MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021 - Page 18

Originally posted by: zalima

Ya phir Jaani🤣

Jaani… hum tumhein maarenge☺️

aur zaroor maarenge😉

par bandook bhi hamari hogi🤣

goli bhi hamari hogi🤣

aur waqt bhi hamara hoga🤣

🤣 double meaning in MiNeil style here 🤣☺️

Jaani🤣

Originally posted by: Krithzz

🤣 double meaning in MiNeil style here 🤣☺️

Jaani🤣

Double nahi maine toh direct bola hai☺️🤣

Ye punishment time ka dialogues hai🤣

Originally posted by: zalima

Haan ..

Honey

Jaan

Jaanu

Ya phir Neilu🤣

Yaad hai woh initial days ka discussions 🤣

Neil ka background 🤣

Sex change hua hai🤣 nilu se Neil 🤣

Ya phir Jaani🤣

Jaani… hum tumhein maarenge☺️

aur zaroor maarenge😉

par bandook bhi hamari hogi🤣

goli bhi hamari hogi🤣

aur waqt bhi hamara hoga🤣

🤣🤣 Jaani takes the cake !☺️🤣

Originally posted by: zalima

Double nahi maine toh direct bola hai☺️🤣

Ye punishment time ka dialogues hai🤣

Mini has to say this dialogues☺️🤣🤣 Neil's expressions will be worth watching ☺️🤣

Originally posted by: zalima

Double nahi maine toh direct bola hai☺️🤣

Ye punishment time ka dialogues hai🤣

Omg☺️🔥🔥🤣🤣 Anjali ..all need punishment☺️

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Mini has to say this dialogues☺️🤣🤣 Neil's expressions will be worth watching ☺️🤣

☺️☺️ Mini will have all the pleasures 🤣 Neil will like the service🤣

Amazing💔

Saree☺️

Mini😆

Neil

Haaye loved it....

Update soon

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Amazing💔

Saree☺️

Mini😆

Neil

Haaye loved it....

Update soon

dhanyawaad evam abhaar😆

Part 6

Neil was sitting on the floor of his room not knowing what to do? His Minnu hated him. She was accusing him of ruining her life. He closed his eyes and caressed his head with his fingers as he was now having headache. The thought in itself was unbearable. He looked at the clock it was almost midnight now. He realised he was sitting there from few hours now. He suddenly remembered about Mini. She had gone out of the house and had not returned since then. Neil stood up up and rushed out of the house worrying for Mini.

Neil came out and he sighed in relief when he found Mini sitting on the swing in their lawn. He went near her. “Minnu, come inside its very late and its getting very cold here. You will fall sick.” Neil said as he placed a hand on Mini’s shoulder. She jerked away his hand, “Don’t touch me. Why do you keep touching me? I don’t like it.” Mini replied angrily. Neil’s heart broke down once again at her rude words. He wanted to say so many things but decided to let it go for now. “Ok, fine. I wont touch you if you don’t like. But please come inside. Its really late. You should sleep now otherwise you will catch cold.” Neil advised.

“Why you are so worried for me? Tumhe kya farak padta hai mujhe kuch bhi ho….agar meri itni fikar hoti toh mujhse yun bina meri marzi ke shadi nahi karte.” Mini taunted. Neil felt like there is no air to breathe suddenly. His Minnu blaming him for everything. “Minnu, I am sorry. I really didn’t know that you were not ready for this marriage. And mujhe farak padta hai…kyunki tum karo ya na karo lekin main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon. Mujhe tumhari fikar hai. Please andar chalo.” Neil requested.

Mini just shook her head in no. Neil sighed dejectedly. He gathered up courage and with great difficulty he could manage to speak, “Ok, if you hate me so much than I will not force you to stay in this marriage. I want your happiness. If you want, then we can file for the …..annulment of the marriage and….. you can go…go… back to your home.” Neil managed to say somehow even though it was hurting like hell.

“What do you think? My father would welcome me back so easily and happily? He was too obliged to say no to your proposal and when I will return back like this…he will get heart attack I am sure. And Naeem bi? She will scold me for eternity.” Mini answered. “Then what do you want me to do?” Neil asked now frustrated at everything. “Nothing, I want you to do nothing. Just leave me alone.” Mini replied back. “That I cant do. I cant leave you here like this. Please come inside Minnu.” Neil requested. Mini looked at him. Though she wanted to argue further but she saw genuine concern for her in his eyes. She stood up quietly and started going inside. Neil followed her.

