MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021- Page 19

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Posted: 5 years ago

Poor Neil but Mini is cute child like confused girl in character but this shaku babes is one irritating now😈 anyone would have reacted like mini here 🤣 too much babes is😈

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome anjali...

Ab neil bnegaa minu k guru🤣

Ye srf academics hi pdhayega yaa☺️

Can't wait...

Update soon😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Poor Neil but Mini is cute child like confused girl in character but this shaku babes is one irritating now😈 anyone would have reacted like mini here 🤣 too much babes is😈

Mini have given perfect name so only 🤣🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: su_94

Mini have given perfect name so only 🤣🤣

🤪🤪🤣🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Mini is slowly having feelings for Neil but Neil have long way to go 😆its not easy to win this jungli billi and melt her and shaku and saroj are really one hell irritating creatures🤣 I don't blame mini actually but Neil is stuck🤣 that's how it's supposed to be also😆 so Mini's hidden talent Neil bought out😆 he is always good in this🤣 sure he will get more skills, talent of Mini out now🤣🤣


Anjali last para last few lines ..He was searching for her in the whole house as he was worried she might have left the house again in anger.

This lines suppose to come before? By mistake you pasted there or its proper.?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautifully update 🤗

Or MiNeil ke bich ki aag bahut dhimi h🤣

So filhaal music ki hi class hogi🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: su_94

Singing music will bring them together this babes is really annoying now🤔

It will help Mini more. She will calm down a little and would be able to feel emotions in better way

Babes ko thoda aur jhelna padega...she will behave rationally after sometime😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Poor Neil but Mini is cute child like confused girl in character but this shaku babes is one irritating now😈 anyone would have reacted like mini here 🤣 too much babes is😈

Yeah poor neil but yahi to uske pyar ka test hai. Mini aa toh gayi life mein but sach mein uska pyar jeetne ke liye mehnat karni padegi

this is babes journey too...as in the journey of her and chorni's relationship and how they become mother and daughter

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Awesome anjali...

Ab neil bnegaa minu k guru🤣

Ye srf academics hi pdhayega yaa☺️

Can't wait...

Update soon😆

Neil toh sabkuch padhana chahta hai par Mini abhi padhai mein interested nahi hai🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Mini is slowly having feelings for Neil but Neil have long way to go 😆its not easy to win this jungli billi and melt her and shaku and saroj are really one hell irritating creatures🤣 I don't blame mini actually but Neil is stuck🤣 that's how it's supposed to be also😆 so Mini's hidden talent Neil bought out😆 he is always good in this🤣 sure he will get more skills, talent of Mini out now🤣🤣


Anjali last para last few lines ..He was searching for her in the whole house as he was worried she might have left the house again in anger.

This lines suppose to come before? By mistake you pasted there or its proper.?

Mini started realizing she can be freinds with neil like he said but she is very far away from love like feelings...biwi wali feelings to alien hai uske liye abhi....dheere dheere batti jalegi uski


last para lines were proper. it was neil's thought that he was searching for her in whole house and was thinking she left the house as she is hot headed and impulsive.

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