Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Vindria12

Already excited for the next part❤️ This part was❤️❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: Savera84

Vindria, Thank you for liking the chapter. Do comeback to this thread for Chapter 3 on 17th of January 2021.

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Yess for sure ❤️ i am really liking the story 🌸❤️

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

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Wheee... I was almost afraid of losing the first spot since IF is buzzing these days. But glad that I didnt 😆.

Coming to the chapter, I don't know how exactly to put this.... but this writing seems so... umm different than what I would have thought of Raji writing (based on whatever I've read earlier). It's a good different of course 😆. And Raji, I'm definitely going to hound you for writing more often now 😆.

I liked the slow progress in this chapter after the dhamakedaar start. After all, rather than just events happening, we also need a look into the subtleties... and this chapter brought forth nearly everyone's thoughts.

Shyam... well what do I say? He is hovering in the background and it's just a matter of time before he comes to the foreground too. But I hope that Arshi see some progress before that. Or will it be his return that will make Arshi progress? It can go both ways...

Arnav is wary of Khushi while Payal is concerned for Khushi but definitely more concerned for Arnav (rightfully so). Khushi doesn't want to extend her stay here but doesn't have anywhere else go either.

Her refusal to use the toiletries, hesitance at taking the dress, etc are clearly pointing out that she doesn't want to take too much advantage of the kindness and hospitality that Payal is offering.

I understand that Khushi escaped in a very desperate state. But one wonders what she would have done had she not met Payal. Where would she go to, what would she have done for a living, how would you manage the basic necessities of food and shelter... these questions haunt my mind.

Why is Khushi not welcome to go back to her home? Her father died but her mother is still there....? Does she have any other family?

A lot of questions and I'll wait for the next chapter to bring in some answers and further questions 😆.

On the whole, it was a wonderful chapter Raji! ⭐️

Love,

Stuti

So, I have to take the middle ground and make it slow. Even I don't know what is going to happen next. I know answer to only one question. But, I won't reveal it now.

Thanks for a lovely comment.

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Originally posted by: Uzii

Khushi is save from that monster here in Arnav’s house and I hope nothing bad happens from here on for khushi and Arnav protect her from Shyam.

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Originally posted by: PriyaArshiSarun

Aboli you start chapter 1 of story very well 👏 l like starting.

Raji you continue chapter 2 of story very smoothly 👍🏼.

Waiting for another chapter of story .

Credit goes to Aboli, for the smooth continuation.

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The title “Story of the Decade’’ is very apt. After reading the two chapters I really feel so it is going to be the best story and it will be interesting to read since it is going to be written by many members who are brilliant writers.

The chapter was beautifully written though much is yet to be revealed. Payal came as kushi’s savior by saving her from Shyam and so also she showed that how large hearted she is by allowing her to stay in the outhouse as requested by kushi since she did not want to be caught by shyam.

But one wonders how long can Payal keep kushi away from coming in front of Arnav as she knows he does not like intruders in his home.

.Excited to read what happens next.

Beautiful storyline

Married Khushi and Arnav!!

Is Khushi going to help in kitchen? So many mysteries regarding their past!

But this is such a short update..

Hope to have regular and longer updates

Waiting eagerly

Love

Vandie

Originally posted by: Vandie

Beautiful storyline

Married Khushi and Arnav!!

Is Khushi going to help in kitchen? So many mysteries regarding their past!

But this is such a short update..

Hope to have regular and longer updates

Waiting eagerly

Love

Vandie

I hope you're aware that each chapter of this story will be written by different writer. It's a collective tribute from our fandom's writers to the show on it's upcoming 10th Anniversary 😃.

Updates will be regular since there's a fixed schedule of which writer will update on which date 😳. But the length may vary from chapter to chapter and writer to writer. It's difficult for a story to maintain continuity and consistency with so many writers and writing styles as it is. We can't impose word limits along with that 😊.

Glad to see you supporting this story though 😳. Help us in spreading the word and roping in more writers ⭐️.

Love,

Stuti

Originally posted by: abivicky86

The title “Story of the Decade’’ is very apt. After reading the two chapters I really feel so it is going to be the best story and it will be interesting to read since it is going to be written by many members who are brilliant writers.

The chapter was beautifully written though much is yet to be revealed. Payal came as kushi’s savior by saving her from Shyam and so also she showed that how large hearted she is by allowing her to stay in the outhouse as requested by kushi since she did not want to be caught by shyam.

But one wonders how long can Payal keep kushi away from coming in front of Arnav as she knows he does not like intruders in his home.

.Excited to read what happens next.

Eeeee... I'll take the title credit 😆. Hehe! But we are thinking of changing the title to make it suitable to the storyline or it's genre.

The other thread where we are recruiting writers for this story, will be carrying this same title though 😳.

If you can think of any alternative titles for the story, we are open to suggestions 😳. Also, help us by spreading the word and roping in your favorite writers 😃.

Love,

Stuti

This is a great initiative - different writers bringing in their own style of writing and telling the story from their own perspective.

A gradual build up to the story... wherein Khushi is trying to think her next course of action, Arnav sceptical about Khushi and Payal in a dilemma in that she wants to help Khushi but not upset Arnav.

Looking forward to 17th