They came inside their room. “If there is no other option for you then cant you give this marriage a chance? I understand you don’t love me but please try to not hate me at least. We can be friends if not husband and wife.” Neil asked hopefully. Mini saw in his eyes. The pain was clearly visible. The fact that he offered to break this marriage in spite of claiming that he loves her, just for her happiness had touched her heart somewhere and she realized he is not like everyone else who just throw their decision on her face and expect she will follow it without questioning. She averted her eyes immediately. She didn’t know why but she didn’t like seeing him in that state. His request, his pleading tone pulled some strings in her heart and even though she wanted to fight with him but couldn’t. She just nodded her head in yes and after a long time a small smile graced Neil’s lips. “Thank God! All is not lost. There still a hope in their relationship.” He sent silent prayer to God.

“Thank you Minnu. Come sleep now. Its already very late. ”Neil said. “I don’t want to share bed with you.” Mini replied getting nervous again thinking about the physical proximity. “But I wont fit on the couch and If maa or anyone else will come to know that I slept in other room then they will not like it and will say all sorts of things. And trust me, I will not touch you against your wish” Neil explained. “But….” Mini opened her mouth again to argue and Neil read her hesitation. “Ok, you sleep on bed I’ll take extra mattress and sleep on the floor.” Saying that, Neil took out extra mattress and made a temporary bed for himself. When Mini was sure that he slept off she finally came on bed lied down. “Ok, may be he is not that bad and may be we can become friends also like he said.” She thought and dozed off.

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Mini woke up in the morning. She yawned and was streching herself when she noticed Neil’s temporary bed was not there and Neil was also nowhere in the room. Just then he walked into the room. He was in his track suit and was sweating heavily. “Good morning Minnu.” Neil wished her. “Where do you went in the morning?” She inquired. “I went for jogging. I like to do some exercise in the morning. In Delhi also I used to go to gym or for playing football.” Neil answered.

Mini remembered her carefree days when she would sneak out with friends to play cricket in early morning or sometime they would go to river side just for a stroll. Neil saw her lost in thoughts. He swayed her hand in front of her eyes. “Hey, where are you lost?” he asked. “Nothing, I was missing my friends. We used to have lots of fun in the morning.” Mini replied.“Then why don’t you come with me in the morning from tomorrow. You can be with your friends.” Neil suggested. “Ya, like your maa will let me go and play with them.” Mini rolled her eyes. “She doesn’t have to know about it. You will come with me and I will say we are going for jogging together.” Neil gave an idea as he winked at her. “Sachhi? Kya ye ho sakta hai?” Mini asked excitedly. “Why not? Once I’ll finish I will pick you up and we will return together…nobody has to know anything.” Neil explained. “Wow! I can be with my friends again.” Mini chirped like some little birdie.

“I…I like your..dress….can…I….” Mini started nervously but couldn’t complete. Neil looked at his track suit and then at Mini. He remembered Mini likes to wear such comfortable clothes. “If you want we can go today for shopping and buy some of these for you also.” Neil replied guessing what she wanted to say. “Ok, we will go today itself. I will get rid of these sarees in the morning at least.” Mini smiled and agreed at once making Neil laugh at her child like excitement.

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Mini came down in the hall for breakfast. She was relieved to see everything was already made she doesn’t have to do anything in the kitchen today. She took a seat and looked at the table. “Poha, idli, omlette, toast…so many things were made. She realized she was very hungry. She took a plate and started to take small serving of all the things when Shakuntala stopped her. “Badtameez ho ye to pata tha par besabri bhi ho ye aaj dekh liya. Have some patience. At least Neil ko to aa jane do aur ye tumhara ghar nahi hai jaha jab mann aaya muh uthaye kuch bhi kar liya. Yaha ke kuch niyam kayde hain. Yaha sare family members ke aane ka wait kiya jata hai aur phir kuch bhi khane se pehle ek chhoti si prayer boli jati uske baad hi kuch kha sakte hain.”

