MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Beautifully update 🤗

Or MiNeil ke bich ki aag bahut dhimi h🤣

So filhaal music ki hi class hogi🤣

haan abhi ye aag dheemi dheemi hi jalegi phir isme se shola bhadkega jo miniel ko pyar ki aag mein jalayega🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

last para lines were proper. it was neil's thought that he was searching for her in whole house and was thinking she left the house as she is hot headed and impulsive.

Sorry . I just got bit confused there. Read it again now. Got it.

Mini mein changes ki prakriya shuru ho gayi hai

Music abh mini ke life mein changes layega

Emotions ko thodee thodee samajh ne lagegi.

Neil ko yahan bahut patience chahiye 🤣

Mini hard , tough cookie hai🤣

Itni jaldi break nahi hogi ye cookie🤣

Ye babes 🤣

Ek dum woh 70s film ki saasu maa hai🤣

Originally posted by: zalima

Mini mein changes ki prakriya shuru ho gayi hai

Music abh mini ke life mein changes layega

Emotions ko thodee thodee samajh ne lagegi.

Neil ko yahan bahut patience chahiye 🤣

Mini hard , tough cookie hai🤣

Itni jaldi break nahi hogi ye cookie🤣

Ye babes 🤣

Ek dum woh 70s film ki saasu maa hai🤣

yes Mini mein changes shuru ho gaye phir bhi abhi bhi bahut time hai...neil ko wiat karna padega aur jyda🤣 uske patience ki hadh tak test hoga uska🤣

Part 7

“What? You want her to learn singing?” Shakuntala was shocked from this new demand her son has made before her. “Maa, don’t overreact. Its just singing.” Neil sighed. “Oberoi khandan ki bahu ye gaana vaana nahi sikhti agar use sikhna hi hai toh ghar ka kaam seekhe, cooking seekhe…aur bhi bahut kuch hai…” Shakuntala continued her rant. “Maa please, Minnu is different. She doesn’t like any of these. She is a free bird. She is already making lots of compromises for this house and trying to fit in. Please, as a hobby, let her learn singing. I am sure it will bring out positive changes in her.” Neil requested. “Neil, why you don’t understand…” Shakuntala again tried to argue but Neil held her hands, “Maa, please…ok this is the last thing I am asking you for something. I promise from now on…aap jo kahengi wahi hoga.” Neil pleaded. Shakuntala looked at him. She knew she lost the battle. She could never say no to her son when he pleads like this. “Fine, but this is the last time I am bowing down to your stubbornness.” Shakuntala reminded him of his promise. “Thank you maa, you are the best.” Neil hugged his mother happily and showed thumbs up to Mini who was listening to their conversation from outside, hiding behind the door. Mini smiled ear to ear, looking forward to improve her talent of singing under the guidance of teacher.

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“Mini, sing something. Let me hear you and decide where you are weak and where we need to focus more.” An elderly man, a famous teacher from the best music school in Patiala was engaged to teach Mini at home as Shakuntala hadn’t allow to go her to music school. But both Neil and Mini were ok with this arrangement as they were atleast getting Mini’s wish fulfilled.

“What should I sing guruji?” Mini asked in confusion. “Anything…any sargam or any song of your choice. Music comes from one’s heart. Close your eyes, find that tune and give words to it.” Guruji answered with smile. Mini closed her eyes and after sometime started singing-

Is mod se jaate hain

Kuchh sust kadam raste

Kuchh tez qadam raahen

Pattharki haweli ko

Shisheke gharaundo men

Tinakonke nasheman tak

Is mod se jaate hain

Andhi ki tarah udkar

Ek raah guzarati hai

Sharamaati hui koi

Qadamon se utarati hai

In reshami raahon men

Ek raah to wo hogi

Tum tak jo pahunchati hai

Is mod se jaate hai

Neil smiled when he heard Mini’s voice. He came down as if captivated by it. There he saw her from far not wanting to disturb her session with guruji. She seems so mature, calm; at peace when she is engrossed in singing otherwise she is always so impulsive, reckless, ready to pick up fights. Neil laughed thinking about her.

All this comes from constant struggles she faced in her heart day to day basis regarding every little thing of this world, challenging its perception and finding place for her own. In this very little time he has come to know her quite well. She was an open book. Whats in her heart is on her face. Initially he was so engrossed in his own feelings that he failed to read her mind. But now he knew her probably more than anyone else. It was easy as not many people including her own father knows her this much.

“She was right. She was so right. People like her live in their own world. His angel, stuck in this selfish, ruthless world….but will she ever find that balance between the two worlds? Will she ever recognize his love for her? Will she reciprocate it?” Neil came out of thoughts when Mini stopped singing.

“Hmm…you sing really well. Sur toh pakke hain tumhare….bas zara gala Khulna baki hai…harkatein kam le paati ho. We will work on everything.” Guruji commented on Mini’s singing skills. She was more than happy to hear praise from her teacher.

