Shivani bua’s characterization

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Posted: 4 years ago
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One of my big pet peeves with ITV shows is that sometimes the lack of a well fleshed out character graph for supporting star cast. At least in all the shows I have seen, supporting cast is just there as filler. I feel this is a shame because this is the perfect platform to really show us every characters journey in full because there’s no time constraints!

So after that preamble, let me start with a disclaimer that I absolutely adore the Sai-Shivani bond and Shivani’s character shown thus far. She connects with Sai because they both to some degree are muphat, both find joys in little things also, both face adversity with their chin up and head high. No matter how hurt they are they face the world with their armour on like a fierce warrior.

While I’m thrilled that they are showing some subplot in the story with Amey cheating on Shivani is being explored. I feel that the execution is too rushed.

For a change, I wish they would have done this in a stretched out manner. I wish they showed us a little different and little more background of Shivani so we can empathize and connect with her better.

For example, i was trying to create my own story for Shivani- if they had shown Shivani as a headstrong independent career woman who had her own business which maybe failed due to her prior husband duping her and how she’s lost her drive since then...and how she gave up on career because she felt like that’s what led to her marriages failing even though she really misses working. it would explain her life events. So far we see that Shivani only does part-time tarot reading. right now we see that she is this really sweet GF who doesn’t believe in the typical chauvinistic mentality that only the guy should pay and bear a womans expenses. She is ready to invest not just emotionally but financially in a relationship and support her partner. But we don’t have any explanation for where she gets the money from. Is it alimony from previous marriage or khandaani paisa. Alimony concept i understand but unless one partner in a failed relationship has been put in a situation where they were either unable to pursue a career (homemaker which is an unpaid job) or unfairly duped financially, most women in the modern day and should be able to be financially independent.

Here we get no explanations about why her previous marriages failed. Why is a modern khalayat ki lady who is well spoken and confident sitting at home doing tarot reading.

Also personally for me because she doesn’t have a fully fleshed out backstory I can’t fully connect with her current condition. I definitely feel really bad for her but in order for the audience to also be rooting all the way for shivani they need to show us more. Ek hi din main boyfriend se mila bhi diya, Sai ko doubt bhi hogaya and she attempted to clear her doubts by convincing bua to ask amey about marriage and bua who one dialogue ago said ki i no longer am interested in marriage has asked amey if he wants to marry her and the guys wife has come to shivani with nari Sena to throw black ink also. Little too much fast forward. Itni kya jaldi hai.

I know even the quickest and simplest backstory I suggested has some loopholes but it’s better than nothing. Like we could ask why would Shivani stay with family if she was a career woman. But they could give some explanations- either because business main loss hua so, or maybe that after 2 divorces she wants to live with her family no matter how bitter some of them are just coz she doesn’t feel as lonely as she would if she lived on her own. But agar side character ko bhi ek accha graph mile toh the story can be more engaging. And in future it will provide more subplot opportunities- they can show Sai support bua in rebuilding her business and when Sai is in trouble, bua can help her out because she is always gonna be grateful to Sai for being there when no one else was.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Some people might think maybe too much time spent on side characters will take away from the leads but i dont think so coz theres luxury of time in a tv serial. If they gradually built the side characters they'd get more time to show all kinds of scenes. Because i don't know if we will get to see the Sairat dinner scene at all because they were in a tearing rush to show everything happen with shivani in 1 day!

Because when virat gets home all this hungama is happening. And the CM peeps will have their own taunting session for Sai (to blame her somehow fir this mess also🙄)and Shivani after these women leave and if Sai takes Shivani with her to the room to console her then toh kahaan humein Sairat dinner scene milega....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Your so right. Shivanis character has no depth hence I’m not able to connect with her. After 2 divorces won’t someone be more careful about their affections. If an 18 yr old girl can smell something fishy shivani should be more circumspect about any relationship.

I like her supporting Sai but probably this story about Amay is to support some part of Sai & Virats story. Don’t know how though.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I agree, they should build layers to side characters. Like we only know about Virat, Sai and bit about Ashwini.

Baki logon ka just basic info pata hain and most of them are single dimension characters who can be defined with just one adjective.


Like you said, though we feel sad for Shivani as she is super nice person, it is kind of difficult to relate to that character when there is no proper build up.


Didn't she get the bf during Samrat's wedding, they would have built it from there, chote mote scenes hi sahi, take 2-3 mins of the time to develop each side character per day.


Also why should drama always happen with the leads. So in a way I am happy that this time the drama was not due to Sai, instead she helps in solving it.


We know nothing about Mohit even though he lives in same house. He hardly gets dialogues since Virat's wedding. No background for Omi and Sonali. How did Mohit and Karishma meet and marry? etc


Given that they air 6 days a week, not every episode needs a shouting OTT scene. Some of the filler episodes can be around side characters.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Basically everything is way too rushed with this subplot. They don't need to show it all in only 2-3 episodes! Jab nahi chahiye tab yeh log scene ko itnaaa kheechte hai. Aur jab thodi aur background aur story ki zarurat thi toh they are rushing it. Maybe the guy playing amey is available to shoot for ONLY 1 day! Thats why they are in fasy forward mode. Lol.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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In the original, Shivani was muuucchhh older, so it made sense that a guy could manipulate her with sweet words, but here Shivani doesn't look old at all and I don't really see an age difference between her and Amay. Because she looks younger, I am having a hard time digesting the fact that she will get tricked by some luccha lafanga like Amay.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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What happened today? Thought this shivani bua drama would happen like on Saturday then what now?? Where there any sairat scenes?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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In the other versions , the mohit character also has a few subplots but not too meaty from what i can tell. Basically usko bhi CM waale insuly karte hai and Sai will stand up against that. And she also helps him find job i think. So he will be grateful and eventually when in future Virat- Sai will have their full on face offs and MUs (like the major ones) , just like shivani, ashwini, this mohit character will also be on Sais team and say a few lines in her support.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: prs_725

What happened today? Thought this shivani bua drama would happen like on Saturday then what now?? Where there any sairat scenes?


No direct Sairat scenes but theres a cute Ashwini-Sai scene which starts off as Sai cutely "complaining" about virat but the minute ashwini says something, sai herself jumps to his defense and then she denies eating food because Virat had told her they will eat together. Ashwini figures out that she wants to wait for her husband dearest so she teases her subtly and doesnt compel her to eat. And virat gets call from DIG inviting him for a party but he turns it down saying that he promised his wife they would have dinner together.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Today also had a big chunk of Sai-shivani scenes which were very sweet but they could have scattered them over the course of the next week instead of overloading us with the Sai-Shivani bonding for 2 episodes and then nothing for a while.

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