“Oh, I didn’t know. I was very hungry so…” Mini tried to explain but Shakuntala taunted her, “How would you know? You are uncultured after all.” Saroj who has come to meet Shakuntala laughed at her comment. Mini gave her a sharp look. “Why are you laughing? And what are you even doing here? As far as I know you are not family. All the guest who came for wedding have left already but you are still here, how come?” Mini asked. “Shaku, did you hear it? Your daughter in law insulted me.” Saroj complained. “Ae ladki, Saroj meri friend hai. Wo jab chahe aa sakti hai mujhse milne. Who are you to question her?” Shakuntala asked. “Babes…if she is your friend then ask her not to irk me or else…” Mini warned. “Huh! Look at this little gundi. Threatening people here. What can I hope from uneducated jungli girl?” Saroj commented.

“Saroj aunty, mind your language please. You are talking about my wife.” Neil said. He had just come there and heard how Saroj insulted Mini. “What wrong I have said? Look at you, pursuing MBA and she didn’t even go to college. She is kinda uneducated when we compare her with you.” Saroj replied. “No you cant compare her with me and she is not uneducated. Every person has different interest and priorities. She has completed basic education and if she didn’t want to continue it and then its perfectly fine. You cant judge people on the basis of their mark sheet.” Neil argued.

“Neil, is the way to talk with elders?” Shakuntala asked. Neil saw the situation is going out of control. He didn’t want it. He knew nature of Saroj very well. She was one of those gossip loving aunty who enjoy creating scene just for the sake of entertainment so he didn’t want to give that satisfaction to her. “Sorry maa, sorry Saroj aunty. I didn’t mean to disrespect you but please don’t say any mean things about Minnu.”

Mini liked how Neil stood up for her in front of everyone while Shakuntala was shocked that her son disrespected her friend and defended this chorni but she didn’t want to say anything more and give chance to Mini to insult her and her friend even more so she just stayed quiet and decided to gulp down her insult. She was getting more and more influenced with Saroj now.

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Neil was in the balcony of the room when Mini came to call him. “Hey I am ready. Lets go for shopping.” She said excitedly. Neil was all lost in the thoughts. Though he had defended Mini but Saroj’s comment was still playing in his mind. “Hey! Lets go.” Mini shook him and he looked at her. “Minnu, why you didn’t take admission in college? Was there any financial problem with your father? If that’s the case then you can complete your graduation now.” Neil asked thinking that her father was just their employee after all.

“College! Me? Naaah…its not my cup of tea. School complete kar liya wahi bahut hai…wasie bhi mujhe na ye structured course, ye system where they just want you to mug up facts….I don’t believe in all this. I hated it. ” Mini gave the real reason. “But you didn’t do anything else also? Do you have some hobby or any interest which you would like to pursue?” Neil asked again. “I don’t know….I never thought so deeply..let it be na…I am fine just the way I am.” Mini shrugged. “But I was thinking soon I’ll be busy in my college then what will you do whole day? I think you should learn something or find something to keep yourself busy.” Neil suggested. “Baap re, maine itna kabhi apni life mein nahi socha.....you know Naeem bi says ki mujhe kya chahiye ye kabhi kabhi mujhe khud nahi pata hota.” Mini laughed. Neil also laughed with her. His confused, jhalli, childlike bride…his Minnu and he loved everything about her. “Lets go.” Mini said and Neil just followed her.

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They roamed around whole town shopping, eating street food and enjoying themselves whole day. Mini was seeing new side of Neil. She never thought he can be fun loving also. She didn’t miss her friends whole day while she was with him. It was only at night when they returned back home. Shakuntala saw them and ran to help her son. Neil was holding lots of shopping bags and was struggling to even walk straight while Mini was just walking ahead, smiling, lost in her own world. “Cant believe! This chorni is walking like some queen and my poor son is carrying her shopping bags like her slave.” Shakuntala thought and took some bags from Neil’s hands. In the process some bags fell down and Mini’s new shopping was all scattered on the floor. Shakuntala picked up few clothes. “You have brought all these? What is this? Jeans, shorts, payjamas, tops….you are now my daughter in law and I wont allow you to wear these clothes.” Shakuntala shouted on Mini.