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Mini saw Neil was doing gardening. She went near him and started helping him. “Thanks.” She said while handing over a new plant to him put in the hole he dug out in the garden. “Why you are thanking me?” Neil asked in confusion. I saw how you convinced your maa for my singing lessons.” Mini replied. Neil laughed at her words. “You are my wife Minnu. Its my responsibility to fulfill your wishes.”

Mini averted her eyes from him. Neil understood her feelings. “I know you don’t believe much in this relationship but I do. Today you don’t love me but I hope one day you will love me equally.” Neil said while looking into her eyes and Mini just handed over him the plant again to avoid further conversation on this topic. She couldnt hold his intense gaze. She looked down as she blushed at the possibility of loving him like a wife.

“Not so soon Minnu. First we have to put fertilizer and little water then goes the plant.” Neil said as he explained the process of planting. He then took a small stick with which he tied the plant. “Arre! What are you doing? The little plant will die like this. It needs to be free to grow to the full potential.” Mini shared her doubts. “No Minnu. It will help the plant. It will not hinder the plant’s growth but will provide much needed support.” Neil explained. Both of them looked at each other. They shared an eye lock for few minutes. “Our relationship is like this only Minnu. I don’t want to curb your freedom or chain you with me. I will always support you. Trust me, trust my love; cant you feel it?” Neil wanted to say but couldn’t. But he felt Mini understood his unsaid words as she gave him another plant and this time helped him in planting. His fingers brushed with her hand in the process but this time to Neil’s surprise she didn’t pulled back like she felt some current. Neil smiled at her and she smiled in return.

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Mini was watching Neil from the window of her room. Neil was in the garden. Some of his friends from Delhi had come to meet him as they couldn’t attend their wedding. There were total three of them, two guys and a girl. After welcoming them and talking with them for few minutes Mini had come back to her room and now Neil was talking with them.

Neil was scratching his head with the back of his hand every now and then meaning he was now bored. Mini laughed at the thought then suddenly realized how much she has come to know him, understand him. From that initial fight and her complete refusal to accept this marriage, she has come far to now becoming friends with Neil. She liked little things he did for her, the way he stands up for her against his maa, the small gestures he shows like waiting for her in the room at night, watching her when she attends her singing sessions with guruji, helping her in the kitchen whenever that budhiya forces her to make something.

She loved their morning routine with him. They go out for jogging together but he let her go to meet her friends. He even allowed her to invite them over in their house and in the mango farm to play with her and pluck mangoes from there like they used to do it previously. Mini laughed remembering budhiya’s expressions when she found out Mini climbed the tree again. She looked like she is having constipation.

Mini had find her comfort zone with Neil but she was still not ready to be his wife. She got habituated now to the accidental touches but she still got goose bumps from it. Her heart still starts racing thinking about it.

“Neil, you are one lucky fellow. You got a very beautiful wife.” One of his friend, Mickey said and Mini came out of her thoughts listening them. “No yaar, Mini is the lucky one. Look at Neil, iske jaisa ladka milna kitna mushkil hai. Aise hi nahi iske peechhe itni ladkiyan deewani hain.” One of his friend Jazz expressed her opinion as she patted him on the back.

Mini saw that and she didn’t know why but she wanted to push that girl away from Neil. Mini noticed Neil blushed at her comment and this made Mini more angry. “Arre, kahi un deewani ladkiyo mein tumhara bhi toh naam shamil nahi hai?” another friend Bobby joked. “ Haaye kya karu mere toh armaan dil mein hi reh gaye…isne to mujhe ghaas bhi nahi daali.” Jazz said dramatically as she also joked about it. All of them started laughing. But Mini felt the first pang of jealousy in her life and it left her confuse agitated and insecure.

She looked at Jazz as if to compare herself with her. Jazz was wearing a saree but was looking sexy as hell in it. Her blouse had deep cut in the back. She teamed it with chiffon designer saree and high heels. Her pallu from the front was not covering her whole chest area like it should have done ideally but it was going from the middle of her breast exposing her cleavage. She had tied her saree below the navel. Her sexy back and waist was on display for everyone. She looked like some glamorous girl from fashion world.

Then Mini ran in front of mirror of her room and looked herself. She was wearing normal day to day cotton saree as she found it comfortable. Her blouse had decent neck from front as well as from back. Moreover her long hairs were covering her back or whatever of it could have been visible. She had covered her chest properly and had used multiple pins to hold her pallu in place. She suddenly realized that forget about looking glamorous, she was not even looking presentable in this attire.

Mini remembered how Jazz touched Neil’s arms and how he blushed at her compliment. “May be he likes that girl too and why not she is beautiful after all.” Mini thought. She was confused when and how these girly feelings suddenly emerging out from her heart. Before today she never considered dressing as an important part of her routine. She was happy with her lose t shirts and jeans but here that budhiya made her wear sarees so she had chosen these simple cotton sarees for herself.

