An Open FF! feel free to write!

Hey guys! whats up with every one?
well i've been wanting to start my own FF but im REALLY bad at writing! so i thought that maybe i could start off with a scene and then anyone can continue from where the last person left off! it would be really fun too!!! I'll Start! This FF is on all the DMG couples) write whatever you want!SORRY FOR MY HINDI< I'M REALLYYYY BAD AT IT!!!!!

(This is taken place when armaan and rhiddima are at Lonavala dancing and then ridz gets the phone call from anjali sayin they're not sisters.) (armaan doesnt know about ridz being adopted)
(they already confessed their loved to eachother a while back)

* if u want to write the confession scene u can use it as a flashback? gud idea?
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A-armaan r-rhidimma WM-watchman AN-anjali

WM- Rhidimma ji, aap ke liye ek phone mumbai se ayah hai
R-teekh hai tum jao mein abhi ati hoon.
WM-teekha hai ma'm.
(watchman leaves)
R-armaan mein abhi ati hoon ok?
A-ridhimma!
R-armaan.... mein abhi ati hoon
(ridhimma leaves to recieve the phone call)
(armaan goes behind her really quietly)
Ridhimma picks up the phone
R-hello?
AN-hello? ridz? (cries)
{meanwhile armaan is standing behind ridz and coming really closer... he puts his arms around her waist and holds her tightly and armaan rests his chin on ridhimma's shoulder}
R-ek minute di
(ridz covers the phone with her hand and says)
R- armaan chodo mujhe, me phone pe hoon
A-hmmmhmmm (denying matter)
R- (smiled) teekh hai
A- (gave a big smile)(kept on hugging her from the back)(kisses her neck)
R- hello di? kahiye kya hua? aur aap ro(cry) q rehe?
AN-ridz......(cries)..........(cries)........ridz hum dono behen nahi hai
R-kya???
AN-haan ridz ye sach hain.
(phoneline gets cut)
R-di? di? hello? hello????
WM-srry madam ye phone bhi na khabi khabi kaam nahi karta
(armaan gets worried and lets go of her)
R-(breaks down crying)
A-ridhima? ridhima? kya hua? or tum ro(cry) q rehe ho?
R- armaan di or mein behen nahin hai (crying hard)
A-KYA?
R-haan armaan
(armaan wraps his arms around ridz and ridzs hand lay on his chest)
(armaan kisses her on her forehead walks her inside)

HOW WAS IT? someone please continue!!!!

man it was that bad???!!!!! only 1 reply?

Hey its a good start..dont be discouraged by the number of views and the corresponding lack of comments..according to me, u shud have started from where they left off today's epi..like after the drunk ridz confesses...the point where u have started frm, in this ff...is like 3-4 months old and we already knw wat has hppnd after, so there's no surprise or anxiety or curiosity in knowing something that has already happened and critically analyzed by all of us, crazy DMG-ians 😆 ...hehe..i'm not trying to discourage you in any way...its a really good effot but i hope you get what i'm trying to say to you 😊

hey really great start u only continue pls its really excellent 👏 and so there wll not be any miss understandings betweeen AR thats great and ur hindi is perfect.
if u dont mine try to pm me after ur next part and try to make it long and plsssssssssssssssss continue soon

what a FF, yaar really awesome Ammy holding Ridz, when she was wearing red sari and he was wearing tht white kurta salwar.huuuuuuh too hot to handle 😛



Maleka/Love Ammy

Mind if I pick up where you left off?

After the phone call...

R: hum abhi nikalte hain...
A: abhi? isk waqt?
R: di ro rahi thi!
A: ro hi rahi tha na...aankhon ke liye kabhi kabhi acha hota hai...u kno, lubrication
Ridz glares at Armaan for his insensitivity.
R: hai bhagwan! mujshe kaise boyfriend se palla pada hai?! *wrings her hands dispairingly*
A: chalo rona thona band karo abhi n get our stuff *rolls his eyes*
They both get in the car and drive back...
Armaan and Ridz reach their mansion like house at the ungodly hour of 4am. Armaan rings the doorbell, which is so loud it can wake up the dead!
A: yeh doorbell hai yah khud tumhari behen ki awaaz??
R: tum khabi nahi sudro ke!
Angie comes to open the door...
AN: Ridz?! Tum yahan?! is waqt??!
R: Haan di, tum tik ho? Tum phone per ro rahi thi?!
AN: OH! woh! APRIL'S FOOL!
Ridz gapes with her mouth open!
AN: OMG Ridz! U idiot! tum sach mein samji ki hum behene nahi hai! OH GAWD! *rolls her eyes*
Armaan thinking to himself "Hai bhagwan kiss pagal prewar mein shaadi karne ki sooch raha hoon...(referring to Angie) Ek ka screw dhilla hai aur (referring to ridz) doosri ka hai hi nahi...agar mujshe isse shaadi karni hai, abhi se sochna band"
AN: chalo ab tum aa hi gayi ho to andar aa jaoo
R *angrily*: yeh kaisa mazaak hua?! tumne to mujshe dara hi diya tha!
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Shashank in his study...
Sh: Mein bahut hi smart hoon..haha *laughs* Angie ko April's Fool batakar un adoption papers ki asliyat chupa li *laughs some more n pats himself on the back*
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Nani in her room....
Nani *thinkin to herself* Acha hua ki maine jab Shashank ko adopt kiya to tabhi uske adoption papers destroy kar diye...use khabin pata nahi chalega *laughs n pats herself on the back*
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Ok, sorrie guys if I offended anyone with my take on the story....I cant sleep n well...my imagination is gettin wilder by the minute....enjoy! n if u dont like it, dont hate!