“Chill Babes! I cant keep wearing sarees all day now. They are so uncomfortable.” Mini replied casually. “Neil, is ladki se behas karne ka koi fayda nahi par tumhe toh samajhna chahiye…ise ye sab dilwane ki kya jarurat thi?” Shakuntala asked. “Maa, all are decent clothes nothing objectionable and I don’t think there is anything wrong in wearing comfortable clothes.” Neil tried to make her understand. “Lekin hamara khandan, hamara rutba…beta hamare ghar ki aurtein is tarah ke kapde nahi pehenti.” Shakuntala made her point. “Maa, move on from these orthodox beliefs.” Neil reasoned. “Dekh rahi hoon jab se ye ladki is ghar mein aayi hai tab se tumhe meri har baat galat hi lagti hai.” Shakuntala taunted. “Its nothing like that…” Neil tried to explain but Shakuntala didn’t let her complete. “Bas bahut kar li apni manmaani tum dono ne. Ye ladki is tarah ke kapde nahi pehnegi bas.” Shakuntala declared and picked up all the shopping bags and handed over them to servants. “Take all of this. Tum logo ke bachho ke kaam aa jayenge.” She said and asked them to leave right now.

Mini just gasped and marched towards Neil in anger. “What were you saying? Maa is like coconut, she is tough from outside but soft like ice cream from inside….No you were lying. She is stone hearted. Why I have to make all the adjustments? Your life has not changed even a little bit but my whole life has turned upside down. Why am I supposed to change my way of living?” Mini started crying and ran into her room.

“Maa, Minnu to nadaan hai par aapko toh samajhdari se kaam lena chahiye tha. Kitne mann se wo shopping karke aayi thi aur aapne….why?”Neil asked in frustration and went from there while Shakuntala just stood there hurt from Neil’s behavior.

Mini cried for sometime in her room. “No matter how much I try to adjust here but that budhiya will never let me live my life peacefully.”She thought. Neil tried to talk to her and make her understand but Mini asked her to leave her alone. She was on her bed, playing with her phone when she heard something. She closed her eyes to concentrate. It was melodious song. In fact one of her favorite song. But it was not playing on some music system. It sounded like someone was singing it. Forgetting all her woes she followed the voice. She reached the terrace of the house. From here she could clearly hear the voice. She smiled as she concentrated on the song.

Hmm..hmm hmm hmm

Hmm..hmm dekho na

zara dekho na

Lost in the melody she didn’t realized when she startedsinging herself.

Tum ho main hoon

Aur ye tanhaaiyaan hai

Dekho na zara dekho na

Kaisi narm si ye

Parchhaaiyaan hai

Suno zara suno zara

Dhadkanon ki sada

Suno zara suno zara

Geet khaamoshi ka

Suno zara suno zara

Kehti hai raat kya

She was now singing loudly without a care in the world. She seemed genuinely happy now. She had totally forgotten that she was crying and sulking sometime back. Once she finished she opened her eyes and turned around to go down when she found Neil looking at her in amusement.

“Wow! Minnu, that was lovely. Have you learned singing?” Neil couldn’t help but ask. Mini was surprised for few seconds. No one had ever paid attention to her singing and asked this question. “No, I didn’t learn I just like to sing sometimes and it was …it was one of my favourite song.” Mini replied. “Minnu you were awesome…hey! mil gaya.” Neil exclaimed. “What?” Mini asked in confusion. “Tumhara talent, tumhara interest. Tumhe pata hai jab tum gaa rahi thi na…you were at peace. There was a blissful smile on your face. You really haven’t thought of taking proper classes?” Neil asked. “I…I just enjoy singing…I heard the song and came here….it looks like some kind of get together is going on at some distance.” Mini pointed her finger where a canopy was set up and festive lights were visible. “I just closed my eyes and….I never thought I am good at it.” Mini answered honestly. “Good? You were fantastic. I am sure you will be awesome if you learn it properly. And most importantly, it makes you happy.” Neil said.

“I think we should get you a proper teacher.” Neil suggested. “Are you sure? I mean it would be great if I…you really think I am that good?” Mini asked still in doubt. He was the very first person to praise her talent or else people always neglected it. “Yes, I am sure. Tomorrow, first thing in the morning I am searching a teacher for you.” Neil promised and noticed the shine in Mini’s eyes. He was happy to fulfill her wish and moreover he had noticed how this talent of hers had calmed her down. He was searching for her in the whole house as he was worried she might have left the house again in anger. May be music can bring the much needed stability and calmness in her otherwise impulsive and restless wife.

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to be continued....

Singing music will bring them together this babes is really annoying now🤔