Mini saw her image in the mirror again. She remembered Jazz’s glamorous saree. She didn’t know what happened to her but before she knew, she had started making bun of her hairs. Then she opened the pins of her pallu, it came falling down revealing her perfect figure. Mini took it and put it again like Jazz has done in, revealing her cleavage. She then lowered her saree below her navel. She smiled at her reflection and walked like a model in front of mirror as checked herself out and pouted for a selfie pose.

Mini was lost in her own world when her eyes fell on Neil who was standing at the door of their room, looking at her with his mouth open. Mini gasped, “What…what are you doing here…you were in the garden with your friends right?” Mini asked totally shocked by his presence. “I….wo….main…friends…wo toh…chale gaye.” Neil stammered still recovering from the shock. He couldn’t believe what he saw. Mini….his Minnu…checking out herself in mirror…walking like some model….and the way she lowered her saree…her tantalizing waist …and that act of showing off her cleavage….her pouty lips....” Neil felt his throat has gone dry remembering all of it again.

“What are you looking at? Close your eyes now.” Mini ordered seeing his expressions. “I…I…wo….main….” Neil stammered again unable to move from there or close his eyes. Mini was so embarrassed at the thought that he saw all her act. When he didn’t move she marched towards him and shut the door close on his face. That night Neil had yet another sleepless night but this time Mini also couldn’t sleep.

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“Minnu, what happen? Why are you sad?” Neil asked from Mini when she didn’t show up for dinner and was sitting in their room looking all upset. “Today I called my dadu biji. They couldn’t come in our marriage because dadu was sick at that time. But I came to know today that he still hasn’t recovered from sickness. In fact his health has worsened. Biji was crying over the phone. She said that dadu is very upset that they didn’t get to see me as a bride and this thing is bothering him so much. I love my dadu biji so much. Now I am also missing them. I want to go there to meet them. They live in village. I want to go there.” Mini sobbed.

“Don’t worry Minnu, he will be alright soon. And you can go there if you want, what is the need to cry over it.” Neil wiped her tears. “No, she is not going anywhere.” Shakuntala said. She was standing at the door of their room. She had brought food for Neil as he also hadn’t eaten anything yet.

“Why? Why I cant go to meet my own dadu biji?” Mini questioned. “Because I said so. From tomorrow chaitra navratri is starting. I have planned for maata ki chowki and special programs for each day. You are my daughter in law and this is your first festival after marriage so everything, all preparations has to be done by you. Many relatives, family friends, guest will come. What will they think if they find you missing from such an important festival. ”Shakuntala gave her reason.

“But maa, her dadu’s health is also important.” Neil argued. “Tum toh chup hi raho Neil. Ab tak tumhari zidd ke chalte maine is ladki ko bahut chhut de rakhi thi lekin is bar mamla hamare culture hamare dharm ka hai aur isme main koi bhi galti bardasht nahi karungi.” Shakuntala stated very clearly.

“I wont participate in any of your programs. I will go to meet my dadu biji.” Mini said stubbornly. “You dare step out of this house without my permission, I promise, this time I will complain your father and Naeem bi about it and make sure they punish you themselves.” Shakuntala threatened her. Mini started crying loudly now. With that challenging tone Shakuntala had said that she knew Shakuntala can do that and if her father or Naeem bi come to know about it, god knows for how many days they will scold Mini and made her do whatever Shakuntala says.

Neil couldn’t see Mini like this. His heart ached for her, feeling her sadness. “Maa, be considerate towards Minnu. She will not spend all 9 days. She will come back soon…I promise.” “Neil, this time I am not going to listen to you. Remember when you persuaded me to let her learn singing. You said it was the last thing you are asking for. Now you cant keep back out from that promise. Aur waise bhi pooja-dharm ye sab is ghar ke atoot niyam hain jo main kisi ke liye bhi nahi badal sakti…tumhare liye bhi nahi. So its final. Ye ladki kahi nahi ja rahi.” Shakuntala announced her decision and left their room. Mini looked at Neil with hope but he looked down in guilt as he was helpless this time. Mini hid her face in the pillow and cried herself to sleep.

to be continued.....

Changes have started in Mini. Unknown to her. Jealous mini🤣 wife is a wife always🤣 . Shaku😈

Shaku babes is getting on my nerves now😡send her to some pilgrimage at end at least if not now 🤣 Mini is acting girly 🤣 this itself is big change .

Originally posted by: su_94

Changes have started in Mini. Unknown to her. Jealous mini🤣 wife is a wife always🤣 . Shaku😈

Any age and any type wife none can tolerate girl like this near their partners and same goes to hubby also 🤣 if any handsome boy next to his girl and trying to flirt 🤣 they feel more jealous than girls

Beautifully written Anjali . Proces of understanding and respecting each other. Music will make Mini understand emotions more clearly now .

Bahut hi sundar likha pura gardening wala aur MiNeil relationship connections 👏

Minnu billi ko kuch kuch ho raha hai

Bechara Neil 🤣

Sirf candy ka advertisement hi naseeb mein 🤣

Ye shaku rani bhi ek dum item hai🤣