Mineil SS: "HOMECOMING" (Epilogue at pg-45 on 17.1.21)- Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: zalima

Paanch din saath rahenge..Iss dauraan kya hoga ? Phir Mohabbat karne chala ye dil

yeahhh ....

They: Dil sambhal ja zara..

But dil phir mobhabat krne chl jyegaaa...


Their iner tussle , cravings, hate,regret...ultimately love will prevail.

Reunion m actual reunion 😆

Edited by Khushi1311 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

I literally laughed 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Mujhe pta tha....mineilians k mind bhut sharp h...tmlg aysa sochoge hi😆

Main soch hi rhi thi kisi ne point out ni kiya avi tk🤣


🤣I read and sensed it ..I was like ☺️ then thought she wanted to taste lips 🤣 but I knew not so soon this will come

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Krithzz


🤣I read and sensed it ..I was like ☺️ then thought she wanted to taste lips 🤣 but I knew not so soon this will come

chaalu insaan😆..pura dimaag lga li🤣
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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Loved it Khushi

Awesome and interesting start 🙂

I really like the prologue difference of 8 years changed style changed look but what if feeling are changed

I really loved your ideas of welcome party & reunion after 8 years ... Neil & Mini were so much in ❤ love but what lead to their separation? 🤨

I loved how caring sweet & innocent both of them were but now both after a gap of 8 years have changed upside down ... Let's see their feelings for each other still persist

Do count me in & send me PM once you update

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Welcome back to your home🤗

Perfect title amazing story

Cant wait to read more about this mineil and their life story.

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Like this past and present times. Update soon next

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

He said no to Beer when Mini asked but now he himself into it ? and that line of Mini 🤣want to taste 🤣🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Khushi

Thanks🤗



Awesome and interesting start 🙂

Thanks....glad u liked it❤️🤗



I really like the prologue difference of 8 years changed style changed look but what if feeling are changed

Change is the only constant of life. Here they once gave up on their love easily out of their immaturity...life happened...they changed ...yet to see are feelings also changed ....if their stars collide together again... will it explode everything again or build a beautiful world out of dust.


I really loved your ideas of welcome party & reunion after 8 years ... Neil & Mini were so much in ❤ love but what lead to their separation? 🤨

loved how caring sweet & innocent both of them were but now both after a gap of 8 years have changed upside down ... Let's see their feelings for each other still persist


.Yeah...glad u noticed it all...this chapter was solely focussed on the changes they acquired with time. How they built a completely contrasting world when their world disrupted. First was welcome..freshers party where strangers meet and make memories. Second it's a reunion where strangers WITH memories meet.



Do count me in & send me PM once you update

Sure🤗

Continue soon 🙂

Will update tomorrow.

Edited by Khushi1311 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Welcome back to your home🤗

Thanks....

Perfect title amazing story

Glad u liked it...yeah pehle maine 'REUNION ' socha thaa but here Mineil will realise their home in each other and return just like birds return to their homes once winter ends. Eslie 'homecoming'😆

Cant wait to read more about this mineil and their life story.

Continue soon

Will update tomorrow surely🤗

Edited by Khushi1311 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: su_94

Like this past and present times. Update soon next

thanks ....glad u liked it...

Will update tomorrow

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