for Khushi's stay...liked it

I guess even Hari Kaka is scared of Payal Bhabhiji🤣

No Arshi moment yet....but let's see if something will happen in next one🤔

And that last lime was Gajab. I mean you put the burden of some dhamekdar twist on next update😆

All in all loved it😃

Cheers....

Originally posted by: Savera84

Thank you Bhavna. Payal is completely different in this story. So, the new bonding between Payal and Khushi will be interesting to read. Khushi is always like that. Never depending on anyone. I can't wait to read chapters.

Cheers....

Yeah but I am missing childish khushi here😉

Can't wait for the next chapter